My first Naksh ff#Zindagi do pal ki # part14/44pg - Page 5

nice part nidhi...again a good part...akshara is frustrated with her mom and dadi...
hope dono use samjhenge...
ritutaj in new role in this ff...I like it...
he is sweet and caring friend of akshara...its nice to read...
hope apne hero ki entry jaldi ho...aur ak ki life happy ho jaye..
update next part soon..

Originally posted by: ruchinaksh

But pls long parts likho na..nidhi ..its a request. .

Nxt time I'll try to write long part 😊
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Originally posted by: hirannaksh

nice part nidhi...again a good part...akshara is frustrated with her mom and dadi...
hope dono use samjhenge...
ritutaj in new role in this ff...I like it...
he is sweet and caring friend of akshara...its nice to read...
hope apne hero ki entry jaldi ho...aur ak ki life happy ho jaye..
update next part soon..

Thanks a lot sonal , yup rr in new role . ak ki frustration bhi correct hai don't worry she'll be happy . hero bhi entry marega
Yup, I'll update soon

ye kya hain huh badi shauk hain badiii si parts read karne ki but u updating chotu se chotu part huh...

Nyccc part well done...Plz cont next part soon

Originally posted by: --pranu--

ye kya hain huh badi shauk hain badiii si parts read karne ki but u updating chotu se chotu part huh...

update long its dhamki not request ...

coming to part it was nice a different essence of dadi nd dev...

ak nd rr ki frndship and ak got job woww...

looking ahead seriously it ws nice story

Thnx a lottt for comments. Dadi and dev is different ... Good you liked it Abhi toh story shuru hui hai . hope i can live up to all of yours expectations.

Originally posted by: sameera_naksh

Nyccc part well done...Plz cont next part soon

Thnku sameera . will update soon

Originally posted by: Nairaksh

Nxt time I'll try to write long part 😊
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Try nhi likho ... 😃 ..i m enjoying dis story nidhi...Waiting for next part 😃

once again a nice part nidhi... rr and akshara is friend hmm and they getting job is nice.. but poor akshara because of dev and Dadi fight she was always in tension. .. hope dono ki fight jaldi khatm ho wrote next part soon m waiting

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

once again a nice part nidhi... rr and akshara is friend hmm and they getting job is nice..but poor akshara because of dev and Dadi fight she was always in tension. .. hope dono ki fight jaldi khatm howrote next part soon m waiting

Thanku pragu for your lovely comment , don't worry ak will be fine . will update soon