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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello guys🤗 my next poem is on dimri's favorite...that is Naksh's MISUNDERSTANDINGS😭 😭 right from their courtship period till one year of their marriage... their intense love have always been stagnated and displaced bcoz of the growing misunderstandings between them😕 however sometimes it's easy and sometimes it's difficult but I feel the strength to move forward lies only within us😃 Sooner we realize this it's better for us, because after all life is all about trying to move on and finding our paradise 😆 😆


Misunderstandings in Naksh relation is quite often,

As 'roothna manana' is part of their life & only option...

Natik hits akshi hard with verbal acrimony,

And she repulsed back with equal hostility...

Although they didn't show, their heart sunk deep within,

Tears didn't come but they knew they were dying within...


Shattered pieces of emotions on one end,

And true love on the other side,

There's a void that exists in between,

How to fill it up, are the thoughts that come to their mind...


Then the silence comes between them,

Even when they know things can be patched up,

Maybe they are hesitant so as to not hurt each other any more...



They take their time,

As they feel there's no need to hurry...

And as the time passes by,

Hurry will not then change into anxiety and worry...



They know they'll love each other always,

And their love for each other will never fade...

Patience and hope is what their relation demands,

And their love indeed sails through storms, strong n calm...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awsome di very nice poem yar
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very good yaar Vini....😃 too good....👏 very nicely dexribed thier misunderstands which is of course part & parcel of Naksh's life...😃 😆 MU bina toh Naksh exist hi nahi karte....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice poem vini 👏👏👏...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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owowoww...dimrii's fav...😆
mast poem dii..good jobb👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tafseer

very good yaar Vini....😃 too good....👏 very nicely dexribed thier misunderstands which is of course part & parcel of Naksh's life...😃 😆 MU bina toh Naksh exist hi nahi karte....


thanks taffy....🤗 yaar i've wasted 3 hours of my life for describing dimri's crap...😆 😆now tho i'm really scared of their romance bcoz its an indication that MU is on its way....😭 😡
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: smart.akaisha

owowoww...dimrii's fav...😆

mast poem dii..good jobb👏👏


aur kya dimri ka fav hi hai...😆 neways thanks akaisha...😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ anu, rachana and stuti - thank you so much...🤗 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ur too good i guess as u grow u can excel in in writting poems
Edited by preksha_naksh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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a brilliant poem once again di.....🤗u've described Naksh's MUs very nicely.......👍🏼superb.........😳

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