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Posted: 8 years ago
i really loved it! so funny how they had to cover the marks they made 😆
it was really fun to read.. keep it up and update soon!😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
it was funny bubbly cute Romantic part
all make fun of naksh.. like vish entry
do wrote next part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: trishanaksh

i really loved it! so funny how they had to cover the marks they made😆

it was really fun to read.. keep it up and update soon!😊


aww thanku thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments 😊 u liked it i will write this tipe of scenes more nd more.. yup hoga na i will do update soon next part.. 😆
but waiting for ur ff next part 🥱
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

it was funny bubbly cute Romantic part
all make fun of naksh.. like vish entry
do wrote next part soon


in this ff romantic part was missing na so i wrote nd will write more nd more romance.. 😆..
haa vis entry will spice 😛..
i will do update soon next part 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
thanku ashinaksh for pressing like button
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Posted: 8 years ago
Its such a cute part...
naksh feeling embarassed inforont of all haha
ndf nk's sweet dhamki for ak is too cute..
their relation is perfect in every sense...
varsha nd nk boss frnd chidaofying naksh is so cute...
finally vish ko akal aaya..
he wanna take everyone home...
lets see how thisturn bring new twistin naksh life...
do update soon:)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: _nakshi_

Its such a cute part...

naksh feeling embarassed inforont of all haha
ndf nk's sweet dhamki for ak is too cute..
their relation is perfect in every sense...
varsha nd nk boss frnd chidaofying naksh is so cute...
finally vish ko akal aaya..
he wanna take everyone home...
lets see how thisturn bring new twistin naksh life...
do update soon:)


thanku thanku so much princyuuu love u so much 😃..
awww m so happy that u liked whole part 😊.. so so so hpy.. ur lovly comments m admiring 😳
aww u liked their love dhamki dont worry ak too give.. 😆 yup their love be more nd more powerful 😉 hmm vis entry will be interesting 😲 hope in paet i will do update soon next 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
part-21
nk-aap yaha kyo aaye hain kya chahte hain hamse.. mujhe toh nhi lagta aap kisi ka bhi bhala kar sakte hain.. aachanak se kya ho gya jo aap hamare bare main sochne aa gye.. chot khaye bina koi insan sudhar kaise sakta hain.
vis-chot toh lagi na beta.. . jab koi apna nahi tha toh aklepan kha gya mujhe aur samaj aa gaya ki bacho se sab kuch hain.. ak beta held her hand.. hum apko khabhi baap ka pyar nhi de paye sirf apko apni jayedad samjha par aap hamari beti hain sabse pyari beti..
ak-babasaa aap sach keh rahe na aap sach main hame apnane aaye hain.. nk.. he was still in anger.. babasaa sachi toh keh rahe aaj itni khushi ka din aa gya hain. hena..
vis-haa beta apke bhai kaha hain..
ak-woh aate hi honge.
vis-hame toh unko dekhna hain apni bahu ko leke jana hain beti ko leke jana hain aur jamaisaa ko bhi.. sabko bhut pyar dena hain.. itne chote se ghar main aap sas kaise leti hongi aur toh aur apko khana pina rehna sabki dasi thi waha yaha toh..
ak-mere pati h jinhone mujhe sab kuch sikhaya koi taklif nhi di mujhe m.. proud hain unpe mujhe.. nk heart fulfilled with emotions..
vis-woh toh hain hi aap toh mahan hain hamari beti ko bete ko apne jina sikhaya par aur nhi ab sab dukh mith jayege hena aap sab hum sab sath main rahege hena ak beti.
ak-haan bauji aap jo keh rahe woh sach hain aap apne bacho ka moh chahte hain par..
vis-hame pata tha aap man..someone said babasaa from background. . hecwas shorya..
beta vis runned nd hug to him... hum aapka wait kar rahe the aap aa gye.. bahu mere pair nhi chuogi.. varsha was shocked..
va-haan.. hmm.. she took pallu nd touches vis leg.
vis-jiti raho beti hum samaj hi nhi paye ki pyar main kitni taqat hoti hain apne pote tak ko kho diya par nhi ab nhi sari kami dur kar dunga..
var-sach.. shorya dekheiye bauji kya. he was confused. .
sh-aap kyo chahte h hum wapas jaye..
vis-hamari khushi ke liye pyar ke liye.. woh dard jo hAmne apko diya use dur karne ke liye hum kya kare jisse aap sab samaj jaye ki hum sudar gye hain.. kya kare essa..
apko yaha hamare sath khana, khana hoga.. nk said.
vis-kya par hum sab mehel chal rahe waha khayege na sath main.. aap taklif mat kariye..
nk-laugh mujhe pata h aap nhi khayege.. himat hi nhi badi badi bat karne se koi nhi sudhrta bas ek bhaw h jo man m aa jata hain.. hena hum garib h yaha ka pani.
vis-haa hum khayege apni bahu ke hath ka..
va-main abhi lati hu.. went in kitchen..
vis-meri beti mere pass baith ke bat karegi hena.. nk was seeing all..
ak-g main aaugi par bhabhi ki help karke. haan babasaa..
vis-thik hain. . jaldi aana.. she went in kitchen.
vis-aao beta baitho to nk..
nk-main aata hu kam hain mujhe..
sh-aap sach main babasaa..
vis-ek insan jab tak kuch aacha nhi karega woh aacha nhi hoga kya maine bacho ke liye ek muft aasram banaya hain taki woh waha reh sake..
sh-kya sach..
vis-hmm... shorya got happy. .. nk was still in anger towards vis.. he went in kitchen..
nk-aap bhut kuch special mat baniyega jo hum khate h wahi dijiyega..
va-tu itna gusse main kyo hain nk..
nk-pata nhi mera dil manne ko taiyar hi nhi h ki woh sudar gye hain.
ak-nk mere babasaa agar sudar nhi jate toh yaha aate hi nhi. . woh kud ko jhuka ke hame lejane ki bat nhi karte kya milega jhoot bol ke kahi na kahi bacho ki tadap ek insan ko sudar deti h hena..
nk-pata nhi par agar unka man saf hota toh woh apni beti ko baithne ko nhi bolte bahu ko bhi bolte ghar ko chota nhi bolte aur apni beti ko sath le jane ki bat nhi karte..
went in anger..
va-isske dimag main na bas yeh bhar gya hain ki woh bure h par ho sakta hain sudar gye ho..
ak-haan bhabhi dil yahi keh raha unka pyar mile..
va-milega lo khana ready ho gya.. dey gave to vis. nk sees to him.. but vis ate.. he gave money to varsha everyone were shocked. .
vis-beta yeh sagun hain jab pehli bar bahu ke hath se khana khate hain toh sagun dete hain woh touches her head.. aap hamesha kush rahiye..
va-tqq bauji.. tqq..
vis-babasaa beta.. hum chale.. mujhe apni bahu bete beti sabse bhut bat karni hain. abhi hi leke jauga sabko main..
shorya beta chaloge na..
sh-haa agar aap apni bahu ko apnane ke liye taiyar hain thabhi..
vis-bahu nhi meri beti hain..
va-hum jayege..
vis-ak beti aap bhi saman pack kar lijiye hum ghadi bula denge..
ak-main kha jaugi..
vis-ghar..
ak-par mera ghar toh yhi hain.. nk sees to her.. he was getting more love on her. haa babasaa mera ghar nk se hain unka ghar yehi h na.. main isse sajaugi.. nk ko khabhi yeh manjur nhi hoga ki woh ghar jamai banke rahe aur mujhe bhi.. hum yahi rahege. . main ek patni hu beti bad main hu..
aapko mujhe blessing deni chahiye khush rehne ki yeh life meri chuni hui h main bhut khush hu yaha. . yeh chota nhi mere dil ke karib wala ghar hain sach..
vis-par beti tum yeh is liye keh rahi kyoki apko samaj hi kitni hain waha sab rahege aap dono ko baba ka pyar milega nai life milegi sab kuch bada hoga..
nk-aap jo chahte h woh mumkin nhi hain.. main is ghar ko chodke nhi jauga na meri wife aap sudar gye h na toh apni beti ko khush rehne dijiye jid kyo kar rahe.. main itna toh kama lunga ki apni wife ko khush rakh saku.. aap ek baap bake apni beti se milte rahiye par waha le jane ki bat kehke mujhe yeh mat show kariye ki main garib hu aur kuch nhi kar sakta..
ak-nhi nk held his hand m so hpy. . thode nhi jayada main..
vis-main kya kahu aap dono khush rahiye aur hamesha sath rahiye.. aaiye beta..
varsha shorya packed all thing..
va-bhabhi yeh chabhi store ki ab aapke nam pure ghar ki bhi.. subah pani bhar lijiyega aur haa ek dusare ki care karte rahiyega hmm. hug to her..
ak-aap bhi..
sh-dhayan rakhna main aata rahuga..
ak-aap bhi bhaisaa..
va-khush rehna to nk..
nk-aap mujhe phone karna pahuch ke bhi aur rehke bhi ek call pe dhod ke aauga hmm..
va-i will take care..
sh-chinta mat kariye aap main rakhuga khayal..
nk-main bhi..
vis-ak beti khush rehna.
ak-g main khush hu..
vis-hmmm.. dey went..
in room nk was thinking still..
ak-kya socha kya hua.. kal bhagwan ko prasad chadaugi sab thik ho gya.. babasaa kitne pyar se aaye. woh sach main sudhar gye aaj sacha pyar dikha mujhe hena nk.. nk shout.. kya soch rahe aap..
nk-di ne call nhi kiya.. suddenly his phone ringing.. hloo aap pahuch gye thik ho na kuch hua toh nhi boliye na..
more part coming soon.
Edited by ruchinaksh - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
va-bas bas tu itna chila ke kyo bol raha.. main bhut bhut khush hu aur pata h mera wlcm kaise hua bhut sare roses ki barish hui mujhe chunari pehnai aur maine chawal ka kalash giraya aur rangin paw se enter hui..
nk-aap khush hain na kisi ne kuch bola toh nhi..
va-are nhi main khush hu... sun na bad main call karu babasaa kisi ko leke aaye hain.. bye..
nk-thank god sab thik hain main toh dar hi gaya tha..
ak-nk.. she said by holding his hand.. . aap itni tension kyo le rahe mere bhaisaa hain na jaise unhe aap par bharosha hai waise hi aapko un par hona chahiye na. agar koi insan bolta hain ki woh sudar gya hai toh ho sakta hain sudar gya ho.. ak sat on nks lap..
nk-ho sakta hain ak par ek bar chot khane ke bad mujhe pata nhi kyo yakin nhi ho raha un par. aap bura mat maniyega par jabtak mera dil nhi bolta main nhi manuga ki woh sudar gye hain. .
ak-nk.. bas ek hi bat bar bar.. huh.. main chali sone ke liye. . she was about to stood.. but nk grabbed to her by waist.
nk-bhut aachi hain.. gave naughty look.. bhut aachi hain..
ak-kya.. aachi hain..
nk-apki kamar..
ak-aacha g. kya kehna chahte hain aap..
nk-laugh.. yahi ki bhut aachi hain apki kamar matlb kamare ke samne jo padosan hain na woh madhu uski face.. so cute..
ak-kya dattt... gande apko dikta nhi.. throwed to him on bed.. huh.. she opened her arms nd showed her belly.. aachi hain na..
nk-hmm bhut sees her belly... ak opened her pallu nd throwed it
ak-dekhi nhi na essi..
nk-nhi.. she grabbed her belly. nd nk bite his lips.. aauchh..
ak-doing natak.. kya hua.. went near of nk... bollow some air.. bhut aachi hain na apki madhu.. went away.. nk felt her touch.. ak was laughing.. mujhse ulaj rahe she wear saree nd made plates..
but nk throwed it nd hug to her from back.. she took a deep breath... he grabbed her belly..
main toh is kamar ki bat kar raha tha jo meri hain mujhe tadpa rahi hain.. pagal bana rahi hain.. esse mat kariye warna..
ak-kya.. moaning. .
nk-warna.. i will... cut her nack.. her milky skin. roaming his hand on her belly nd unwearing all plates from pati coat..
ak-sshhh..
nk-kisses on her nack... i love u.. i love u.. i want u. .. ak laugh nd hug to him..
ak-jhoote kahi ke in ears...
nk-aacha dikhau mera pyar.. he went down nd held her waist.. meri nhi apki kamar ki kasam i love u.. kisses on belly button. .
ak-ammhh... moaning... nk was madly kissing on her waist. . suddenly he bite it..
ak screaming aah.. he stooped. . took to her in his hand..
nk-its show time..
ak-kya..
nk-pass aaiye batata hu... put to her on bed...
ak-kya batayege mujhe haa mujhe sab pata hain apke irade aur apka pagalpan.. he was admiring her lips wen she was telling.. her lovly eyes.. aap na nk bilkul... he picked a lipe kiss wen she was saying.. ak was shocked.. her eyes nd lips were opened for some time.. but nk pinched to ak.. than she starts moving..
nk covered to both with blanket.
in morning ak wokeup nd sees time it was so late..
ak-haw itni late nk ko office jana hai aur main.. she took bath nd got ready.. nk uthiye plz..
nk-amm aaoye na pass..
ak-nk jaldi aaiye na late ho gai 10 baj gye 10..
nk-kya shocked main.. omg boss will kill me.. he went in bathroom with bedsheet.. ak laugh..
ak-bedsheet.. nk throwed it.. omg breakfast.. she went in kitchen.. sees flour.. haw aata toh nhi hain.. freez main veg haw woh bhi nhi hain kya banau mujhe dhayan rakhna chahiye tha.. kya du nk ko main..
nk came in kitchen..
nk-ak breakfast... she starts crying..
ak-nk maine check hi nhi kiya sabji bhi nhi hai aur aata bhi nhi.. bhabhi hoti thi toh sara rasan lati thi main toh bas unki help karti thi.. sry nk..
nk-sshh roiye mat. . chup ekdom.. main bahar kuch kha lunga yeh lijiye paise sabji le aaiyega hmm.. sry kissed on her forehead.. bye plz dont cry..
ak-hmm... he went.. she cleaned kitchen. . than someone knocked d door.. one men was in door..
kon..
men-nk sir ne khana bheja hain apke liye.. ak got hpy so much..
ak-main janti thi nk mujhse bhut pyar karte hain.. love u too nk.. she finished breakfast.. than she got a call..
hloo.. hii bhabhi kya kar rahe ho..
va-kam koj rahi kuch mil hi nhi raha yaha aap thik h na.. subah breakfast diya na aachese..
ak-bhabhi aapko pata hain aata bhi nhi tha aur sabji bhi.. main nk ko tiffin nhi de pai woh bahar se khana khaya aur mere liye bhi diya..
va-kya.. par aap uthi nhi kya subah.. sayam uncle ki shop se le aati..
ak-mujhe toh dhayan hi nhi raha main late bhi uthi abhi jaugi.. are pocha kaha hain..
va-aap pocha karegi she had tears..
ak-haa apne ghar main kam karugi na..
va-jo kitchen ki piche door hai na waha pe hain.. aacha apne pani bhara 10 se 11 aur subah 8 baje ka time hain phir sidhe sam ko milega..
a-kya nhi maine toh nhi bhara..
va-bhabhi bagal main madhu ke yaha se le aaiyega woh de degi haa..
ak-mujhe late ho rahi already lophar hone wali h kuch kam nhi hua sabji bhi lani hain aur pani bhi.. bye..
va-bye... kyo essa hota h..
sh-kya hua hug to her..
va-jisse kam karna h woh esse hi baithi hai aur jo mehlo ki rani h usse pura kam karna pad raha waqt ka kaisa pher hain..
sh-sayad isse woh jimedar bane.. bas...
ak went to take water..
ak-madhu plz mujhe ek bucket pani milega..
ma-haa jarur aaiye.. lijiye.. ak took water in bucket. . but she was unable to held it.. she tired so much.. aah..
kaise le jau.. suddenly whole water went on floor.. she starts crying.. pura pani sab barbad ho gya kaise le ke jau ab pani.. she again went in madhu house..
ak-mujhe bas thoda pani aur chahiye woh pani gir gya mujhse..
ma-koi bat nhi aap ek kam kariye aadhi balti le jaiye na..
ak-haan thanku.. . she took water. . ab jaldi se pocha kar leti hu.. she finished jhaddu but tired.. bhabhi toh mujhe kuch karne hi nhi deti thi main kar paugi na nk ko essa toh nhi lagega ki main kuch nhi kar sakti..
she was doing pocha but she dont know about.. whole water went on floor..
mujhse kuch ho hi nhi raha sam hone main aa gai nk ko khana bhi nhi de pai even bat bhi nhi kar pai main unse ab rat ka khana kaise banau.. haa sabji cut kar leti hu.. par kosish karugi banane ki.. she cut veg..
kya haan bhabhi sault dalti hain haldi haa.. she put veg on stove nd now she take aata.. but put so much water in that.. pura pani pani ho gya.. mujhse kuch nhi hota kuch bhi nhi hota. . she saw veg chii kitna ganda bana hain.. she went in room nd starts crying...
nk came nd sees to house..
nk-pani yaha pani ak.. shout.. went in kitchen yeh kya hain aata.. sabji.. ak... went in room.. ak aap ro kyo rahi hain.
ak-nk... hug to him.. . mujhse kuch nhi hoga khabhi bas mom ki gudiya hu main.. aaj maine jhaddu pocha karne ki kosish ki but ho nhi paya aur khana aaj de bhi nhi pai apko subah abhi bhi bana nhi pai main kuch hota hi nhi..
nk-aapse sab hoga bas di nhi hain na so aap gabra gai i promise main apko akle nhi padne dunga.. aap meri kitni chinta karti hai pyar karti hai koi karta hain kya.. aur toh aur mehlo ki rani hoke aap mere liye sab karna chahti hai toh kya main apko khana banane main help nhi kar sakta hmm..
ak-apko aata hain..
nk-hmm aata hain na pehle aap kahiye mujhe sab hoga wipe her tears.. aacha chup smile kariye..
ak-ee..
nk-aachese... pehle pet puja phir kam duja moves his finger on her lips.. karegi na..
ak-mere teacher g pehle khana banana... dey went in kitchen. ..
nk-yeh dekhiye isme thoda aur aata add kariye bas.. aaiye.. ak put her hand on bowl nk too from back hugging position. .
bas bas thoda thoda chalaiye bas... ab thoda pass aaiye hmm.. smelling her hair..
ak-mujhe aata h thoda kiya hain ab isko main rakh deti hu hena..
nk-hmm.. bas thoda aur.. went close of her nack..
ak-ho gya teacher... g.. ab veg..
nk-are haa... yeh toh ready hain bas masale dal do see nd told to her ab chalaiye..
ak did it.. but nk hug to ak nd starts romance..
ak-pehla kam yeh h na romance bad main haa... aaiye main roti sek deti hu..
nk- dono ke liye oki.. dey sat dinner on table..
ak-lijiye..
nk-aap bhi aaiye na sat to her on his lap.. hmm pehle aap.. kaisa hain..
ak-nice aap kitne talented hain n main toh.. nk feed to ak..
nk-it is ymmm... i loved it aap esse hi meri god main baith ke khiyega. .
ak-mera toh sukun hi isme hai.. socha nhi tha itna pyar milega sach m vry lucky..
nk-m lucky... bas month complete hone wala 30 are kuch..
ak-apko yad hain kuch aane wala..
nk-amm haa meri salary aane wali hain..
ak-aur kuch..
nk-bas khaiye na.. dey finished dinner.. nk was in room... ak ka bdy aa raha main manuga waaw i m so so so hpy..
ak-mera bdy bhi bhool gye milk deke bat nhi karugi she came in room.. apka milk..
nk-milk rehne dijiye pass aaiye pushed to her on bed went up of her..
ak-kya..
nk-wat kya.. laugh gussa mat hoiye aacha nhi lagta..
ak-gussa nhi caressing his hair pyar aa raha aap par kyoki apne meri help ki.. pass aaiye.. nk came close.. ak picked a kiss on his cheeks..
nk-hmm maja nhi aaya ek kiss yaha bhi lipe pe.
ak-jayada mitha khayege toh mote ho jayege jitna hai utne main khush rahiye..
nk-madam pyar khabhi kam nhi hota yeh toh badega aur bhyt badega. . maine sararat to ki hi nhi hain.. moves his finger on her hair..
ak-toh main bhi karu moves her finger on his hair..
nk-kariye aacha lag raha..
ak-aacha milk kon lega taqat ke liye..
nk-taqat toh apko chahiye mujhe bear karne ki.
ak-datt gande..
nk-sach dard ho raha..
ak-pyar ho raha dheere se..
nk-apne meri life main pyar hi pyar bhar diya hain.. main bhut khush hu apko pakar..
ak-main.. jayada mat boliye najar lag gai toh.. she had tears in her eyes.. she put kala tikka on nks head..
nk-i cant see tears..
ak-khushi ke h behne dijiye.. plz.. thoda dard thoda pyar sab jaruri hai hena..
nk-hmm.. he kissed on her lips.. ab aap so jaiye thak gai h na aaiye.. he hug to her..
ak-apko meri kitni chinta h hena..
nk-hmm i know apko work karne ki habit nhi h par aap kosish karke thak jati hain thabhi..
ak-hmm..
nk-i love u ak.. ak.. she slept.. so gai.. love u... in morning ak wokeup.. are subah ho gai..
she went in kitchen. .
nk wokeup nd got ready..
he went in kitchen..
nk-ak..
ak-nk aap uth gye ready bhi ho gye.. maine socha Naha toh main bad main lungi pani on kiya aur phir rat ko veg cut ki thi na aasani ho gai khana banane main.. tiffin.. aaiye breakfast kariye..
nk-see my wife is perfect hena..
ak-hmm kuch bhool rahe aap..
nk-kya..
ak-salary 30 ko..
nk-laugh haa gift bhi u want..
ak-no... huh...
dey were in hull..
nk-aa kilaiye.. ak feed to him..
ak-aaiyega rat ko main bhi apke hath se khaugi..
nk hug to ak..
nk-bye love u..
ak-love u too.. main handle kar lungi sab ok tension mat lijiyega..
nk-apko kaise pata..
ak-i know all bye..
nk-bye.. ak mujhe apka bdy yad h main celebrate karuga ap bhi dekhte reh jayegi essa..
ak-bdy yad h ya nhi 😲. .
wat will happen next???
so guyzzz plz plz plz say something.. if u r reading this part plz leave comment.. small.
plz press like button if u like this part.. sry for mistakes..
plz m waiting...
precap-vis want to celebrate aks bdy in mehel but nk wants in his house.. wat. ?
Edited by ruchinaksh - 8 years ago
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waaw how u posted video their 😃. . loved it ❤️

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