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Posted: 8 years ago
ak-nk aap gussa kyo h kate kate se kyo hai bataiye na.. mujhse koi galti ho gai hmm plz tell..
nk-i dont know.. mujhe nhi pata main jab unhe dekhta hu na kuch galt sa lagta hain.. beti ki care but jamai ki nhi kyo beti ka hath pakda mera nhi.. maine socha tha surprise dunga apko maine toh ghar pe sab taiyari kar li thi par sayad pehla bdy bhi nhi mana pauga.. my bad luck..
ak-hum party main enjoy karege kal..
nk-mujhe yaha aacha nhi lag raha essa lag raha mano main bikhari hu jaise bhut chota hu mera ghar chota h par gutan nhi h yeh bhut ajib h. . kal rat ko hi m nikal jauga yaha se aap jaiye apne new dress lijiye go..
ak-nk. some girls came. . ak went.. in hull..
vis-ekdom pyari dress honi chahiye hamari beti ki princess jaisi.. kimat koi bhi ho taiyari puri honi chahiye.. shorya varsha beta aap dono bhi chun lijiye.. are ak beta nk kaha hain woh bhi lele..
here in room.. nk was thinking... ak hug to him..
ak-kya ho raha kya soch rahe..
nk-kuch nhi aap bataiye ho gai dress final..
ak-hmm ho gai meri dress final.. amm kya khayege aap..
nk-kuch bhi nhi bhook nhi mujhe..
ak-are main toh apko dikhna hi bhool gai.. meri dress.. rukiye.. itni sundar h usse pehen ke rajkumari nhi main toh maharani lagugi even alki dress bhi li..
nk-mujhe nhi pehnni usse.. main apni shadi wali dress pehen lunga..
ak-wat.. ok.. see meri dress.. nk was not interested.. suddenly he sees saree which he brought..
nk-yeh saree waaw.. kitni pyari hain.. happy.. yeh pehnegi..
ak-bilkul jo chiz mere hubby ko aachi lagegi woh mujhe bhi bayegi.. hug to him.. maine kaha mere liye iska mol lakho se jayada h apki bhi wahi dress lai.. hum garib nhi pyar h sab h.. hum khud ko nhi badlege mere pati ka jitna diya hua h is sone se kahi jayada grabbed his hand.. rubbed her nose with nk..
nk-i really love u.. u r not lucky m lucky.. sach..
ak-aap hase toh.. aaiye kuch kha lijiye.. chaliye dinner pe..
nk-aata hu aap chaliye phir.. ak went. . nk called to someone.. he went in hull.. sat in table..
vis-aaiye beta aap kha lijiye..
nk-hmm.. didi aapne. .
va-haa maine hi banaya h. .
vis-hamari beti hamare pass baith ke khayegi.. aaiye.. ak sees to nk he said ok.. vis feed to ak.. aap kush hain n..
ak-bhut.. nk hai hi itne aache..
vis-aap bhi toh. . kal bas thodi der main apka pyara aur bada bdy hoga. hum wait kar rahe is pal ka kabse..
nk-woh main kha liya.. ak aap bat kariye main aata hu.. ok.. mera ho gya dinner bye.. nk was going.. suddenly he slipped from stair lill.. aauchh in low voice.. ak didn't hear.. bach gya yeh kya h pagal log h yeh gila karke rakhte h kya siddi main stupid.. he went in room... after sometimes ak talked with vis..
ak-mujhe nind aa rahi nk ko bhut der ho gai main sone jau..
vis-hmm.. ak went in room.. it was so dark.. nk..
ak-mujhe kuch nhi dikh raha.. nk switch on power...
room was decorated with roses nd aks old pics..
ak-are yeh sab aapne kiya..
nk-thodi der bad kisi ka pyara bdy hain.. kisses on her cheeks.. gave rose.. yeh na hamara ghar h na pyar karne ki jagah.. so aaj apko chura ke le jauga main..
ak-matlb.. nk took to ak in his arms.. beg lijiye..
ak-yeh kya..
nk-gabraiye mat apka hi pati hu.. she took to beg.. nk took to ak back side.. der was rope of clothes.. aaiye uthar ke niche..
ak-kya.
nk-u want bdy surprise with me.. pehla bdy toh main hi manauga apke sath kyo.. aaiye.. dey went down from rope..
ab aiye mere sath.. dey sat in van.. now nk blindfolded aks eyes..
ak-mujhe kuch nhi dikh raha.. he stopped to van.. dhayan se aaiye ak.. dey were walking..
nk opened blindfold..
ak sees one place.. it was open but one hut was der..
nk-main chahta hu aap apna bdy rajkumari nhi balki jaisa main hu jaha se hu waisa mehsus kare.. aaiye.. sari taiyari ghar se yaha sift kar di bas 10 minutes main apka bdy hoga..
aaiye.. rukiye... nk took beg..he took flowers nd shower on aks way..
nk-aaiye.. held her hand.. ak got happy so much.. nk kisses on her cheeks. .
har kadam pe ek kiss.. she was taking step nd nk was giving kisses to ak. .
ak-tqq.. dey went near of hut door... ab..
nk-ab aapka wlcm hain yaha... aaiye andar.. she was on door she opened to nk.. suddenly some heart shaped small cards running on her... wer wrote i love u..
ak was rounding nd enjoying it.. waaw..
nk-nk sat in his knees... wlcm meri pyari ak.. gave heart shaped photo frame to ak wer was naksh pic..
ak-thanku thanku so much loved it.. she was coming close of nk but he stopped. .
nk-pehle yeh pehen lijiye waha hamare yaha gaw main esse hi chadar hoti h uske piche badal lijiye..
ak-hmm.. she went nd changed to cloth.. it was dark nd nk burnt candle everywer.. ak came. she wear lehnga upto knees nd blouse like village girl made choti also nath nd mangtika payal. .
nk-nk was admiring to her... meri gaw ki chori.. he was taking step nd counting 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1.. happy bdy to u happy bdy to u happy bdy dear ak held her hand.. happy bdy to u.. may god bless u. . ur every dreams comes true happy bdy happy bdy.. happy bdy my ak.. kissed on her lips nd grabbed tighter to her.. ak closed to eyes nd was feeling this moment..
so much.. nk was running his lips on her.. she was enjoying this soft touch.. now he want to give different touch to ak so he pulled her lips a little not hard.. nd start shacking it.. ak can feel his lawa on her lips.. he apart from her.. but pinned his nose with her nose..
nk-main chahta hu yeh ehsas apke rom rom main bas jaye jo maine diya sabse pehle bdy wish karna tha mujhe apko gussa dikhana nhi apko pyar se gale lagana god kare apko bhut lambi umar mile..
ak-hamare pyar ko nk.. hamare pyar ko..
nk-now cake cutting.. nk sat cake on table. it was princess wali cake.. ak nk cut it.. happy bdy to u. . ak cut it. happy bdy to u..
ak was feeding to nk but he took it nd put all over in her face.. on nose on cheeks on lips..
ak-nk kha toh lete..
nk-i will have.. grabbed aks belly nd pulled close to ak.. shacked aks cheeks yum.. now its time for shacked aks cheeks. her heart beat skipped a little.. har bar kuch naya lagta hain kyo ak..
ak-pata nhi nk apka har touch alg hain kuch toh alg hain.
he moves near of her lips nd start sucking it.. suck all cake from toungue ak was breathing heavily. . nk bite her lips nd she opened her mouth.. nk entered his toungue inside aks mouth.. touched her toungue nd gave taste of sweet.. it was new touch for ak... but it was so passionate kiss for her still she want to taste it completely. .. nk took managalsustra nd wore to ak.. it was new because in pendent of managalsustra wrote natik words..
it was beautiful but new also.. he broke kiss.. ak was still same..
nk-mere pyar ka nam aur pyare se words apke dil ke karib rahege ak always..
ak touched to manalsutra..
ak-it is so beautiful gift for me nk thanku so much..
nk-mujhe pata hi nhi tha but socha apko apne latter wala kuch du mere pyar ka nisan hain na.
u know gaw main esse hi candle hoti hain nd bed nhi dry grass hoti hain but i changed somthing now aap kud dance karegi.. he took to ak nd stood to her on ice bugs.. she starts dancing due to cool..
ak-thanda nk so much..
nk-laugh.. just feel it he also stood der... dey grabbed eachs hand.. just feel.. cool nhi hot hoga thodi der main.. dey taking moves.. ak now starts enjoying cool.. she put her feet on nks feet..
dey starts couple dance.. ak sees in nks eyes.. he too..
now its time for cooling nk felt it so dey falls on grass..
ak was upto on nk..
nk touched her blouse..
nk-itni sundar kyo lag rahi aap..
ak-apki najar hai ki mujhse hatti nhi toh main bhi apko dekhti rehti hu..
nk-bat mat banaiye today apka bdy h main chahta hu ki yeh time main apke sath..
suddenly ak seel to him with a kiss nd he opened blouse chain.. nd went up on her.. ak removed his dress from body..
nd start kissing it louder..
dey have been enjoying every touch..
nk remove her blouse nd start kissing on her nack.. she covered her body with nks body..
dey share a quality time with each..?
so guyz plz read this part nd leave comment.. my frds who pressed like button but plz u can say a nice word.. m giving my hardwork to this ff so u can also say a nice word.. i would feel happy..
it will incrouage to me alot.. plz forget my mistake..
thanku so much..
precap-naksh romantic bdy in party but?
Edited by ruchinaksh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wat a cute part it wass...u stole idea from yrkkh na...
It has all emotions like anger pyaar rootna manaana...
Love it..
do write more like this...
Theice bar dance was something different kind of bday moment...
nd tha mangalsutr with n woww
it was simple cute part..
Do update more soon...
Wats the twist m waiting eagerly?
nd the way ak made nk samjaofy things were realistic...
Hpe to see family moments in coming parts...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: _nakshi_

Wat a cute part it wass...u stole idea from yrkkh na...

It
has all emotions like anger pyaar rootna manaana...

Love
it..

do
write more like this...

Theice bar dance was
something different kind of bday moment...

nd tha mangalsutr with n woww

it
was simple cute part..

Do
update more soon...

Wats the twist m waiting
eagerly?

nd the way ak made nk samjaofy things were
realistic...

Hpe to see family
moments in coming parts...


finally i got a comment 😃 thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally 😳 awww i thought no one is reading but u read nd liked it so so happy..
ur comments gave hope me to write this ff nd end it..
i didnt thief anything 😉 aayegi aayegi twist 😲 i will write it. .
i will do update soon next
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Posted: 8 years ago
part-23
dey were in each other arms.
nk-ak agar aap man lijiye bas man lijiye ki..
ak-kya peep in his eyes..
nk-agar man lijiye main jindagi aur mot ke bich rahu toh aap kya karegi..
ak-nk in loud voice.. she sat.. apki himat kaise hui yeh sochne ki i hate u..
nk-ofoo i waana know ki aap kya karegi mujhe pyar karti hain na..
ak-yahi kuch mere sath ho tab..
nk-ak held her shoulder nd kissed on shoulder.. main toh khud apni jan de dunga..
ak-aur main grabbed his hand apne aap ko bhi khatam karke apko wapas laugi nk i really love u.. apne meri life pyar se bhar di hai ab chah ke bhi usse dur nhi reh sakti hu main.
nk-hmm bat banana koi apse sikhe.. kahi main mar war gya phir kya hoga pata nhi..
ak-nk. a tears drops from her eyes. she starts hitting on his chest.. himat kaise hui yeh bolne ki bhi.. main mar jaugi.
nk-ak listen..
ak-kuch nhi sunna bas marne ki bat yeh nhi ki kuch pyar ki bat karu bas dur hona starts crying.. kyo karte h essa main apko itna pyar karti hu aur aap..
nk-ssh listen to me n baba..
ak-nhi kuch nhi sunugi main kuch aur nhi.. aap bas mere liye hai main apke liye soch bhi nhi sakti life apke bina.
nk-ak.. listen to me nd copped his hand on her face.. bas sshhh.. i m so sry main apse khabhi alg ho hi nhi sakta kyoki meri jan aur apki jan ek dusare ke main hai jab tak hum jiyege sath rahege aur sath main hi rahege hamesha..
aap se main alg nhi houga khabhi yeh wada h mera apse pakka wada. apki sase mujhe wapas lagegi agar kuch hua toh kissed on her lips.. bas.. hmm... starts kissing on her shoulder.
ak was resting on his chest... nk was caressing her hair nd dey falls in each other arms.. in morning at 5..
nk sleep broken.. .
nk-kitni pyari lagti hai sote hue... hug to ak.. i love u i love u i love u.. grabbed highter to ak.. happy bdy my jan..
ak-amm... thanku nd love u too. subah subah utha diya..
nk-solly.. . so lijiyega par abhi toh mehel jana padega sab aate honge na u know apke door ko andar se lock kar diya hain.. mere kapde. . he was standing but ak didnt skip to nk.
ak-laugh no ways.. mujhe sona hain aur apki baho main..
nk-are get up get up madam g...
ak-plz..
nk-yeh apki dress chodiye mujhe.. nk was wearing his dress.. oye nind koliye na.. hit to her sweetly..
ak-umm.. put her head on nks shoulder.. nind aa rahi.. rat bhar jangate ho subah bhi sone nhi dete..
nk-main bhi toh jagta hu rat ko phir bhi uth jata hu getup... ohoo.. he wore to her dress.. took to her in his hand meri pagal biwi.. dey returned to mehel.. ohoo yaha toh sab hain.. main kya karu.. ak plz uthiye na.. yeh toh nind ki goli kha ke baithi hain. ak was still in sleep.. . nk went backside. oo god.. yeh nhi uthne wali..
nk sees fountain.. he throwed to ak on their.. ak wokeup..
ak-aahhh.. shout.. yeh kya hai nk saram nhi aati..
nk-nhi.. mere hath dukhne lag gye.. ab chaliye.. upar.. dey climbed near of Window.. ak went on bed.. its nini time. .
nk-meri pagli..
ak-kya pagli haan. khud to kuch dekhte nhi abhi do gante pehle soi thi main aur bat karte hain. aahh.. m getting sleep. peacefully sleep.. after half an hour nk took bath nd got ready ak was is deep sleep.. nk sat near of ak. suddenly door bell was ringing so much..
ak-ewww ewww.. sone bhi nhi dete mujhe...
nk-nk went near of door.. nd ak stood nd start walking nk opened d door.. varsha shorya was der..
ak-on door.. kya karte hi dasi dasi didnt see to both wiping her eyes.. rat bhar sone nhi dete nk mujhe aur yaha yeh dasiya bhago yaha se.. sees to shava.. aahh.. dey laugh nd nk was blushing. .
woh nk bat bhut karte hain na.. main toh uthne wali thi bas..
va-haa na... mera naughty bhai.. naksh blush.. many many happy returns of d day hug to ak..
sh-khub kub khush reh.. . than vish came..
vi-janamdin mubarak ho beta.. . say vis.. nk made face..
a-tqq.. hug to him... waaw tqq much babasaa.. mera best bdy..
vis-party ki taiyari ho gai puri.. vis put his hand on nks shoulder. . he didnt like it.. mere sath taiyari nhi karaoge beta..
nk-g meri wife ka bdy hain aaj main khush rehna chahta hu.. skipped vis hand..
vis-jarur. . aaiye breakfast kar lijiye beta..
ak-main ready hoke aati hu... dey all leave.. nk sat on bed..
ak-nk apko nhi lagta babasaa ke side aap bhut rough hain.. plz unko samjhiye woh sach main sudar gye hai.. mujhe unpe trust ho raha.. woh apko bhi pyar dena chahte h kya aap ek baba ka pyar nhi dekh sakte sab bhool jaiye mere khatir..
nk-ak aap ready toh ho jaiye plzz..
ak-abhi aai... she took bath nd came. . her hair was wet.. she sees in room.. nk kaha hain.. she went near of mirror.. than nk came nd hug to her from back nd kissed on her cheeks..
ak-aah main dar gai nk...
nk-laugh hmm. aaj aap kitni sundar lag rahi.. she throwed all hair on nks face.. laugh.. ab dikha aur aachese..
nk-hmm aaj kal bhut naughty ho gai hain kyo.. he touched to water drops on her nack..
ak-nk plz breakfast..
nk-hmm oki. mujhe pyas lagi hain... wiped all water drops from nack nd turned to her..
ak-bas haan.. apki pyas bhujegi hi nhi.. mujhe toh kuch yum khana hain sweet..
nk-ok than muuu... coming near.
ak-nhi mujhe khane ki bhook lagi h iski nhi.. meri saree drap ho gai.. she was going suddenly her pallu went on nks face..
nk-esse jayegi kya..
ak-aauch mera pallu hide her body..
nk-dont worry dariye mat.. drapped saree.. main yahi hu aur kuch nhi karuga.. borrow air on her ears.. bye.. ak felt it..
ak-pagal toh kar denge na mujhe..
in table...
vis-bhut aacha khana bana hain bahu.. apke liye hamne bhut aachi dress banwai hain.. pata hain kya.. laiye meri bahu ki dress... kaisi hain..
va-bhut aachi.. hain babasaa main yahi pehnugi..
vi-nk beta ke liye hamne kuch nhi banwaya hame pata h woh khud ki dress lege isliye yeh dono khush rahe bas.. aaj hamne varsha ki pasand ka khana bhi banwaya h baitho beta..
va-tqq babasaa.. nk passed smile.. nk grabbed aks hand.. she passed smile..
now ak was admiring all prepartions..
nk-kya dekh rahi..
ak-mera bdy ka surprise. .. . kitna pyara tha khaskar barf..
nk-u liked it.. than took cold water nd throwed lill on her.
ak-aah..
nk-kya hua..
ak-naughty.. aaj aap khush hain na mujhe pata hai apka dil pighal raha babasaa ke side se hena..
nk-pata nhi ek side lagta hain haa ek side.. mujhe nhi pata..
va-kya kar rahi yeh jodi.. romance haa..
nk-kya didi aap bhi..
va-chal ready hoja aaiye bhabhi..
nk-par hum ek sath ready nhi honge kya..
sh-aap mere sath ready honge nk g..
nk-jija g..
sh-aaiye mere jija g took to nk..
nk-par sees to ak.. she laugh..
va-aaiye bhabhi... varsha was getting ready to ak.. apka yeh managalsutra toh bhut preety hain..
ak-nk ne diya gift..
va-mera bhai jo hai see aap kitni sundar lag rahi... ekdom princess yeh crown bhi..
a-tqq bhabhi.. now chale nk ko bhi stooped..
va-bas nk nk kyo.. aaj toh apko baho main bhar lega mera bhai..
ak-datt..
va-ayyei.
ak-hmm..
va-laugh.. kiss bhi karega..
ak-bhabhi... sees to varsha.. nd laugh..
dey went in party.. nk was waiting for ak..
nk-aai bhi nhi abhi tak..
than she came..
more part coming soon
Edited by ruchinaksh - 8 years ago
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nk was admiring to ak.. she was looking dam preety.. like a doll.. in green saree which nk gifted.. nd crown..
nk-waah.. bhut khub from expression to ak.. she said huh..
vis-yeh hamare jamaisaa hain.. . ak came der..
ak-namashe uncle..
un-jiti raho beti.. i was guessing aap ek gown main aaogi yeh simple wear kyo haa.. aap ek princess h wahi jiye na.. kuch toh apne babasaa ka socha hota.. nk felt bad..
ak-bat toh sundar lagne ki hain kya mera chehra chamak nhi raha uncle aap apni beti ke liye ek pati main kya chahte ki woh kaise rahe sasural main.
un-pyar se khush rahe..
ak-toh main hu na khush.. held nks hand.. hamari jodi ko blessing dijiye.
un-jiti rahiye..
ak-main aati hu aaiye nk... nk was admiring to ak..
va-kya jawab diya hain apne.. too gud..
ak-pyar ki taqat hain.. varsha went.. kya dekh rahe najar lag gai toh..
nk-apno ki najar nhi lagti kya hua..
ak-kuch nhi..
nk-pyar man karta hain apko jhoor se kich ke kiss kar lu..
ak-chii.. datt sab hain yaha..
nk-toh kya hua mera hi toh mall hai chura ke le jau.. ak said someone from background..
ak sees to jes.. she hug to her..
ak-tu kab aai.
jes-abhi aai see my baby..
ak-tera baby waaw kitna pyara h bataya bhi nhi..
jes-tu jaise gayab hi ho gai na. par u hpy na.. tera salman kaha hain..
nk-aap yaha kyo aa gai..
ak-meri best frd jes..
jes-are waah yeh toh bhut cute hain.. made for each other.. waise jija g says in ears.. yeh bhudhu apko pyar toh deti hain nk laugh..
ak-kya kusur fusur kar rahe..
nk-she is most lovable wife in whole world..
jes-thats so nice.. happy to meet u...
vis-are bacho aao cake cut kar le.. all sat to table all was thrown roses on ak.. nk went away lill..
ak-nk.. aaiye na..
va-haa aao na.. ak cut to cake nd feed to nk to vis varsha.. all says happy bdy to u.. gives gifts also..
ak-nk aaiye na mujhe dance karna hain apke sath..
nk-par.. oki... dey were dancing nk grabbed aks belly.
ak-oye.. sshh..
nk kissed on her cheeks..
ak-badmasshh aauch meri saree.. main abhi aai turant aap plz rukiye oki..
nk-ok m waiting.. aap aaiye.. ak went near of water stole. .
yeh bhi na. . he was in middle on hull alone.. he was seeing to all guests.. ak was drinking water suddenly jhumar was coming inside on nk.. ak passed smile sees that jhumar was coming on nk.. she shout nkkk nd runned..
nk-kya. .
ak-upar dekhiye.. he sees to it.. akkk.. shocked. .
sees to vis.. babasaa.. vis sees to nk.. he was aside of nk.. he pushed to nk.. both went in verge..
vis got injury also..
vis-r u fine..
nk-haaa m fine.. jhoomer broke completely.. ak hug to nk..
nk-i m fine..
ak-she starts crying kuch hua hhh.. aaa.. mere ronte khade ho gye nk.. haa nk..
nk-babasaa r u fine..
ak heard this word..
ak-got happy babasaa..
nk-haa jinhone mere liye jan ki baji lagai mujhe bachaya.. aap thik h n.. plz medicine laiye..
ak was admiring to both.. nk put patti to vis..
nk-thanku... thanku so much aaj mujhe kuch ho jata toh mujhe parwah nhi par mujhe bacha ke apne apni beti ko ek pyara sa gift diya hain..
vis-mere bacho.. aap log dekh nhi sakte.. arrangements essi hoti hain samaj nhi aata mujhe.. sabhi ke sabhi har chiz check karo.
nk-plz ho jata hain..
ak-party over ho gai mera ji gabra raha hum chale.
nk-hmm.. naksh were in room.. dey were in each other arms..
ak-sab thik ho gya m so happy..
nk-hmm.. sayad main galt soch raha tha woh meri behen ko itna pyar kar rahe mujhe itna man de rahe aur bachaya bhi.. i think i can trust him..
ak-sab thik ho jata hain toh essa hi hota hain.. m so so happy..
nk-kal hum ghar chalege.. apne ghar..
ak-hmm sab chizo ko dekhna h kam karna h.. ghar ki yad aa rahi bhuttt..
nk-so jate h aaiye.. kissed on her cheeks.. love u happy bdy to u..
ak-thanku..
in morning naksh were ready to leave..
vis-aate rahiyega beta.. aah.
nk-kya hua..
vis-kuch nhi bas man ho raha tha ak sam tak aur ruk jati par koi bat nhi aap dono ki khushi pehle.. aap nhi rukegi hena jaiye..
nk-ak aap ruk jaiye.. i think sam ko aap aa jayegi toh kuch nhi hoga.. main office jauga aap sam ko aa sakti hain..
vis hug to nk..
vis-thanku so much.. beta khush raho kisi ko bheju sath..
nk-no i can manage.. bye.. he went.. ak was seeing to nk..
nk-bye tc..
ak-bye nk.. after sometimes...
vis-ji haa fine.. he was on cell phone put it on table..
ak-are babasaa toh gye yeh phone.. cell phone ringing so much.. she took it..
she was about to say but to listen something she was hell shocked..
nhiii... mainnn aati hu throwed to phone...
nk was going... suddenly one truck was coming in his side.. he stopped her van.. sees behind also was truck..
actually his van covered from all over.. he cant go anywer..
nk-went outside.. pagal hain kya charo side truck laga di main kaise jauga haa..
truck driver - pata chal jayega ruk..
nk-kya bola haa kya bola.. someone put hand on his shoulder.. he turned.. kon..
sees to vis.. babasaa aap.. see yeh log mujhe kaise ger ke baithe hain..
vis-aap chinta mat kariye hum bolte h ee hata..
nk-aap yaha..
vis-bas gujar raha tha pass see.. truck went away lill.. ee tum log se thik se kam nhi hota hain kya..
nk-kon sa kam..
vis-apko marne ka..
nk-kya majak h..
vis-laugh majak haa hain majak.. . put gun on nks head hain majak in loud voice hai majak.
nk was shocked..
nk-bb..baba..aap..
vis-daro mat sab bata ke maruga esse nhi sab bata ke his face was red... nk heart broke to sees all..
beta beta beta 😲..?
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precap-dey hitted to nk.. he will die nd wat will happen to ak if she knows that nk died or not.. y vis shut to nk..
in last part all will understand all 😲
Edited by ruchinaksh - 8 years ago
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Its a higly mixed part...
it has alll
happiness suspense emotions...
OMG wat u thought seriously idonnt know...
loved the starting nd wen ak defends that uncle to praise nk...
She made him understand so well
nd ha ak sleeppp omggg u wrote keeping in mind me na :P
I too love sleep alot
Vish ka vish raaz bataao jaldi...
eagerly waiting for finishing part...
Waitinggg
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Originally posted by: _nakshi_

Its a higly mixed part...

it has alll
happiness suspense emotions...
OMG wat u thought seriously idonnt know...
loved the starting nd wen ak defends that uncle to praise nk...
She made him understand so well
nd ha ak sleeppp omggg u wrote keeping in mind me na :P
I too love sleep alot
Vish ka vish raaz bataao jaldi...
eagerly waiting for finishing part...
Waitinggg


haa its highly mixed part.. u liked it yuhuuu.. ur comments make me soo choo happy 😃..
haa happiness is needed na u don't know but i will told in story 😆 i was thinking to shocked u 😆
aww haa she loves so much..
haa i thought u only ur nini day 😆.. ak nd u also crazy girl 😉..
yup yup thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it 😊 i will write next part soon soon 😃
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part-24
nk-aap apni hi beti ke pyar ko suhag ko marna chahte hain. gun lagaye khade hain maine apko dil se maf kiya tha. kya ek insan khabhi sudhar nhi sakta in loud voice.. kyo..
vis-kyoki tum hame khabhi pasand the hi nhi.. na jab tumne meri beti ko kidnap kiya tha.. jab hame pata chala hamara toh khoon kol gya tha.. badla haa.. chain nhi pada na apni behen ko us halat main dekh ke bhi.. meri beti ko chin liya jhoota pyar ka dikhawa karke..
nk-aap unhe sacha pyar dete na toh woh mere andar pyar nhi kojti..
vis-hamne unhe bhut pyar se aur ijat se rakha tha usse.. sachi galt kya janti hain woh. tumhari behen ko toh apna liya hamne kyoki hamara beta hamse dur ho gya tha aur usse toh hum mehel main rakh bhi lenge par apni beti ko nhi us jhopde main nhi rehne denge sara seher hame keh raha ki kaise hum apni beti ko waha rehne de garibi tumhe bulane main bhi saram aayegi hame aur woh jiske chapal bhi itni mehngi hoti hain woh 500 ki saree pehni.. ghar ka kam kare nhi.. soch soch ke pagal ho gye phir socha nafrat se bat banegi nhi.. socha tumhe marwa denge toh kitna royegi 1 ganta 1 din 1 week 1 month ya 1 sal khabhi toh chup hogi tab hum apni beti ko pyar ka sahara deke apne se bade ghar main shadi kar denge..
nk-alko saram nhi aati itna ganda koi kaise soch sakta hain. marna ya mrna kisi ke hath main nhi..
vis-sachi kaha bhut try kiya hamne sabse pehle ghadi ko bheja apko marne ko par hamari hi beti ko chot lagi.. hospital bhi gya main par nhi jab unhe thik dekha tab santi aai.. phir hamne do aur bar marwane ki kosish ki par pata nhi kon si sangivni khai hain tumne ki bar bar bach jate ho..
nk-toh kal kyo bacha ya mujhe..
vis-hamne hi plan kiya tha ki jhumar gire apke upar par hamari beti ne humhe dekh liya aur hum unki nafrat nhi chahte the ki woh hame galt samjhe.. hum yeh prove karna chahte hai tumhadse ka sikar hue ho.. na ki hamne mara hain tab woh hamare aur pass aayegi aur apni pasand ke ladke se hum unki shadi bhut dhoom se karwayege..
nk-par karne wale alg nhi hote hain.. aapki nafrat kal bhi nhi jitti aaj bhi nhi jitegi.. par aap unhe mat hi bataiyega kitna pyar karti h woh apse maf nhi kar payegi kiska khoon hain woh.. plzz.. mujhe mar ke hi apki bhadas nikli toh mar hi dijiye.. par ak mujhse pyar karti aakhiri sas tak karti rahegi aap kuch bhi kariye.. apke jaisa ganda khoon nhi unke andar..
vis-haa hum pyar kare toh gamda khoon tum karo toh aacha.. maro isse.. dey starts hitting to him..
nk-aah.. .
vis-dekha hum jayada bade hain..
nk-aap paise se bade ho par mera tarika galt nhi tha aapke liye samjhe hum ek hain.. marne ke bad bhi aur jite g bhi.. khabhi toh unko pata chlega ki aap khabhi nhi sudhar sakte..
vis-hum pata chalne hi nhi denge aakhir hamare jhoote aansu se tum pighal gye ak pighal gai tumhari behen pighal gai toh tumhe marke accident batana kon sa chota kam h.. hame apne ghar main khana kilaya na ab dekho main tumhe kaise goli kilata hu.. shoot to him...
nk-aahhh... bullet crossed to his stomach nd he became red.. 😡 😲.. nkkk... ak shout from background. .
she was shivering sat in her knees.. a tears drop from her eyes... nkk in low voice..
nk-aaa.. .. aa.. kk... aaahhh... he coming close of ak... falls on floor.. ak caught to him in her arms..
he was bleeding so much... he touched aks face nd passed smile. . i ll uu aa.. . her face became red due to blood..
ak-she was silent for some time.. she was admiring to nk... nn. nkkk... in loud voice.. vis gun went on floor..
vis-ak beta aap yaha kaise...
ak-basss showed hand basss with red face.. apka phone throwed it on floor louder... apke bhade ke aadmi ka phone tha nk ko shoot karna h ghadi ja chuki hain.. .
vis-hamaa haa haa haamari bat..
ak-i said stoop i dont waana listen to u mr vishamber maheshwari.. nkk... nkk.. open ur eyes nk.
nk-aa... uuu.. h.. close his eyes..
ak-nkk. nkk. boliye na main aa toh gai see apke pass aai hu bhaisaa ko bhi bulaya hain see aai hu boliye na.. than shorya came nd sees it..
sh-yeh sab kya babasaa.. ak nk gg..
ak-dekhiye na bhaisaa kuch bolte hi nhi.. pehle toh sara din kachar karke dimag khate the see aaj.. nkk laugh pagal ho gye kya chaliye hospital jayege hum..
sh-ak sayad nk g.. m..
ak-chup in loud voice kya hoga kuch nhi hoga kuch bhi nhi hoga.. nk.. open ur eyes just once open ur eyes ek bar see m der for u see.. starts crying.. bolte nhi kuch haa louder kyo nhi bolte boliye na see main mar dungi boliye boliye na.. hit to him slap.. uthiye uthiye na starts badly crying uthiye n mera dil baitha ja raha plzz ek bar plz ek bar i really love u i cant live without u.. uthoye na hey bhagwan kya karu main..
plzz hit to him plzzz...
kyo mara kyooo says vis meri jan le lete.. le lete na... nkkk. .. main kya karu put her hand on her head..
sh-akk.. with terry behen tu samaj na plz..
vis was numb..
ak-main bhi mar jaugi apki sas rukegi na toh jiugi nhi main mera pyar dekha h pagalpan nhi... . nk plzz uth jaiye na plzz..
think.. apki sase hi mujhe wapas layegi ak..
nk.. ek bar uth jaiye bas ek bar apni ak ke liye apki life apki nhi meri hain.. apke pyar ki hai itna pyar deke mujhe esse chod ke mat jaiye plz..
she covered to both with pallu.. nd giving to him mouth air.. apne bola tha na meri sas apko wapas layegi phir uth kyo nhi rahe haa.. she was kissing to him madly... plzz nk plzz dekhiye na main kya karu kya karu main hey bhagwan kya karu main.. she put her lips on nk.. suddenly he starts breathing ak felt.. nk.. nkk... she took off pallu..
bhaisaa nkk.. woh nkk.. sas woh hoss hoss..
sh-kya aaiye hospital main leke chale..
ak-hmm... dey were taking to him in car... kuch nhi hoga nk apko haa.. hug to him..
kuch nhi hoga bhaisaa jaldi chalaiye na plzzz..
here vis was thinking about all... babasaa nk said...
vis-hum toh sach mai insan hi nhi hai.. throwed to gun..
ak put nks head on her lap..
ak-bas pahuch jayege haa chinta mat kariye nk. . bas.. thinking about surprise(main toh sirf apka hi hu ak.. pass aaiye na thoda aur.. ak said no).. oohohooo.. background music was playing.. ak hug to nk.. mujhe chod ke toh nhi jayege na.. main mar jaugi nk mar jaugi main.
sh-aaiye ak.. dey admitted to nk... ak was crying sat on table.. than varsha came..
va-shorya kya hua nk ko kya hua main yaha apne bulaya thik h na woh.. kya hua h usse kaise ho gya yeh sab..
sh-varsha.. woh babasaa ne nk ko goli..
va-kya.. babasaa ne par kyo.. kya..
sh-woh..
ak-sab mere karan hua hain.. na main nk se pyar karti pulled her hair.. na unki life main yeh udasi aati.. nk ne mujhe bataya tha ki unka accident hua ek nhi do bar par main kuch bhi kar hi nhi pai. . main ek aachi patni nhi hu bilkul nhi hu..
varsha hug to ak.
va-aap aachi ho bhabhi. . sayad hum bhai behen ki life nhi hai jo apne pyar ko udas kar dete hai par jab woh uthega na hum usko datege haa..
ak-haa uthege na nhi datege nhi bhabhi.. woh pain main rahege jab woh thik ho jayege na tab datege haa kuch nhi hoga. than doctor came..
ak-kaise hain nk. .
do-dont know m worried so much bhut blood nikal chuka hain aur bullet nikal di hain.. thank god ryt time pe aa gye but..
ak-kya..
do-unki kidney due to infection kharab ho gai hain aur jiska blood group unse match hoga unki kidney hame transplant karni hogi but..
ak-haa toh meri le lijiye..
va-meri toh hogi hi match..
do-ooh u r her sister na than apka blood group o negative hoga.. because yeh bhut rare milta hain upar se doner bhi. i dont think koi milega itni jaldi unke pass time bhut kam hain..
ak-kya she was numb.. nhii.. shout essa kuch nhi hoga.. aapko unhe thik karna hoga held his coller essa kaise bol sakte h paisa chahiye na le lijiye mera ek ek koon lijiye par thik kar dijiye.. skipped amm.. starts crying plz doctor thik kar dijiye unko.. sat in her knees.. plz.. main kya karu.. nk main apke liye kuch nhi kar pai.. nk..
d-see aap log sab apna blood test kara lijiye kisi ka toh match hoga na sayad..
ak-haa aaiye.. dey gave sample... after sometimes. . ak was waiting for report..
sh-main puri fee jama kar deta hu..
ak-bhaisaa aap us mehel ka ek bhi paisa nhi jama karege. . aap bhale hamare chote ghar ko girwi rakh dijiye par us mehel ki paisa nhi lungi main..
sh-mujhe pata tha behen par tere bhai ne kuch saving bhi ki hain.. mujhe bhi pocket money milti thi meri hard work ki ussi main se yeh paisa diya h jo kamaya hain tu chinta mat kar us aadmi ki ek bhi paisa nhi lenge.. mar jayege par unko nhi dekhege..
than vis came der..
vis-akk bee... ak eyes fire in anger..
ak-bhaisaa report aai kya..
sh-time lagega.
vis-beta hum bure hain bhut bure par.. kis muh se..
ak-main aau kya puch ke..
sh-main gya tha par woh bole aayege .
ak-aacha thik h. .
vis-beta.. ak.. held her hand..
ak-apko koi hak nhi mujhe beta bolne ka aur mujhe chune ka bhi.. chain nhi aaya kya nk ko mar ke ab kya puri jan leke chodege.. mujhe mar dete. par nhi aa gye yaha bas.. than doctor came..
kya hua sir..
do-oo no mujhe isi chiz ka dar tha.. apka blood group dif h apke bhai ka apka same hain..
va-mera..
do-aapka bhi essa hota h maa ya baap se kisi ek ka match hota h..
ak sat on table..
ak-ab..
vis-aap ha..
ak-bas bas.. kyo itne aache ban rahe aap mujhe apki help nhi chahiye na apki hamdardi na pyar na nafrat hath jhodti hu main hame chod dijiye hum dur chale jaye.. main nk ke bina g nhi sakti hu. marne dijiye.. agar nk ko kuch bhi hua main bhi nhi rahugi samaj lijiyega.. aap sudar gye h soch ke maine kitna pyar diya trust kiya par aap.. chii apko toh narak bhi na mile.. ek beti essa bole toh woh mar jaye.. ek kutte ko bhi apni beti se pyar hota h apka junun hamare liye jeher h.. bas jaiye yaha se jaiye plz.. main apko dekhna bhi nhi chahti hu i hate u i hate u..
vis starts crying. .
vis-hum sach main..
ak-mujhme apko mafi dene ki ya nafrat karne ki himat nhi rahi.. mere pati ko meri jarurat h aap plz jaoye na.. shout jaiye na plz... loudly crying.. vis was leaving.. . shorya hug to ak..
ak-kaise mod pe hu main mere pati ko mere baba ne.. ek ki side se bolu toh pati ko kho du dusare side baduaa du toh beti ki baduaa mujhe hi kha jayegi bhaisaa..
sh-bas kuch nhi hoga... bas.. doctors ab kya..
do-bas hum mangate h semple dua kare koi toh mil jaye..
ak-main karugi dua bhut dua karugi... sabse bolugi koi toh hoga.
more part coming soon
Edited by ruchinaksh - 8 years ago
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ak went in road..
ak-koi hain meri madad karne wala koi hain kya..
va-bhabhi essa mat kariye plzz sab kya kahege.. bas..
ak-kya karu main koi hai hi nhi jo nk ko kidney de main kitni bebas hu..
va-koi na koi mil jayega bas.. sees mandir... bas bhagwan se pray kariye ki sab thik ho hmm.. bas..
dey went in mandir... ak.-plz bhagwan g mere nk ko thik kar dijiye main unke bina g nhi paugi..
pandit-beti is mandir ki lot ke 50 parikama ki jaye toh jo manokamna ho puri hoti hain..
ak-sach pandit g. .
va-bhabhi aap.. kuch..
ak-pandit g aap pooja kariye bas main soke parikrma karugi.. she laid on floor starts surrounding all over in mandir..
va-bhabhi aap.. a tears drop from her eyes.. aap nk se nk apse kitna pyar karte hain bhagwan apki icha jarur puri karega..
after sometimes... ak tired so much but she was doing her parikrma.. nd varsha got a call..
va-shorya kya hua..
s-hame doner mil gya ak kaha h.. maine operation start kara diya..
va-par kon..
sh-doctor ne kaha hain ki woh paise ke liye sab karega aur khud samne nhi aayega bas hame toh kidney se matlb hain.
va-haan... sach kehte hain dua main bhut taqat hoti h aaj dekh bhi liya.. pyar ki taqat.. pandit g kitni bachi h..
pa-beti bas 20 aur..
va-main wait karugi.. after sometimes ak stood...
ak-ba.. bhabhii nkk..
va-nk thik h uska operation ho gya woh thik h..
ak-s.. sachh..
va-haa apki halat.. aap thik h..
ak-mujhe kya hua hain main thik hu runned near of hospital. . bhaisaa nk thik h na..
sh-haa pata nhi kon tha god hi tha jisne hamare nk ko bacha liya..
ak-main unse milna chahti hu..
sh-woh paise leke gya usse jarurat thi na.. bas nk g ko hos aa jaye doctor keh rahe ek gante lagega
ak-main wait andar..
sh-nhi yahi aa kuch kha le..
ak-bas nk ko hos aa jaye phir bas... she was waiting.. varsha come..
va-lo bhabhi kha lo chai toh pi lo.. ek ganta ho gya na..
ak-haa bas nk.. nurse came..
nu-g apke husband ko hos aa gya woh ak ko bula rahe.. ak runned in room..
ak-mm maiin... she sees to nk.. nk was feeling weak.. bas sees to ak.. der eyes meet from each..
ak-aap thik hain na..nkkk..touched his face.. aap thik hain starts crying main bhut roi apko yad kiya kuch bura nhi hoga na. kitna bura socha. aap thik h na.. she put her face on his face. her tears touched to nk..
nk-haa.. aap itni weak aur aapki eyes itni red..
ak-i love u nk bas esse hi rehne dijiye main in kuch ganto main pagal si ho gai thi tarash gai thi apko dekhne ko sach
nk-kuch khaya apne... haaa akk...
ak stood she was feeling so weak... i really loovee u.. went in floor..
nk-akkk shout nk.. shorya nd varsha sees to both..
va-bhabhi.. aaj mandir main 50 parikrma lagai nk ke liye.. kuch khaya bhi nhi.. doctors check to ak.. after sometimes ak was waking up. ..
ak-nnnkkk.. nk...
nk-haa ak forward his hand.. dey were in besides on bed..
aap mujhe itna pyar karti hai.. dekha apki sase mujhe bacha ke le aai.. ak kuch mat sochiye bas yeh sochiye ki hum ek hai kya hua kis karan se hua sab chod dijiye..
ak-kaise chod du nk pata nhi ek ajib sa dar hain woh sab phir se nhi hoga na jo hua. hum yeh seher chod alg se rahege plz..
nk-main kuch kahu.. aap pehle kuch kha lijiye mere khatir..
va-haa bhabhi sat to her nd gave one bite.. nk ko rest thabhi milega.. abhi toh woh kuch khayega nhi par proper care lagegi uski aur essa thabhi hoga jab aap aachi rahegi hena..
sh-tujhe pata h ak.. hum sab dusare seher jayege nai jagah maine puri bat kar li hain.. haa..
nk-aap sab kuch soch nhi rahe ki woh kaha rahege sayad ab mujhe feel ho raha ki babasaa sayad..
ak-nk aap plz essa mat sochiye dhoka mila h usse bardast nhi kar pai main us insan ka jikar nhi hona chahiye. . sabse badi khushi hamare pyar ki hain bas.. mujhe aur nhi rona. .
nk-aap teb lijiye..
ak-pehle aap... lijiye give to him teb.. after some time... ak was reading noble nd laugh.. aur pati ne bola ki tum chudel ho laugh..
nk-pass aaiye.. ak kissed on his lips.. i love u.. bhut hosiyar ho gai hain aap.
ak-apke pyar ka asar hain kissed on his cheeks..
nk held tighter aks hand..
nk-apko abhi bhi dar hain na mujhe khone ka thabhi tin char din se hili tak nhi hain yaha se..
ak-toh apki care karni hain na mujhe..
nk-care alg chiz hain aur chinta alg chiz hai apko yeh lag raha na ki sayad main apse phir na ho jau par ak agar bhagwan ne mujhe apko phir se diya h means mujhe kuch nhi hoga.. had se jayada pyar bhi gutan ban jati hain manti h na aap..
ak-haa nk... apko gutan..
nk-nhi mujhe gutan nhi ho rahi main apko samjha raha ki yeh pyar hain isme gutan ki jagah nhi par space ki toh h jo aap mujhe de sakti hain aur main apko hmm hena.. hum ek nai life suru karege hug to ak.. aur pyar ki duniya rahegi hena.. after 2year.. .
ak nd nk were in garden. .. ak was trying to take flower from tree but was unable..
than nk came nd held to her in his hand..
ak-aahhh.. nkkk.. bas romance rat din hena..
nk-bilkul took to her on floor.. pinned to her with wall.. bhut sundar lag rahi aap.. apka jhoola ready hain madam teej day pe..
ak-aacha toh mere flower bhi toh. . aap kya karna chahte h.. nk was trying to pick a kiss on lips but ak apart her lips..
nk-jani hum kiss leke rahege..
ak-log kya sochege koi pagla kisi ladki ko bhaga ke laya hain uuu showed toungue.. nd runned in her room..
gita..
g-g didi yeh babu ro raha..
ak-mera bacha re kitna roi roi kara le.. aahh main tujhme kila deti hu oki.. she was giving baby food to baby.. kaisa lag raha mera sona see is green saree main kaise lag rahi main..
ba-aahhh..
ak-aachi na aap bed pe baitho hmm..
nk-oo god truly hot..
ak-shutup sab ladies aati hogi is towel ko nikal ke kapde pehen lijiye.. oki.. nk took shirt nd suddenly he starts breathing heavily. . akk akk i m unable to taking breath..
ak-kya worried... nk nk..
nk-mujhe breath dijiye plz.. ak starts kissing to him.. after sometimes nk starts giving hardly kissing to ak..
ak-ammmn... but he didn't skip.. after a passionate kiss he skipped to her.
ak-aah.. badmash bacha dekh raha..
nk-toh.. woh kuch samjhata hain kya ek sal ka toh h.. hena bacha. . see papa laye apke liye dress..
ak-aur woh kamwali..
nk-wat husband hu kiss kya usse jayada kar sakta hu..
ak-gande..
nk-woh toh main hu hi.. now dey got ready.. everyone coming in outside hull..
la-kaisa hain babu kaisi ho ak..
ak-aachi hu.. are babu ki mummy ka gai bhabhi aap aa gai..
va-haa.. aa gai mithai lane main der toh nhi hui na yeh shorya ko dukan nhi mili na so aaja mera bacha re hum sath main jhulege.. haa..
ak-hmm. . nk aaiye na hum bhi jhulege.. dey sat in jhoola nd held eachs hand.. dey were in their dreams.
in nyt naksh shava were enjoying movie..
va-yeh pati na esse hi hote hain dhokebaz..
ak-haan..
nk-wat haa main bhi kya.. she nooded yes but say no.. yeh kya hain ak..
ak-aap nhi hain..
nk-aacha means hu kya.. suddenly someone knocked to door.. ak opened it.. aap..
haa main said daimaa.. ak hug to her..
ak-kaisi hain aap bhut din bad even salo bad aaiye na.. kaisi h aap.. nk touched her feet.. varsha shorya too.. dey sat in sofa..
da-yeh apka beta h na.. anay nam aacha hain..
ak-aap kya lengi daimaa..
da-tera thoda sa time aur mafi hukum ke liye..
ak-kya us insan ke liye mere pass kuch nhi jo mera hua hi nhi..
da-aap wahi hain na jisse maine pala bada kiya mana unse galti hui par itni badi saza apko pata hain dhere se unka dil pighal gya aur nk beta ki tabiyat ke bad unhone aanath bacho ki help ki meri madad ki mujhe sahara diya mere bete ke mar jane ke bad.. aur ek hospital bhi banwa rahe the unke liye unhone bhut paise lagwaye muft ilaj ke liye par dhere dhere unka business dubta gya aur us hospital main unhone puri punji laga di.. ek choti si koti main reh rahe the na khane ka hosh na kuch.. tab maine unhe sahara diya jo kam unke karan mila.. insan badlte hain beta badlte h man se.. sayad thabhi woh apke pass nhi aaye muh dikhane ki himat nhi rahi na..
ak-par he dumb me unhone mere nk ko marne ki kosish ki mere pyar ka majak banaya aur mafi ke nam par mujhe dhoka diya no main maf nhi karugi never..
da-aapko pata h nk ko unhone mara par sudhar gye hain woh ek beti ka farz nibhaiye hame do sal lage aplogo ko kojne main. main ek maa ke nate keh rahi maf kar dijiye..
ak-phir hua toh nhi i cant do it no..
da-aacha toh phir ek bat sun lijiye woh bimar h nk ko goli mari yeh janti h aap par yeh nhi janti ki nk beta ko kidney unhone di thi.. everyone shocked..
ak-kya starts crying..
da-haa beta unhone di thi sirf unhone..
nk-ak main apse kehna chahta hu ki woh jo kuch bhi kiya apko taklif main dekh ke apke pyar ke liye kiya par itni badi saza no maf kariye chaliye milne sach.. maine unko nafrat karte dekha par woh pyar apke liye nafrat se jayada tha.. ak hug to nk..
ak-main jaugi jarur jaugi.. dey went in vis house. .. vis was on bed he was trying to take water but it was going on floor but ak take it nd gave to vis.. babasaa..
vis-beti.. he had tears.. mujhe maf kar dijiye beti main us din nk bete ko mar kyo raha tha pata nhi.. par mujhe in sab ka afsos hai..
ak-bas kal hua bit gya jo hoga aacha hoga hena hum sath rahege hamesha main jan gai hu aap aache hain bhut aache.. held vis hand..
sh-sorry babasaa itne sal tak apka hal bhi nhi pucha..
vis-beta he hug to both main bhut bhut bhut khush hu aaj bhut amir hu main.. aahh baby said vis heard it..
yeh mera..
sh-apka pota anay.. he took to him nd kissed to him.. varsha beta aao baitho nk was stood in corner. . beta apne aaj tak mujhe..
nk-kar diya hamare andar toh ek hi khoon hai hena..
vis-us time sayad hame lagta nhi main sudar gya thabhi bataya nhi par meri puri family ko main pyar karta hu sabko bete bahu jamai beti sry sabko..
all-bas we all love u thanku daimaa..
after three year vis was playing with two kids.. one was 4 year old nd one was two year..
anay-dadu aap mujhe jayada pyar karte ho na..
mmm. mmm.. said michki naksh baby girl..
vis-main na anay ko michki ko dono ko bhut pyar karta hu aao.. are baapre itni sundar dress michki ki aur anay ki bhi nk ak were seeing.. are nk beta aaiye na..
nk-woh babasaa business help chahiye yeh project hain lagau kya..
vis-haa beta yeh jo project hain bhut aacha h sach isme na hum ek kam karege hamare dost hain rajesh usko bolge toh help bhi hogi hena..
nk-oki abhi tak itni success mili aapke karan hi hmm.. apne bhut kuch sikhaya h..
vis-aapne bhi beta.. hame proud h aap pe..
than ak came nd gave teb to vis..
vis-tqq beta varsha beta aur shorya beta bhi gum ke aa jaye bas..
a-hame kyo nhi leke gye papa mummy..
ak-kyoki aap big boy ho hena aur dadu ke pass rehte ho michki bhi h na.. she kissed to anay.. dey laugh..
mi-bai bai..
vis-dono mere sath soi soi karoge..
haan both says..
nk-r u sure michki.. aaa papa.. haye mera bacha kissed to her..
in room... ak nk were in room. nk hug to ak..
nk-love u... itne sal bit gye loveee yuuu... kissed to her cheeks. . hamari beti h pyari si aur puri family bhi ek hain..
ak-hamara business h aacha hain pyar hain yaha apka bhi aur bado ka bhi i really love u.. lve u..
are michki aap.. nk took to her..
mo-choi choi kalugi..
ak-papa ki beti ho bas..
mo-doono ki.. kissed to ak.
nk-aao meri baby sula du... nk slept to her nd she hug to nk so tighter..
ak-meri jagah itni tighter le li..
nk-mai kya karu.. he took to michku in side nd hug to ak.. dono ka hu bas..
ak-haa picked a kiss.. gudnyt..
nk-love uuu... . esse hi rahege...
ak-love u tooo.. haan..
nd dey lived happy together... plzz guyzz m so happy that i complete this ff also.. plz press like button if u like this part nd this story too...
tqqq.. the end...
Edited by ruchinaksh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Great work :))
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Great effect and contribution :))) big thanks for you and u r creativity:))

U finished it but here after no one comes to online da :( bcz of u r writing few of old people comes ,now :((

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