Foreshadowing or lost narrative/plot?

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Hello my IF family. I know I was gone for a long period And so good to log in today.

Its my sweet friend Meher's Birthday! Hurrahh!! Have the best of everything Birthday Girl! 🥳


A short review of today's Epi date- 22nd Dec.

The epi starts with Akshu telling Neil n Abhi that Jharu is back to being pregnant!

How that happens I dont know coz Neil refused to sleep with her since Shivu's birthday. And sperms stay alive for only 24hrs in female body. sorry if you find this gross. But I have to be clear coz ovulation days are not random.

Unlike ITV everything else in the world happens at a certain frequency, rhythm, count and organized system.


Moving on-

-Neil wants the baby, not jharu and is willing to live with her but not accept her.

MJ is worried for Jharu's who stands with a tense face.

But neil comes and all seems well once he asks jharu to join him at Puja.

He does try to show some attitude but quickly feeds cake to jharu when told by nishtha.

Similarly, Jharu dresses as Santa is enough for Neil to turn soft on her.

What kind of anger is this?

He is so mad at Abhi that he can hit, he is so insensitive to Akshara that he insults her repeatedly in front of family.

But for Jharu it took wearing a Santa dress to pacify him.


During Puja-

MJ says this Puja is for Neil-Jharu-Baby. I dearly feel there should have been one honorary mention of #AbhiRa since they are the high risk pregnancy in the house with twins.

Also because Abhi was conducting the Puja ceremony and he a new to-be father.


Manjari, not my cup of tea so maybe I dig on her intentions more closely. But she has completely forgotten who is her son.

- She thinks Akshu is jealous of Jharu.

- She thinks Ak is upset with Neil so she is not helping in celebrating his Birthday.

- She knows Akshu is high risk pregnancy but expects her to arrange for the puja also scolds her for not arranging for coconut n milk.


Writers are extremely ignorant on most of the topics they are writing about- music therapy, career growth of women, DV, Divorce, Anxiety, high risk pregnancy... Nothing has been handled delicately.


Anyways from Raita mata actions it is being shown thats she will soon blame Akshara for all the hardships that are going to fall on Birla House.


Then the gifting to stars decorative ornaments by #abhira to each other!!

Are they little babies giving ceramic tree hangings?

At least could have been a star hairpin or a pendant for Ak and a Star tie pin or shirt cuffs for Abhi. Stars come in loads of shapes n forms for children as well as adults.

More importantly, this is a major foreshadowing that something extremely shocking is coming our ways. Every time they have separated the bracelet brought them closer.

This time its gifting of stars foreshadowing the need to remember each other through faraway stars-

In Abhi's words - that stars guide us protect u, just like I do for you.

Separation of some kind is coming up - Aasmaan mein star ko dekho ya is star ko dekho to samajh jana mein tumhe dekh raha hun. (Why would he say such heavy words while gifting something on xmas morning?)

They are hard dialogues, loaded words and pregnant with predictions.

Does any of this make sense to you?

charac of mj, Neil, aarohi are what I am looking here.

#abhira will always be special topics discussed separate from side ones.


So finally Akshu-Jharu preggos

Neil gets into a goon violence- is he dead or goes into coma.

Something may happen to Akshu too cause Abhi has a premonition holding his heart only when Akshu is concerned.


I wrote after age so plz overlook my faults.

You can connect with me on twitter- @itsMini19


plz do leave your comments I am looking forward to hear your opinion.

Meher waiting to hear from you

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Wonderful writeup Mini. Welcome back. What you wrote is everyone's wishes but we keep quiet on daily basis 😜. But we kick manjari we csnt accept her anytime . She says something which we can't connect that's her dumbness. And abhira are in their lala land all time wanting family to be together.The result of trp shows their pathetic writing . Neil seems to be out of Ar clutches. But her pregnancy is what cvs wanted first so that we accept her and her pregnancy in story. It's always force fit into abhira . So Ar is that way inserted in between abhira and around abhira the gale ka phasa. They don't want her to throw away which we like. Whenever they touch her trp dips down again with abhira they cover that points. This is the nonsense from manju accident time going on. Abhira shadi is hijacked by Ar accident to Manju. Till now she hijacked Everything. When it comes to her it's silver plate and birla white cement all-time. Neil and Ak i am waiting . Because a child trafficking track during naira pregnancy of ak done so it's a repeat i feel .but result we need to wait. pH has no proper investment now on this show. I personally want this show to end on happy note. If they take S4 also same situation of repeat rinse dry formula. My doubt is Neil and Ar are not shown doing anything after shadi. Like their shadi , pregnancy is also a Hush 🤫

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Most importantly d gifts r for short or next executing track

Bracelets in d picnic help abhi to find her in d forest

And in d similar way these stars r a sign for her to stay strong until he comes and save during d child trafficking track

Regarding Neil I don’t think he will die or in coma

If he is not there again Jharu will be in vamp mode and there won’t be any redemption for her. Her regret didn’t last not even for a day. Such a silly thing this would be.

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Meher

I couldn’t get ur last line

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Originally posted by: Dewdrops1995

Meher

I couldn’t get ur last line

their first night they showed neil sleeping and Ar machar maro.wjere did they show anything that they are intimate to be pregnant. Their shadi too not even a bit shown tying mangalsutra or giving sindoor. Neirohi is in force fit of abhira always. We need to bear them as plus minus along with Manju flipping harshali to Neirohi and neirohi to Harshali. These five drag the limped story.
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I got it

Even their pregnancy is forcefit

I hope makers and atleast neirohi know how they became pregnant because I couldn’t get this science

Runaway marriage

Reception-pregnancy

Fake pregnancy

pregnancy

What d hell is thiss😂🤣😡

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Originally posted by: Dewdrops1995

I got it

Even their pregnancy is forcefit

I hope makers and atleast neirohi know how they became pregnant because I couldn’t get this science

Runaway marriage

Reception-pregnancy

Fake pregnancy pregnancy

What d hell is thiss😂🤣😡

They could have hooked before only we should understand. She wants first in everything but becomes zero as usual. They don't invest anything on them any extra scene also. Their kid too Suryaputra Karan immediately comes out without any nonsense. That's their story design and their deep rooted love story which we need to accept as nonsense.
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I am trying to maintain positivity. I didn't think the episode was so bad. But this Neirohi stuff I don't know where to even start 🤦‍♀️ We knew they would end up together but the writing has been so bad they doubled down on the gray and negative characters that there is no scope of feelings or redemption. We just now have to deal with the unwanted Arohi and her nonsense and Neil being turned into a dumb character. There is no love story between them just 2 actors told to read lines that they care about each other and are having a baby 🤣


I do find it interesting Neil’s "angry" outbursts. The Harshvardhan in him but yet not as powerful as Abhi more like a hurricane that destroys everything not caring who gets hurt. Abhi has gotten hurt twice by Neil during his "fits of rage". Once being pushed into the side table in the living room and this time scratched by the baby toy. Wonder if writers would ever go there with him accidentally hurting a female character just for drama 🤔 Though Neil has been shown to be more of a push over too so he seems to forgive easily hence it looks like he is softening to Arohi again.


Abhira and their gift giving and dialogues to trigger warnings in our heads about drama, separation, fight, etc 🤣 it is what it is. We don't know what the extent will be until the episode airs. I am not too concern. I think Neil will live and be fine. Akshu will get out of it and just get blamed by Manjari.


The Abhira domestic romance scenes are just so well done. Whatever the writers give to Harshad and Pranali they just do justice depsite any illogical and nonsense in those dialogues and writings. They are the only reason this show is still going. Most of the time people say this cause cause the actors happen to be their favs but in this case it is literally the truth. They have a fine cast of veteran actors that they don't utilize properly. They have side characters like Parth, Shefali, Kairav, and Nishtha that have great potential for more tracks but they get sidelined for Neirohi nonsense.


Can we take a moment to appreciate the fun scene between Abhi and Shivu? So rare for light hearted moments. Abhi reindeer is the best!

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Posted: 2 years ago
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I so love you response dear,

So I watched today's episode and the way Abhi was holding on to Akshu almost made me cry if not for my son sitting next to me doing his excercise book.

And you are so right about Neil. last epi he was not ready to look at Aarohi if not for her being preg. and today he was like lets give our 100% for the child inside you chipkali.

He actually said forgive n forget made me puke. I am so mad at the bad writing that had created weak characters with illogical response n timing.

About the other characters it is so true... other than Mj n sometime BP no everyone is a no one.

Eg. Today Shefali brought fruits for Akshu so why not site down together and share a bit and talk about being working woman in BIrla House how Ak is missing the charity coz of her promise to Abhi which pretty obvious she will break in tomorrow's episode.

Shefali got the fruits and vanished like a house help. So pathetic what is this growth in the relationships among characters within a family.

Why is this series names YRKKH?

Its brings such bad blood towards Neil n chipkali.


ps- so good to hear from you. once again your response is lovely.

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Neil completely forgiven jharu like in 1 day. SHe becomes santa and she is off the hook. Even ABhi the way he looks at her is of indifference mixed with family member feel. It pisses me off.

Only Akshu suddenly is the one who seems on alert.

Today Abhi almost had a meltdown leaving Akshu it was beautiful and their soul connection is kinda back.

They give n take too many promises and like everything they have done never stay on track. Promises are broken n kaand happens.

Today Shefali was shown for a millisecond. I feel so bad. Why not a tiny scene of SiLs sitting n having a heart to heart talk?

This JharuNeil story no one needs but forcefully shoved at us.

How much can we curse?

Although I am waiting for the kidnapping or injury scene of Akshu. And what Abhi does next. But not comfortable that its happening when she is high risk preg with twins... Such a crazy medical condition n the lady is out of the house when told by MIL n Husband not to.

Kaand to zaroori hai.

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