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Posted: 13 years ago
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OS: Hum Saath Saath Hai😃

So now looking at how the story line goes!!And how much tissue CVs wants to give us..I will look at the positive side and decided to make an OS'Plus also Stuti gave us some more tips in trying to hit the chaska meter harder!!So an OS for a try!!

My thoughts..of how i predict it will be..but then again idk😆

My try OS😆

Starting from the precap!!😕

Naitik left in the morning!!🥺It was getting dark,Akshara sat there on the bed!😭!She was silently crying!!I guess she was really upset!!Just then Girja enters to put water on the table!!Akshara feels something and cries out in pain!!She informs Girja that she can feel pain and to call Maa,Girja tries and then runs downstairs to tell everyone!!

Akshara is rushed to the hospital!!She cannot really move as she is in lots of pain!😭She barely walked down the stairs and was finally on the stretcher!All this time only thing came out of her mouth was Naitik Naitik and Naitik!!😭😭

Akshara is in the labor room, for like 2 hours,Naitik is still not there,he call G3 and informs her that he will be there the day after!!😭

Finally the baby is born,It's a boy!!Akshara is so tired she doesn't have a clue for anything.😛

The nurse gets the baby and takes it outside!!Everyone is standing in a line,[just like the scene in Hum Saath Saath Hai]😃One by one lifts the baby boy!! Everyone is teared eyed and expressing their joy.😃😃😃

Naitik on the other hand,completes the meeting in the most professionalized manner and it finishes that same day!!But he receives a flight only the following day!!😊

Naitik is upset,he has mixed feelings,feeling guilty, miserable and sad!!He just feels like nothing.😡 On the other hand,still everyone is beside Akshara,the baby is taken and the nurse takes it,and returns it after completing what was to be LOL

Akshara is in the room,everyone notices she is feeling terrible,maybe a little advice and then some privacy did the job!!😭

She was alone,she felt exactly the same way. Murmuring ''Kash aap hote Naitik,Mera sapna bhi pura hota aur hum saath saath humara bacha bhi dekpate!!😭😭

The baby comes,she gently kisses it on its forehead!!😃Looking at it resemblance to see which feature belongs to who!😆!She gave a sigh of relief!!She hugged the baby gently,while this was happening, tears of joy ran through her eyes!!😉She did nazar ka tikka herself also.😃

The baby fell asleep,and the nurse place it in the hospital cradle itself beside Akshara, Rajshri stayed with her👏.Soon Akshara fell asleep!!Her phone was battery off and Naitik could not get through to her.😲

The next morning!!😃

Naitik reaches Udaipur!!He is wearing a black suit and white shirt inside!!😎He gets into the taxi and tells the driver to go to City Hospital.He reaches. No one expects him to come.Woh bhi at 5: 30 am. He is walking like a super hero.🤣He goes and opens the door. Akshara is already up and Rajshri is not present at the moment.😃

Akshara sees him,she turns away her face even though she is surprised he came back so early,☺️ The baby is in Akshara's hand!!😃 Naitik knew that he was now a father to a sweet and cute little baby boy,😃 He went to Akshara,held her shoulder and asked "Aap thik toh ho nah"m very sorry" 😉Akshara melted and though her expressions Naitik also understood,😃 He looked at the baby and says, with a tear cracked in his voice "Akshara ye toh bilkul aap pe gaya"😃He smiles, Akshara moves around a little,Naitik sits on the bed with her🤪. ☺️Together they hold the baby!!Both Naitik and Akshara head come together pn a tilt side!!They look at each other and the baby!! All three smiles together!!😍 Rajshri sees them!!She is happy!!⭐️

Happy Ending,Hope You enjoyed!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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me first me first...

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hey raz... awesome yaar... very simple and real... I could imagine whole scene well... very well written... do write like this more... 😃

n haa sorry for the late reply... I was busy yesterday...
Edited by saru.g - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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AAwww wow razia it ws awesome i cud imagine all this yaar too good 😃😃😃
Edited by pree4ru - 13 years ago
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Lovely OS raz!!! its so so so nice!!!
I could imagine it all!!
loved it!

Edited by -Stutz- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ohh myy Gawd..
u touched a raw nerve out here razia..
it was my dream to see naksh holding the baby first, seeing it together!😔
nevertheless, it is certainly beautiful.. though i want him to come back from the airport only. gosh im crying thinking about the precap..[:'(]
but awesome, awesome job razia! 🤗
Edited by moonlight08 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Really thanks raz nice one atleast here dimiri cannot come and spoil our happiness but really so so good to see naksh seeing baby together wow...😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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raz..i m really sorry par pehle mein yehi kahoongi ki dimri mathe ye na pade..i dnt want 2 happen this...mein chathi hoo ki natik hi pehle apne munna ko dekhe😳..
anyway...it was a good attempt..👍🏼i was really sad while reading it..felt very bad 4 naksh...har os padke hum yehi kkahenge ki ki kash issa ho lekin mein yehi kahoongi ki kash issa na ho ..par dimri issa kuch dikhawoongi...😔
its a nice one.🤗.tum bi dimri ki tarah sochne lag gay🤪
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow wow razia sooo beautiful OS yaar just loved it

sooo cute and emotional scence when akshara takes baby her hand she resemblance naitik wow...😃
ha but serial naitik ho baba i hope naitik last may ajaya...😃

and last naksh scene was superb dear u describe sooo beautiful wow while i reading i imagining...😍 the scence yaar

tumay rj beecha kyun layhe baba serial may kam nahi ti kya woh yah be ...😆
thank u givimg such beautiful os ...👏
Edited by fazeel - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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gud 1... touched completely...😊

feel very gud to c naksh with their baby...our dream!!!!

but hope he comes back soon n c the baby n akshara 1st...
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Originally posted by: i4naksh

raz..i m really sorry par pehle mein yehi kahoongi ki dimri mathe ye na pade..i dnt want 2 happen this...mein chathi hoo ki natik hi pehle apne munna ko dekhe😳..

anyway...it was a good attempt..👍🏼i was really sad while reading it..felt very bad 4 naksh...har os padke hum yehi kkahenge ki ki kash issa ho lekin mein yehi kahoongi ki kash issa na ho ..par dimri issa kuch dikhawoongi...😔
its a nice one.🤗.tum bi dimri ki tarah sochne lag gay🤪

kya karoo majboor jo kardiye
Naitik is to see the baby last..so i heard..read somewhere 😭

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