MY FFdil toh baccha hein ji 2,pt 18@pg127 - Page 86

Originally posted by: i4naksh

vo toh h...😳😳😳 natik in sab ki expert jo h😳

Originally posted by: shayal1436

omg its so tempting now😆 kab update karogii mujhe padna hai😍

aj heee..balki kuch h der mein tum kab tak online ho??😕😳

Originally posted by: i4naksh

aj heee..balki kuch h der mein tum kab tak online ho??😕😳

umm thori he der tak lekin tum aaj update kar rahi ho toh im gna come on i/f 4rm my ipod just too read the ff so im gna b online😉

umm thori he der tak lekin tum aaj update kar rahi ho toh im gna come on i/f 4rm my ipod just too read the ff so im gna b online😉 oh thank u its actually all set abi zyaada lig nah honge yaham par i will try 2 make it soon😳😳

hiii nakshians...i m back with my updates...this part was specially 4 all naksh fans who were just mind blowing!!!!

recap

::natik pulled the blanket...(up 2 ur imaginations ,i think u have all imagined well))

part 17

A

nother romantic day...

the scene shifts 2 their room which was overfilled with fragnance of their love,the room perfectly looks like a romantic palace...naksh were still sleeping @ was very close 2 each other,natik opened his eyes @ saw his lady love sleeping next 2 him,he reflashed their last night memmories which brought a smile 2 his face,he kisses on her cheeks

nt:ap sach keh rahi thi...apke surprises ke bhadh mein toh poori tarah pagal ho chuka hoo...aur apko meri pagalpan jhelna pada

she take a turn @ placed her hands around his neck,natik fastly closed his eyes .akshi wake up @ admired her darling hubby who was cleverly acting as if he was in deep sleep,she sat up near him @ slowly ruffled his hair @ kissed on his 4head

ak:ap sach mein bahuth bada pagal h...

she noticed that diamond mirror near their bed,she take it @ shyingly looked herself through it.suddently natik hugged her 4m back

nt:

kitna pagal hoo mein...

akshi was doubly shocked 1rstly 2 see him up @ 2ndly what he had said

ak(blushing):ap sone ki natak kar rahe the...

nt:hm... jaise ap kar rahi thi...

akshi again got surprised

ak:apko kaise pata chala???

nt:

apke dil ki dhadkan itna tez(fast) jho tha...aur iss honton se vo pyaari si muskan ..se mujhe sab pata chal gaya

they both hugged.they heard a knock at the door

nt:lol...apki doosra shythan b agaya

akshi opened the door @ karan straightly ran 2wards natik @ sat on his lap

k:pappa vo kab ayega???

nt:kon??

k:pappa apne kal bola tha na agar mein jaldi so jawoonga toh mere sath khelne keliye koi ayega..kaham h vo?

nt(naughtily looking at akshi):zaroor ayega...vo bhi bahuth jaldi..

mein aur tumari mamma milkar application di h...jaldi approve b ho jaayenge,h na akshara...

akshi shyingly ran 2wards bath room

T

hey got ready @ was about 2 leave akshi take him 2 the room @ placed her head on his chest

nt:kya huwa akshara,hum yaham kyon ayi?

ak;vaise toh ap mujhe bahuth saare surprises de chuke h lekin kal apne jho kiya h na vo mere liye bahuth khaas tha specially vo home screen par hamari beethe huwe kal...

nt:aur ap..ap meri khushi keliye apna man badal diya...ak,jab apne kaha ki ap mujhe doosri baar pappa bananekeliye tayar h...toh mano duniya ki saari khushiyam mere baahom mein agay

ak:issa nah h natik...hamara rishta pyaar ki h...hum donom ko apne apne

likes aur dislikes hote h..hum shayad ek doosre keliye hamare likes ko nah badal payenge par ek doosre ki khushi keliye hum apni choti si dislikes ko like mein badal sakthe h na...issa karne se hamare rishta aur mazboot ho jayenge

natik got lost in her words

ak:nt,ab ap kya sochne lagi h?

nt:

kuch nah ye soch rahi thi ki pichale janam mein issa kya kiya hoga ki iss janam mein bhagavan khush hokar mujhe ap jaise humsafar di..

they dissolved in each others arms ...

They reached near their car but couldnt find their driver.they waited 4 a long time but yet he didnt came

ak:nt,ab hum kya karein,driver b nah h,ab hum resort tak kaise jayenge..

nt:ap tension mat ligiye,mein h drive kartha hoo

ak:ap???nah nah,apo yaham ki rasthe ke baare mein kya pata...aur ap driving karenge nah hum taxi se jayenge..

nt:chi..chi..akshara ap apne pati ke baare mein isse sochkar rakha h

ak:aur b bahuth kuch sochkar rakha h...vo sab batane keliye mujhe ek aur janam ki zaroorat padegi...utne hein apki harkatein...

nt:(coming near h @wraping his arms around her)acha kya kya socha h??

ak:(pushing him)ap beech sadak par shuru ho gaya...

nt:teek h ap taxi se h ajayiye mein iss car mein h jawoonga

he sat on the car,akshi also came @ he started driving,he was not completely sure about the way but he somehow managed @now they reached at a place where the road divides in to 2 ways...

straight way @ the short cut way...natik wants 2 go through the short cut way but akshi sticked 2 the straight way

nt:ak,ap pareshan mat huwe agar hum iss rasthe se jayenga toh hum jaldi h pahunch jayenge...

ak:nah nt,hum seedhe rasthe se h jayenge aur ap is rasthe ko dekhiye...jungal jaise dikh rahe h agar koi gadbad ho gaya toh...nah risk le ne ki kya zaroorat h...

nt:apki toh tension lene ki adat h..zindangi mein thoda bahuth risk toh lena h chahiye

he again started his driving through the short cut way,to ease her fear he played a set of romantic songs in the car stereo... @ in between

he was doing some mischevious like bringing his face 2wards her,pulling her 2wards him,playing with karan etc...like that he smoothily drived 4 an hour...then the car suddently stopped at a place in which 3/4 of the portion were covered by forest

ak:(angrily)ab kya huwa natik??

nt:vo...lagtha car break down ho gaya...

ak:kya???

they got down,natik once again checked the car but he couldnt spot the correct problem

ak:ab hum kya karein??itne chote se bache ke sath..aur raat bi hone wala h...

nt:akshara,issa karthe h aj raat hum yehi kahi rukh jaate h aur kal kisi mechanic ko bulaakar car ko teek karenge,ap chinta mat kigiye mein hoo na...

ak:yehi toh meri sabse badi chinta h...mein apse kya kahoo..mein h pagal thi ki apki baaton par agay...

nt:

pagal pati ki pagal patni...kya jodi h..h na

ak:(angrily raised her hands 2 hit him)nt...

they started walking searching 4 a place 2 stay 4 this night..karan was in akshi*s hand @ she become tired after carrying him 4 a long time,natik was easily walking by carrying a small bag,akshi noticed it @ handed karan 2 him

aK:ligiye natik doosron ko fasakar khudh araam se chal raha h..pata nah agae kya hoga?

akshi fearfully looked around

he brought her in his arms

nt:ak,mujhe daatne se hum halat toh nah badal sakthe h na..

hume ye pal b huskar ghusarna chahiye...i m sure,hum iss jungal mein b khoob enjoy karenge

ak:apko toh bas ek mauka chahiye...romance karne ka..chahe vo kator jungal ho ya phir beech sadak...

nt:ye sab apki sath ka azar h...vaise b hamari romantic trip aur romanchak ho gaya ..jabse hum yaham aye h hum kuch adventourous jaisa kuch nah kiya, aj vo bi poori ho gayi

naak:bas.. meethi meethi batein karna koi apse seekhe..pata nah rahene keliye koi jagah milenge b ya nah

nt:mil gaya

he pointed 2wards a small hut made up of grass @ palm leaves,they become delighted 2 see it,they knocked the door but no1 were there,natik was about 2 go inside

ak:nt,hum isse kaise kisike ghar bina bataye rah sakthe h..

nt:ak,ab hum kya kar sakthe h...jab vo ayenge tab hum apni situation batayenge toh vo b samajh jayenge...ap ayiye

they got in.there was only 1 room,there weren*t any house hold furnitures except a single old coat made up of coir@some vessels

ak:bhagavan ka lakh lakh shukar h ki hume ye ghar mila

nt:hm...akshara ap jaldi yaham saaf kigiye na...

ak:sirf mein h nah ap donom ko b meri madat karna padega

nt:vo toh hum karega h... (he gave a wink at karan @ karan showed his thumps up)

They started their cleaning works 4m a corner,karan @ natik was in their full mischevious mood,they were disturbing akshi in all possible ways,karan was polluting the place where she had already cleaned @ thereby increasing her anger @ work,natik was continuosly iritating her through his deeds,she got angry...

ak:karan ye kya kar rahe h chodiye ...tum vaham jakar baito..mere kam ko aur mat badawo

he knew that akshi would be in very anger so he stopped his acts @ went @ sat in a corner with a serious face..

but natik was afterall natik,he was double naughtier than karan,so he continued his deeds

ak;nt...kya apse alag batana padega..agar madat na kar sake toh kamsekam disturb mat kigiye..

nt:ak,mein apki madat h kar rahi hoo..

he came behind her @ kissed on her neck

ak:issi madat mujhe nah chahiye...ap uss corner mein jakar saaf kigiye

nT: dara kyon rahi h..mein jaa raha hoo na..

he helplessly left,karan smiled seeing this,natik got angry seeing it

nt:tu hazz mat tujhe toh pehle h bhaga diya tha na..

he started his job,still his eyes were at akshi,he got an idea 4 bringing her closer 2 him,he began 2 yell in pain

she came near him

ak:nt,kya huwa??

nt:ak,mere ankhom mein dekhiye na...

akshi thought something had gone in his eyes so she blowed air in 2 his eyes..natik was naughtily enjoying this moment where he can admire her easily.

ak:nt,ab teek h??

nt:(very dramatically)ahh...nah akshara,kuch h ap teek se dekhiye..

she again looked carefully

ak:nah natik kuch ba nah h,apko yuuhi laga hoga

nt:nah ak,h...apko nah dikh raha h...

ak:kya natik?kuch b toh nah

nt:h na

mera pyaar!!!(very romantically)

ak:toh ye baat thi..

cheater...apko bahuth masti suujh raha h na..ab ap h ye poore kamre ko saaf karenge..

she turned 2wards other side,he stood behind her @ placed his head on her shoulder by crossing his hands around her

nt:cheating nah pyaar h madam...ap mujhse door bhagthi rehthi h...aur apko pass lane keliye mujhe ye sab bahana dootna pad raha h..

she smiled, turned back@ hugged him..

ak:ap b na natik kya kya karthe rahethe h...

nt:hm...apke sath pane keliye kuch b karega!!

both smiled 2gether,karan was watching all these @ was feeling very anger @ jealouseness...(akhir h toh natik ka beta)

k:mera toh koi value h nah h...(which used 2 b the natiks dialogue)

naksh were astonished

nt: akshara,yaham koi jal raha h...

they came near karan

ak:nt,ap teek keh rahe the..yaham se kuch jalne ki khushboo aa rahe h...

they naughtily looked at karan whose face was still swollen...

nt:haa akshara...karan hame sath dekhkar jal raha h

k:nah mein kyon jaloo??

nt:acha...

he started tickling him 2 make him tell the truth,akshi also joined,karan couldnt control his smile @ he jumped in 2 akshi*s lap 2 escape 4m natik,he hugged her infront of natik after pushing him away 4m her..@ gave him a naughty look...both ma @ son expressed their love through huggs @ kisses

natik was happily watching their love along with some jealousness

nt:hm...ab mein jal raha hoo...

trio smiled,they completed their cleaning works 2gether with lot of masti...

nt:lekin akshara yaham toh sirf ek h coat h,,jispar sirf ek h so sakthe h..

ak:koi baat nah natik ,ap coat par so jayiye mein neeche so jawoongi

nt:aur karan?

k:mein maa ke sath h so jawoonga

nt:ma ka munna..ab ye naam mein tujhe de raha hoo,teri mamma na ye bulakar mujhe bahuth chidathi thi

ak:ab toh mujhe lagtha h ki ap maa ka nah mera h munna h...ap maa ko bi itna pareshan nah kiya hoga jitna ap mujhe kiya h..mein garv se keh sakthi hoo ki mere pass do do munna h...bada munna(

pinchimg natik*s cheek)...@...chota munna(pinching karan*s cheek)

nt:(naughtily)issa kya kiya meine?

ak:shyathan...(hitting him)

she thought 4 a while,then came with a saree,@ was continuosly looking at roof

nt:ak,ye kya karne jaa rahi h..kya ap apne zindangi se itne na khush h ki ap suicide karne jaa rahi h...(controlling his smile)

ak:(hitting her head)shut up natik,ye joke tha

nt:ha...toh...

ak:agar mujhe suicide karna h tha toh ab nahi bahuth pehle h karna chahiye tha..uss din jab hum pehli baar mile the..

although he was joking,he completely become embaressed 22 hear it..

ak:mein karan keliye cradle banane keliye ye saree lekar ayi thi..par natik yaham toh koi chair b nah h jispar mein khade hokar mein iss saaree ko roof par bhandh sakoo

nt:chair nah toh kya huwa..mein hoo na..

he lifted her(like he lift in the kitchen romance after marriage) @ raised her up 2 the roof

then she made some knot on the roof using it,when she completed it,natik get back in mischevious mood.he kept holding her in his arms...he tickled her stomach using her face...akshi laughed like a baby,she lost balance @ both fell down...

akshi was still smiling although he had stopped tickling...@she didnt notice wen his smile turn 2 a killer 1...she realised it wen he started continuosly kissing her...akshi saw karan coming so she pushed him away @ got up where he laid on the ground with a naughty smile

she made a cradle using her saaree,karan liked his new coat,he was not ready 2 get down 4m it @ was happily playing with it.

ak:ye sab toh ho gaya ab khane ka kya hoga??

nt:(got up)ak,mein jaakar dektha hoo...kuch saman b le aata hoo...teek h..

ak:nt...nah mujhe bahuth dar laghtha h mein yaham akele nah rukh sakthi hoo

nt:ak,ap dariye mat..ap ek kaam kigiye darwaza bhabd kigiye..mere ane ki bhadh hi khulna teeh h mein jaldi awoonga.

he kissed on her 4head

nt:vaise b ye h na yaham apki body guard.. he smiled at him @ left

he came with in half an hour becoz he also was worried about her,as soon she saw him she huggd him,he understood her fear @ consoled her

nt:ak,ab mein agaya na...ye ligiye kuch saman h..isse ap khana bana ligiye...aur akshara parsom h mechanic ayega ,isiliye hame kal b yaham rukhna padega...

ak:teek h...mein jaldi khana banati hoo...

she started cooking food using fire wood..she was having problems as she was doing it 4 the 1rst time ,natik came near her @ helped her in cooking..suddently akshi*s eye got iritated due 2 the heavy smoke,natik become tensed @ checked her eyes ,seeing the tears in her eyes

nt:meri vagah se ap ro rahi h...

ak:chup kar natik apki vagah se nah iss dhoop ki vagah se..

nt:jhoot apki ye anzoo toh mera pyaar dekhkar h aya h...h na...

akshi couldnt deny,he placed his hands on her cheeks @ kisses on her eyes,suddently karan came 2wards them @ they got seperated...

nt:kya timing h...

k:mama mere sath khelo na..

ak:karan,agar mein tumhare sath kheloongi toh khana kon banayega ,ja aj tum akhele h khelna..

k:nah mujhe apke sath h khelna h...

ak:(naughtily )mein h kyon?tumhara pappa h na...pappa tumareliye ghoda banega...h na natik

nt:akshara ...ap...(one of his cute looks)

k:ghoda nah hathi...

ak:ha.. hathi...

he unwillingly agreed,he bent down @ karan sat on his back.he carried him through the full room .akshi was enjoying hearing their sweet nok jhok..

nt:abise mujhe hathi bana diya pata nah bada hokar kya haal kar dega mera??

ak:nt...(sweetly)

nt:hm...(with the same sweetness)

ak:pata nah mein pichele janam mein issa kya kiya hoga ki bhagavan mujhse khush hokar iss janam ap donom ko h mere pass bhej diya

nt:kaise nah bhejthe??nah toh hum khudhi apke pass bagkar a jate

they rushed 2wards her @ huggd her.

akshi came with food,natik sat on the ground but karan came @ sat on his lap,she came with 1 plate of food

nt:ak,ye kya h..sirf ek plate..hum hamesha se h sath mein khate h na phir...

ak:vo baat nah h natik..yaham toh sirf ek h plate tha...

nt:koi baat nah...aj hum teenom ek h plate se khana khayenge

ak:nah natik,ap khaligiye mein bhadh mein khaloonga...

nt:kyon?hum alag thodi na h...chaliye issa karthe h..aj hum khudh nah khayenge balki ek doosre ko khilayenge

like that they feed each other

after having food karan ran 2wards his new cradle @ soon he slept in that

akshi was about 2 lay on ground but natik pulled her,as it was a single coat she was completely above him

ak:nt,ye kya h...

nt:ak,mein upar aur ap neeche mujhe acha nah laghtha..

ak:toh teek h...ap neeche jakar so jayiye

nt:akshara...vo baat nah h..mera matlab tha ki kya hum sath mein issi coat par nah so sakthe h...

ak:nah so saktha kyonki mujhe apni hadiyam(bones) thodne ki koi shok nah h..agar hum donom iss par soyenge toh ye zarroor toot jayenge..chodiye mujhe aj akela h soyiye...

nt:toh kuch meeta digiye ,phir mein chod doonga...

ak:nt...jabse hum yaham(kerala) aye h kuch zyaada h meeta meeta ho raha h...ab kuch h din bache h...mein b kuch kehthi nah h iska matlab ye nah ki ap jo mangenge vo milega...

nt:toh kya huwa,ghar par toh ap mujhe mind b nah karthi thi...aur na h karoongi..isiliye mein poori hisab karke h vapas jaana chahtha hoo... aur ab mein apko nah chodoongi

he was about 2 take a turn but before the coat breaks @ they fall down

ak:ouch...natik meine pehle h kaha tha..ap nah mani..dekhliya nateeja..ab toh hatiye

he began 2 roll along with her @ they reached near the wall as they couldnt move 4ward

ak:nt...

nt:akshara...

ak:nt..ab bahuth masthi ho gay ab chupa chap soo ja...

he laid on the floor,he was feeling uncomfortable without pillow @ bed sheet

nt:ak ,ab mujhe apse zyaada pillow aur bedsheet ki zaroorat h...

ak:mein kuch karthi hoo

she came with a saaree

ak:nt..pillow toh nah h ye ligiye bedsheet ki jagah meri saarre use kigiye

she sat near him

nt:(pulling that saare which was she wearing)mujhe ye saaree milegi???

ak:nt..saadi chod digiye...tang kar rakha h...(blushing)

akshi covered him with the saaree which she brought,natik placed his head on her lap

nt:pillow nah h toh kya huwa ap h na...

ak:acha...apkeliye mein aur pillow ek jaisa hi h???

nt:nah nah mera matlab tha ki...

ak:rehene digiye mein sab samajh gay(fake sadness)

he take her hand @ kissed on it "'agar mein bolna shuru kiya toh ap seh nah pawoongi

..

she fastly placed her hands on his lips..

ak:hamesha bacha h rehena...

nt:kya karein he slowly hummed""dil toh baccha h ji"""

she smiled hearing these lines

ak:mujhe toh lagtha h shayadh apko dekhkar ye gana likha hoga...

nt:ho saktha h...

@ he slowly drifted in 2 sleep while she kept caressing him.akshi didnt wake up him as she knew that he would b very tired so she also slept in a siting possition

in the middle night,natik wake up @ saw akshi,he knew that akshi didnt like 2 break his sleep so she slept in this possition,he also did the same,he gently take her in his arms without breaking her sleep @ placed her on the bed which she had already arranged in the floor,suddently she wake up

ak:nt...(sleepy tone)

he laid near him

nt:ak...ap so jayiye...ap chahe toh mujhe pillow samajhkar use kar sakthe h..mein bura nah manoonga...

be4 completing his word,she placed her head on his chest @ wrapped her arms around his stomach

ak:ap jaise b h...i love u natik...(babysh voice)

nt:i love uu 22 akshara

they become dead 2 the rest of the world

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precap::

another day in forest

&

fishing masti @ their bath in river

&

ofcorse along with unending

romance!!!

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very cute part i lovd how naitik says that mein aur tumhare mummy ne milke application kiya hai part all 3 of them r soo cute nd so r u for writting it nd entertaining us 😳 😆

wooow asha...superb update..😃
so romantic ,cute...loved each and every part..😃😃
"mein aur tumari mamma milkar application di h...jaldi approve b ho jaayenge,h na akshara..."
so cute line...😉expecting soon another cute akshi😉
karan was too good...
entha parayanennu ariyilla..athrak gamberam..nallla cute romance ayirunooo..superb.awesome.fantastic..
hut scene was awesome..cleaning the hut..cooking food..eating...ebery thing was fantastic..

wow another mind blowing part with lot of romance ❤️ asha

hai asha njan comment edit cheythu..😃

once again it was a very good update. i liked it very much. i must say that u r a wonderful writer n u r using ur writing skills in such a beautiful way ( on world's best couple 'naksh') i liked naitik's dialogue 'dil to baccha hai ji' suggestion: now its time for a change. i want interchanging of naitik n akshara always karan with akshara n naitik bechara akshara k peechay peechay, but now i want karan with naitik n akshara naitik k peechay peechay after waiting for a long, now i have read today's part n now after reading today's part, my wait for next part has started. meri qismat mein sirf intezar hi intezar hai. anyhow, keep entertaining us with such beautiful parts n also take a look at my suggestion