Breaking Free - FS (Completed-Epilogue) - Page 2

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: anuandavi

Lovely... Did Akshara 's call get connected... Abhimanyu ne saari baatein sun li kya


Nahi yaar! She was just tricking Arohi, she wasn’t going to call him in the first place. Abhira MU will get cleared face to face.💕

thank you💕

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Loved it 😍 waiting for next part,pls continue soon 💕💕

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Posted: 3 years ago
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OMG how did I miss this?


This is so good. I loved how emotional it was for both Akshara and Kairav. I like that your Kairav is sensible than the Kairav in the show.


I can not wait for Abhi and Askhu's conversation.


You are a fabulous writer. You write emotion so beautifully.


Update soon and tag me please.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues

OMG how did I miss this?


This is so good. I loved how emotional it was for both Akshara and Kairav. I like that your Kairav is sensible than the Kairav in the show.


I can not wait for Abhi and Askhu's conversation.


You are a fabulous writer. You write emotion so beautifully.


Update soon and tag me please.


Thank you for the super sweet comment! I can’t stand Kairav right now either😓 I’ve started the next part already but we’ll see when I’m happy with it😁

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Heyy!!

Thank God I found this story.. it is so well written! Your portrayal of Akshara and Kairav's emotions was amazing. Hats off 👏. And, thank God our Kairav here is sensible, talks and gives advice as he should. Not worrying about who he's siding with, but actually giving correct advice.

And I loved how Akshu got the truth out :') loved her avatar. Can't wait for Abhi and Akshu to meet.


You're a fab writer, and I'm eagerly waiting for the next part ❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: sheet_leher

Heyy!!

Thank God I found this story.. it is so well written! Your portrayal of Akshara and Kairav's emotions was amazing. Hats off 👏. And, thank God our Kairav here is sensible, talks and gives advice as he should. Not worrying about who he's siding with, but actually giving correct advice.

And I loved how Akshu got the truth out :') loved her avatar. Can't wait for Abhi and Akshu to meet.


You're a fab writer, and I'm eagerly waiting for the next part ❤️❤️


Thank you so much!! Your comments are very appreciated and I’m glad you like my version of the characters💕💕 next part up in a bit🥰🥰

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Heyy everyone decided to split part 3 aka the reunion scene in half as it was reaching 4000+ words😅 so here's the first and shorter part of our Abhira reunion. Hope I was able to do it justice.

Also side note- I couldn't make Harshvardhan as terrible as he was in the show. I needed him to be decent and only hate Akshara because she broke his sons heart😄

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"Kaise manau, kaise manau...kya karu Abhimanyu ke liye ke woh sara dard bhool jaye? Uff kuch dimag mein hi nahi aaraha" Akshara mumbled as she unravelled her Mummas bike.

Waah Akshu, jab Abhimanyu se as a jhoot bolna hota hai toh fatafat dimag ideas se bhar jata hai par abhi khali kyun hai, she thought to herself.

As she kept running here and there preparing to leave, Harshvardan decided to do something to give his son and future daughter in law time to clear all misunderstandings. And for the first time ever, he called Neil.

"Neil, ghar mein sabko bolna ki apne apne rooms se na nikle. Aur tum gate per tayar rehna. Akshara arahi hai Abhimanyu se baat karne." Harsh demanded and hung up before Neil could utter a word. There was a few things he had to do before heading home and hopefully seeing a very happy Abhimanyu.

"Akshuuu!"

Akshara turned, almost falling to see Vansh bhaiya racing towards her with her guitar and all of a sudden she remembered her own words.

"Maan ka jo meet hai mere liye woh sangeet hai..."

Her music had always been a connecting thread between the two and today she had every intention to strengthen that thread into lifelong handcuffs, so what better way than with her music?

She yelled out excitedly "Thank you Vansh bhaiya!", hugged Vansh, grabbed her guitar and finally rolled out.

Meanwhile at the Birla Mansion, Abhimanyu was still in shock over the days happenings. Hours later, now that he'd had time to think, his anger had turned into confusion.

He knew in his heart that Akshara was not the type to walk away, leaving someone in a burning building. She didn't love him, fine. She'd broken his heart multiple times, he accepted that too. But he couldn't be so wrong in judging her character.

Something was wrong, he could feel it in his gut and his heart refused to believe his Akshara could be so heartless. And so as a moth to a flame, once again Abhimanyu decided to call Akshara. He realized that nowadays their every conversation ended with his heart in pieces but how could he not call her? Even if she had left, he had to at least make sure that she had left the fiery scene unscathed.

He paced as the phone continued to ring. Why isn't she picking up? As the seconds passed he grew more and more concerned.

Akshara grumbled while speeding past a couple of cars. Abhimanyu ko abhi call karna tha kya? She thought. Should she stop and pick up or leave it and get their faster? As she continued to debate, the called ended only to ring again a few seconds later.

Uuff she thought as she steered to the side and put the bike brake on.

"Hello, Abhimanyu" she said and without waiting for his replied she continued.

"Suno main bahooot zaroori kaam ke liye kahi jha rahi hu toh please main tumse thori dher mein baat karti hu" she rushed out, hung up and continued on her journey. The faster she could reach him the better.

Abhimanyu could not believe she had just hung up on him without even listening to him. Aisi kaunsi zaroori kaam ke liye jha rahi thi ki theek se baat tak nahi ki. His mind kept coming up with random scenarios and all he could think was hopefully she was not in trouble.

He could feel his anger growing again as he realized she didn't even care to ask about his health and here he was dying to know about hers. Restlessly, he decided to put on his life saving headphones and do some work, anything to distract himself from the growing concern and anger he was feeling for the only girl who'd ever have his heart.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Yahan cliffhanger pe chhod diya. It's such a beautiful story. Please continue soon.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Dimaag ki batti jali...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: anuandavi

Dimaag ki batti jali...


Thori roshni hum par bhi daliye😂

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