Tum Dena Saath Mera-Naksh FF part 13 @ pg 47..

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#151

Originally posted by: Drishti...
u r saying no sry and no thnks in frndship...and u urself said thanks? 😡
oops i wont say it anymore

wowww!!!...evn im waiting for them!...do wish me lucj..they r coming out on friday...haina? 😕

ps-yup it definitely is! 😃

yup.. they're out tmrw..

all the best.!!!!! n wish me luck too yar.!!! me in so much tension.!!!

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#152

Originally posted by: me.san
hey...
i hav read all the parts today
your ff is too good
awesome
do continue soon
and pm me whenever you update it..
waiting for u too continue...

all the parts in one go.??

oh.. so sweet of u yar..

thanx.. will definitely pm u next tym wen i update.!!!!

keep reading it.!!!

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#153

Originally posted by: Apoorva_22
Very nice update yarr..!! thanx a lot for the pm..!!😊😊
update soon..!!😃

dnt say thanx yar.. srsli.!!!

yeah.. will continue real soon.!!!

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#154

Originally posted by: ananya_krish
wonderfully written:)

thank u so much yar.!!

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#155

Originally posted by: moonlight08
yup.. they're out tmrw..
all the best.!!!!! n wish me luck too yar.!!! me in so much tension.!!!

awww thankyou so mcuh

all the best to u too..awwww..dont be nervous..i noe ull rock

im also not nervous instead im very excited 😃

do tell me ur result 😊

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#156

Originally posted by: preksha_naksh
wow nyc ff cont soon

thank u preksha.!!

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#157

hey guys.. m bak with another part of Tum Dena Saath Mera.. sry for posting the part this late..

here it goes...

Part 7..

Naitik thinks sumthing and then proceeds to the bed.. he sits besides her.. leans towards her to give a kiss on her lips just when he realises that the door is open.. he remembers wat problems akshara had to face when she was cought romancing with him.. so he goes and closes the door..

then he goes bak to akshara.. n first kisses her on the cheek.. akshara is disturbed.. but she's in deep sleep so she doesn't bother to know wat's happening.. naitik den kisses her on other cheek.. this irritates her and she wakes up with a start.. surprised to see naitik besides her..

she lyk.

akshara : arre naitik.. aap.. yaha... itni jaldi kaise aa gye aap.??

Naitik : madam.. main itni bhi jaldi nhi aaya hu.. ye aap hai to subah 7 baje tak so rhi hai..

Akshara : kya.???!!!!?? 7 baj gye.. oh no.. ma naraaz ho jaengi mujhse... hatiye.. jaane dijiye mujhe..

Naitik : arre.. kaha.?? madam.. aapki pyari sasu ma ne hi mujhe bola hai ki main aapko sone du.. lekin mera aapke bina man nhi lagega.. to maine aapko utha dia..

Akshara : kya naitik aap bhi.. subah subah bhi masti chhayi hui hai aapko..

Naitik : kya.. sach mein ma ne bola ki aapko sone du..

Akshara : aur ma aisa kyon bolengi.?? main bahu hu.. beti nhi.. samjhe aap.??

Naitik : unhone aisa isliye kaha hai kyonki bhabhi ma ne unhe btaya ki aap kal raat mein bahut der se soyi thi.. mujhe t.v. pe dekh rhi thi.. sach mein.??

Akshara : bhabhi ma ne kab dekha ki main raat mein der se soyi.. unhe kaise pta chla ki mujhe neend nhi aayi..

Naitik : vo bhabhi ma hai.. unhe sab pta hai.. samjhi aap.. khair vo chodiye.. mujhe ye btaiye.. ki aap raat mein itni late kyon saoyi.. mera award function to 12.30 tak khatam ho gya tha.. fir kyon nhi soyi aap.?? aise neend mein katauti karne lagi na to beemar pad jaaengi aap.. main pehle bol deta hu... main nhi le kar jaaunga doctor ke yaha aapko..

Akshara : kya naitik aap bhi.. mujhe neend hi nhi aa rhi thi.. yahi soch rhi thi main... ki aap mera kitna khayal rakhte hai.. pta hai.. jab pehle aapne mujhe thanx nhi kaha na.. to mujhe bura laga tha.. lekin uske baad jo bhi aapne kaha.. sach naitik.. itna kuch mere liye kisi ne nhi kia.. jitna kal aapne kia tha..

Naitik : arre.. mere jaise koi mila bhi to nhi na aapko.!!! vaise aapko bura lage isliye hi bola tha.. kyonki roothe hue ko manane ka to kuch aur hi maza hai... haina.??

Akshara : dhatt... aise thode hota hai.. (blushes.)

Naitik : to fir kaise hota hai.?? n he cums closer to her...

Akshara : baad mein btaungi.. abhi plz. mujhe jaane dijiye.. ma mera intezaar kar rhi hongi.. main aa ke aapse dher saari batein karungi.. pakka..

Naitik : ha.. ha.. jaiye.. mere liye to time hi nhi hai apke liye..

akshara : nhi naitik.. aisa nhi hai.. accha thik hai.. aaj ki poori shaam aapke nam.. khush ab aap.??

Naitik : sach.. soch lijiye.. baad mein palat mat jaaiega apni baat se..

Akshara : nhi.. main ma se bol dungi ki mujhe aapse koi kam hai.. thik hai.. lekin abhi main jaau.??

Naitik : chaliye thik hai.. jaaiye..

akshara gets ready.. n goes downstairs.. shez embarrased... gayatri notices this..

Gayatri : arre bahu. aa gyi tum.. aaj bahut der laga di uthne mein.. chalo koi baat nhi.. kal raat bhabhi ma bta rhi thi tum bahut der se soyi thi..

AKshara : ha ma.. vo late ho gyi thi thoda sa..

Bhabhi ma : to isme darne wali kya baat hai bahu.. koi baat nhi hai.. ho jaata hai kabhi kabhi.. aur fir kal to tumhe jagna hi tha.. munna ka itna bada din tha.. ha.. lekin aage se dhyaan rakhna. vo kya hai na.. tumhare daddaji ko ye sab nhi pasand.. baaki koi problem nhi hai..

Akshara : sorry ma.. bhabhi ma.. main aage dhyaan rakhungi..

Gayatri: ha.. thik hai bahu.. accha bahu.. aaj na shaam ko humein kisi ki shaadi mein jana hai.. main chahti thi ki tum aur munna bhi chalo humare saath.. lekin munna abhi to aaya hai... thaka hua hai.. to tum uska khayal rakhna.. iss bahane tum log ek dusre ke saath thoda wakt bhi bita loge.. kyon bhabhi ma.. thik hai na.??

Bhabhi ma : ha.. ha.. choti dulhan.. bilkul thik hai.. kal se fir munna kaam pe laut jaaega.. to aaj rehne do inhe.. hum jaa kar aa jaenge..

Akshara : ji bhabhi ma..

Gayatri : to fir thik hai.. vo jagah thodi door hai to hum dopahar ko hi nikal jaaenge.. aur raat mein bhi der ho jaaegi thodi si..

Akshara : koi bat nhi ma.. aap log bina chinta ke jaaiye.. main yaha sab sambhal lungi...

Bhabhi ma : lekin ha bahu.. pichli bar ki tarah darwaza khula mat chodna.. band kar ke sona...

gayatri n bhabhi ma laugh at this while akshara is all the way embarrased.!! ...............................

to be continued...

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