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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: ImpetuousSoul

This got me all emotional 😭😭😭😭 Beautiful ā¤ Kuhu needed this reality check big time and its high time Kunal starts walking on the path of redemption. MishBir's convo was the best. And the way you have put it across revealling about her past....couldn't have been better. Looking forward to read more from you šŸ’™

~ Toree.


Awww Toreee!!! I am glad you liked it so much! And yes, Kuhu needs a reality check. Also, my moto was also more on shedding light on the tension filled relationship of Mishti and Kuhu!! Their relationship isn't just plain black or white. its a complicated one, with layers and confusing one too. I just tried to shed light on why it is the way it is!

Ahhh!! thanks for the encouragement. I will surely do something if I can come up with an idea!! Thanks again for reading!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: MishBirStruck

Wow wow wow

Such a beautiful one shot

Loved it to the core

Abir giving it to kuhu and kunal šŸ‘šŸ¼šŸ‘šŸ¼

The whole mishbir conversation šŸ¤—ā¤ļø

Beautifully written šŸ‘

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I am glad you liked it!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikki_love

Doo ajeeb loogon me ek gazab Kahani...! Beautifully written.

Abir finally having that much needed convo with KUKU...

Mishti sharing her past and rightly Abir's entry into her life and hers into his...so so well said....so emotional...loved every word.

Thank you so much for reading and leaving such kind words. I am glad you liked it.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: fangirl1012

This is beyond amazing. Especially that #MishBir conversation. Like I said before it's so beautiful it made me tear up. Thank you so much for showing us Mishti's past & how its affected her in such a splendid manner. Good job once againšŸ¤—


Thanks Zaara!! And thank you for encouraging me to post it. You know it would have been hiding somewhere had you not pushed me for posting it!


Thanks again for reading and commenting!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: DMGThings

oh my freaking shiz gods! wowowowow!! this was so so so good. i am in absolute awe of you. the way you've penned this down! hats off!! absolutely amazing.

right from abir taking a stand for mishti in front of kuku to mishti telling him about her past to him telling her she's his sukoon, everything was perfect. i love it! thank you for writing this!! <3

Thank you so much!! Your words are kind. I am glad you could connect with the words and emotions. I was little skeptical whether it was up to the mark or not!

And you are most welcome. I just felt like the reason behind the confusing relationship between Mishti and Kuhu was needed to be addressed and I tried my bit with a twist!

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: meen123

Wow dear

What a piece

I'd love that kind of talk on the show

You did capture them well.


Thank you for reading and commenting! :)

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jayati321

This is just fantastic. Very very well written.

I so want to see Abir giving back to Kunal and Kuhu. Just hope makers will show something like this in our show.

I loved Mishbir conversation. It made me emotional. Also thank you for highlighting Mishti's past life.I was unaware of it as i haven't seen the parent show.

Keep writing dear.

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

With the makers, I think I get where they are coming from. They have so much content to show in that 22 mins time frame that they need to be selective of the scenes they can write and show and plus the constant pressure with the ratings.

I just felt like writing this scene and sharing my perspective on what I think makers are trying to show with Kuhu and Mishti relationship and why it is the way it is!! Not sure if it really made sense!

But I am glad you liked it <3

I will definitely come up with something and post it if i can!

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Welcome dearšŸ¤—
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Posted: 5 years ago
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I loved the Mishbir conversation Shona. I didn't know you followed YRKKH before or did you do your homework for this? You even got the "bhaiyyu" for Naksh right.

I always knew where Kuhu's immense dislike for Mish and her spite came from. Being annoyed with a roommate that constantly cried or the one that took away the attention she craved for from her grandparents. All that I already understood and of course I could excuse her for. Which child doesn't get affected by another intruding her life like that? But the makers took it too far by creating a bully out of Kuhu. What Kuhu does is not as simple as just a kid being jealous or spiteful. She's a fully grown-up adult now. She constantly and deliberately taunts and hurls abuses at Mishti knowing fully well she gets hurt by it. Especially when she gets jealous over Mishti actually achieving something that is worth being praised for. This isn't a simple sibling rivalry or jealousy. Kuhu needs help. This has gone way beyond fixing. She can't stand Mishti getting anything better than her and that's seriously alarming. If this were real life, I would have definitely asked this person to get mental help. Mishti doesn't deserve that kind of punishment all her life for just being a kid who lost her parents. This is why it's hard for me to feel anything close to sympathy for the spoilt brat that Kuhu is. I won't and will never forgive her for what she turned Mish into after being her best friend. I can't forgive her until she redeems herself truly and completely. Right now, I don't feel anything but dislike for that character. I have seen up and close what Verbal abuse does to people and I cannot and will not take it lightly on the show or anywhere else for that matter.

So no, I'm not forgiving that character anytime soon and refuse to forgive her for any reason she might have to dislike Mishti. Disliking or hating someone is completely okay. What isn't is abusing them on a daily basis which is what Kuhu's biggest offense has been till date. Not even that Dahi handi incident comes close to how awful she's been with the constant and deliberate abuse she hurls at the girl who wishes nothing but the best for her and that family.

OMG so sorry, this is just how strongly I feel for the issue so forgive me for going so far off topic.

The way Abir ensured he got Kuhu to apologize for what she said to Mishti by bringing the truth in front of her was nicely done and I really liked reading that part. I liked how you brought up the issues that might have caused Kuhu to grow tired of Mishti as well, including Jasmeet. That was nicely done as well. I liked reading it so thank you for writing it Shona. šŸ¤—

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