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Pragati-naksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

wow awesome part yaar... poor akshi..

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varsha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: rainanaksh
ok..

pls jaldi mera net ab thik ho gaya hai😆

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raina verma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: ----varsha05---

pls jaldi mera net ab thik ho gaya hai😆

ok madam jii par thoda soch lu ki likhna kya hai ?

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varsha

@CuRlyTalEs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: rainanaksh
ok madam jii par thoda soch lu ki likhna kya hai ?

ohk bye mai ab apne coaching jarahi hoo

aaj thoda jaldi hai bye

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raina verma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: ----varsha05---

ohk bye mai ab apne coaching jarahi hoo
aaj thoda jaldi hai bye

bye..

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raina verma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#126

PART 22...

NEXT MORNING...

naitik and mohit came from their room and find everything normal...today is nikhil's engagement...and all are very busy in the preprations...

nk-yaha toh sab taiyaariya chal rahi hai...good atleast ab koi naya drama toh nahi chal raha hai..

mo- toh tu kya chahta tha ki sab kal ki baat ko lekar rote rahe...

nk-nahi yaar...ye toh bahut accha hai ki...sab usss baat ko bhool gaye hai...ab jakar sab shadi ko toh fully enjoy kar payenge...

when akshara came from out...

ak-good morning..

naitik gave her a fake smile...

nk-good nite...

mo- naitik usne good nite nahi good morning kaha hai...

nk-ohh haa...sorry akshara mai wo...actually good morning...

mo-itni subah subah kaha gayi thi...?

ak-wo actually mai aur rituraj shaam ke liye kuch arrangements karne gaye the...

mo-ohhh nice..

nk- uski kya zaroorat thi...mujhe keh diya hota mai akela hi kar deta...

ak-kuch kaam saath milkar liye jaye...toh zyada behtar hota hai naitik...khair jane do...tum dono fresh ho jao...phir bhai aur kaka bhi aane wale hai...saath me bhabhi bhi..toh tum dono mil lena...ok

nk-hmmm...par tumhari bhabhi abhi se yaha aa jayengi kya ?

ak-ha...kyunki unka iss duniya me koi bhi nahi hai...

mo-ohhh so sad...accha akshara kuch kaam ho toh hame bata do...hum bhi kar de..

ak-filhaal toh jo maine kaha hai..wo kar do..phir baad me kaam batati hu...

mo-ok..

and she went from there...

nk- yaar tune akshara ke kehne ka matlab samjha kya ?

mo-haa...

nk-par mai nahi...lekin baato se lag raha tha..ki wo mujhe koi taana maar rahi thi...

mo-jane de naaa..tu apne bache kuche dimaag par zyada zor mat daall..ok

nk- chal..

after some time...

kaka and nikhil came in maaheshwari house...and akshara told them about all her friends...

kaka is very much imperresed by everyone...

but naitik and mohit was not there...

akshara hugs nikhil and asked him about dulhan...

ak-bhai tum toh aa gaye..par hamari hone wali bhabhi kaha hai...

" mai yaha hu " a familiar voice came from the door...and all gets happy to see her...

nik-ye hai akshara tumhari bhabhi..rashmi...rashmi singhania...

akshara become confused to hear her name..but in happiness she forgot everything...and hugs her..

ak-hi rashmi..i am akshara...ur nanand..

rs-hi akshara...

vr-aree koi mujhe bhi milwa do...

ak-ha kyu nahi ...

and akshara introduce rashmi to all her friends...

ak-abhi tum itne dosto se mil lo rashmi..baaki do dost room me hai...par usse pehle tum yaha baitho..

kaki- nahi beta akshara aisa karo tum dono saheliya bahu ko andar apne room me le jao...waha baithkar aaram se baate karo...shaam hone me zyada der nahi hai...

akshara and varsha takes her in their rooom...and rashmi too is very happy in their company..

ak- so rashmi bhabhi...sorry kya mai tumhe abhi se bhabhi bula sakti hu..

rs-ha kyu nahi...

vr-ha toh theek ha ab se hum dono tumhe bhabhi bulayenge..

ak-accha bhabhi kya aapke ghar me sach me koi nahi hai..i mean...

rs-ha bahbhi...

vr-bhabhi ?

rs-sorry akshara pata nahi mere muh se kaise tumhare liye bhi bhabhi nikal gaya...i am sorry agar tumhe bura laga ho...

ak-its ok..

rs-thanks...par ,mai ummeed karti hu..ki tumhari shadi bhi jald se jald ho jaye...

vr-umeed kya karna...akshara ki toh shadi../.

rs-u mean kya aapki shadi ho chuki hai..?

ak- ha hui bhi hai aur divorce bhi hone wala hai...

rs-par kyu ?

vr- wo bahut lambi story hai..

rs-ha par aap logo ne kuch kiya nahi...

vr-akshara ne use bahut manane ki koshish ki...par wo isse pyaar tak nahi karta..

rs- toh shadi kaise ho gayi...

ak-galti se...

rs-toh kya hua..shadi ke baad bhi pyaaar toh ho jata hai..

ak-ha hota hai..par use kaun samjhaye..?

vr-waise bhi iska pati bahut khadoos hai..

ak-varsha tu aise mat keh..

rs-kya sach me..

ak-hmmm...par thoda thoda..

rs-koi baat nahi..mai aise khadooos ladko ko acche se theek kar sakti hu...

ak-par kaise..?

rs-kyunki mere dada bhi aise hi the...ekdum khadoos..par wo dil ke bahut acche the..

vr- the matlab..?

rs-wo sab jane do...ab mai aa gayi hu..toh tum dono pati patni ko zaroor milwa doongi...

vr-accha par ye hoga kaise..?

rs-pehle aap dono mujhe bataiye ki akshara ke pati milenge kaha..?

ak-yahi par...

rs-yahi par..wo bhi isi ghar me rehte hai kya..?

ak-hmmm...wo tum dono ki shadi attend karne aaye the..aur hamari hi shadi ho gayi..

rs- koi baat nahi...aap dono pehle mujhe unse milwa dijiye..ok

vr-ok...chaliye

ak-nahi varsha tu aisa kuch nahi karegi...mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai..

vr-kuch nahi akshara tu chinta mat kar..

ak-par tu jaanti hai naa..

rs-akshara tum pls chinta mat karo...mai apne nandoi ki baato ka bura nahi maanungi..ok

ak-theek hai..par tum dono ke saath nahi jaungi..

vr-accha theek hai mat jaa..

rs-hum jaldi se aa jayenge..

ak-ha aur aakar ready bhi toh hona hai...mai tab tak lehnga nikaal leti hu..

vr-ha..

and both varsha and rashmi went from there to naitik's room...

rs-varsha aap jao mai khud baat kar loongi..

vr-nahi bhabhi mai rehti hu naa..

rs-pls !

vr-ok..

and she went from there...

rashmi knock at the door...and mohit opened it...

both became shocked to see eachother...they were numb to see other...

mo(in a silent tone)...shhh...tum yaha ?

rs-tum yaha kya kar rahe ho..?

mo-shhh...bilkul awaz mat karna...chupke se andar aa jao..

and she silently came in the room...

mo-naitik andar baathroom hai..

rashmi gets frightened by this...

rs-kya..? dada andar hai..

mohit nodded his head in yes...

suddenly naitik came out from the bathroom without seeing here and there...

nk-kaun hai mohit..?

" dada "...

naitik shocked to hear this from anyone...and turn to face her...he beacme red to see her face..

rs- dada aap... !

nk-mohit isse keh do ki yaha se chali jaye..

mo-naitik yaar...sun

nk-tune suna nahi ki maine kya kaha...

rs-dada pls aap meri baat...

nk-mohit tune suna nahi...kya...he shouted on him..

mo-rashmi pls abhi tum yaha se jao...ok..

rs-par mujhe dada se baat karni hai...

her eyes became teary so as naitik...

nk-par mujhe kuch nahi sunnaa..

rs- dada mujhe bahut khushi hai..ki aap meri shadi me aaye..

but he is listening anything..

mo-rashmi tum jao...ready ho...mai baat karta hu naitik se...ok

rs-okk

and she went from there...

mo-ek baar uski baat sun nahi sakta tha..kya..?

nk-nahi..

mo-tu itna patthar dil kyu ban jata hai...mere dost...

nk-aur usne jo kiya..

mo-aree pyaar hi toh kiya hai..usme kya burai hai..

nk-burai pyaar karne me hai..par usse kisi ki jaan chali jaye..toh

mo-ye tu kya keh raha hai..?

nk-kuch nahi...

he was about to go...when mohit stops him..

mo-ab kaha ja raha hai..?

nk- apni ek choti si galti ko badi saza banane...

mo-matlab..?

nk-tumjhe abhi samajh me aa jayega...

naitik quickly came down in hall and searched for kaka and kaki...they both were in temple and doing some prepration...when naitik came near them..

kaki-auniye ji..yahi hai wo ladka..jiski..

kak-mai samajh gaya...

nk-mai wo...ye kehne aaya tha ki...

kaka-tum chinta mat karo beta..mai jald se jald akshara ka divorce karwa kar..uski shadi..

nk-uski koi zaroorat nahi hai uncle...

kaki-matlab..?

nk-yahi ki mai akshara se poori reeti riwaaz se shadi karne ke liye ready hu..

kaka and kaki both become happy...and prays to god for thier both children..

varsha hears this and really became happy for akshara...

she quickly ran towards akshara's room...calling akshara akshara...and came in the room...rashmi too came in the room varsha arrieved...

ak-kya hua..varsha..?

rashmi wipes her tears asked the same...

vr-akshra naitik ne tumse shadi karnne ke liye haa kar di hai..

ak-toh isme kya badi baat hai...wo toh ho hi chuka hai naa.

vr-aree pagal..poori reeti riwaaz se..

ak-sach...!

vr-haa..maine abhi use kaka kaki se baat karte hue suna...

akshara hugs her tightly.."thank u sooo much varsha.."

vr-maine kya kiya hai...jo hua hai wo sab hamari nayi rashmi bhabhi ki wajah se hua haii..

ak-haa sach kaha tune...

she came near rashmi and hugs her too..

rs-congarulation..!

ak-thanks..

rs-congratulation dada aapko bahut khush rakhenge...

PRECAP...naksh ansd nishmi's engagement...

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varsha

@CuRlyTalEs

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#127

wow raina good 1 yaar

its awosome i loving it

omg its very emotional

poor rashmi

and cute naksh

i think ki naitik ye shadi akshraa se badla lene ke liye kar raha hai

but it interesting yaar

pls jaldi update karna

precap its nice]

omg naksh ki sagai

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avisha

@avinaksh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#128

wow raina di... beautifully expressed !!!!! the emotions !!!! rashmi's entry too... and her coming infront of naitik and uske muh se akshara k liye bhabhi nikalna... so well planned!!! each and every thing
aj precap Mr India nhi hua ... 🤣 well waiting eagerly for next part
btw??? how are you ??? fine now??

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raina verma

@NAKSHMYJAAN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: ----varsha05---
wow raina good 1 yaar
its awosome i loving it
omg its very emotional
poor rashmi
and cute naksh
i think ki naitik ye shadi akshraa se badla lene ke liye kar raha hai
but it interesting yaar
pls jaldi update karna
precap its nice]
omg naksh ki sagai

thank u soo much varshu for ur lovely comment..