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Posted: 16 years ago
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im really really sorry guys!!
its been long since i posted a oneshot .was really busy /
well now since we get to see all the rona -dhona episodes.here is a oneshot of our favourite couple naksha
i hope this makes u happy i wish soso ready for it guys??

naitik was really sad when akshara shot questions at him one after the other! he was confused himself and he sat on the bed wonderng what to do.he turned to see that akshara had alread left.he knew how sad she wuld have felt ....he sat on the bed resting his head on his hand , really worried and his head was hurting badly. he thought of getting mohit's help and was about to reach for the phone when mohit came in .wich made relise " a friend in need is a friend indeed"mohit had always been there for him when he was confused or was in trouble.
mohit was a lttle busy searching for a job and had finally managed to get one. he hadn't got the time to call naitik and ask him about his job and naitik was soo depressed after hearing his rejection and so he din't call mohit either.mohit had seen gayatri downstairs but had rushed to naitik's room flashing a smile to gayatri.
mohit had really expected naitik to get a job since naitik adnever failed at anything.he wa succesful in everything he did.he saw naitik siting on the bed with his face down.he went to him and asked natik about hid\s job and naitik looked up at him.naitik looked really sad and mohit understood that something was wrong.he kept his hand on naitik's shoulders and asked kya hua yaar??
naitik told mohit abut everything .mohit listned to what naitik said carefully.he had know naitik from childhood ,naitik was really pampered at home mainly by his mom and it was the 1st time naitik got unsucessful in something he did.this was why naitik was sad and depressed.
he askd about akshara and naitik told mohit abt th mroning fight.
mohit told him tht he wuld surely find a way out and both hugged. naitik suddeny said aaw!!and mohit asked what happened?? naitik replied that his head was hurting since yesterday and mohit asked him to lay down on the bed.
mohit asked naitik where the balm was kept and naitik tld that it was i the cupborad.mohit opened the cupboard and searched for a few minutes and e founf the balm and he was about to give i to naitik when a plan striked him.he wuld ask akshara bhabhi to do it??
he kept the balm there and told naitik that he culdn't find it .he went out callng bhabhi bhabh before naitik could stop him.
mohit got ou of the room and was going downstairs when he saw the balcony door open and so he went to see who was there.he saw akshar sitting on the swing .she was crying and her eyes looked red. he went to her and called bhabhi akshara wiped her tears and got up and asked him when he came??
naitik told ehr that he came just now and he told akshara that it was the first time sucess had deserted naitik and th's why he was rally sad . akshara lasked mohit why was naitik not talkin to her and got angry at her for not showing the letter ??
hemade her understand and mohit finally managed to get her convinced .he said that naitik was having a headache and he was looking for some medicine and balm but culdn't find it.
mohit told akshara that he was going since he had some urgent work.akshra went to their room and she closed the door and then turned to see naitik curled up on the bed.she knew he wasn't asleep.she went t the cupborad took the tablet and the medicine.she went to naitik with a glass of water and she called him"naitik"
naitik opened his eys and he sat on the ebd.she gave him the tablet and he took it from her and gulped it down it with the help of water.she looked into his eyyes and she understood the pain he had.naitik also did the same akshra's eyes looked red with all the crying and he was feling really guilty.both said sorry at the same time and both hugged each other.both could understand each other pain and bot hugged each other dearly with al the love and then they broke up.natik was about to say somehing when akshara kept her finger on his lips and told him the shetook sometime to understand him but now she can understand him and there was no need to explain.
naitik was having mixed feelings after hearing this.he felt so fortunate to have such an understanding wife like akshara.he kissed her forhead and he told ehr that his headache was halfgone.
he sat on the bed resting his head on a pillow wich was and akshara apllied balm on his forhead.and naitik culdn't take his eyes of her and when after applying the balm akshra got up.he puleld her hadn a she fell on top of him.thier faces were only inches from each other and akshara culd feel his breath .he asekd her for a kiss and akshar culdn't holdback herself longer.she gave him a kiss on the left cheek and she got up really fast and ran out of the room.


hope u all liked it!!😃
please press the like button and give me ur feedback!!😊



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Posted: 16 years ago
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definetly awesome dear!!!!!!!!.....I liked d way u included mohit in dis oneshot...he alwayz brings naksh closer.....hez surely a true frnd.......srsly dear...it was such a treat 2 read ure oneshot after alwayz seein naksh sad......keep writin more dear!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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after soo many days a onesshot from u....it was really gooood👍🏼......keeep wrting more😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hmmm........its very good....dis part was very good.....love dda way.how Naksh patched up.......it was a good oneshot.......n Akshara understanding him was very good....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyyy very cute one shot.....i loved it completely
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Posted: 16 years ago
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It was awesome! i lved mohit's part in it...... and also i luved the waynaitik and akshara patched up.......... i think u also kow that watever u write will b appreciated by every1......... u hav a very creative mind........ i luve this one shot keep rocking wid ur ffs and one shots!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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w0nderful! please write another one soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey awesome fic dear do write some more
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Posted: 16 years ago
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sweatha..it was rllly beautifully written!...and i liked it that mohit was part of this oneshot...rlly like him...his funny and understanding nature...as always loved it..hehe..i always doo....:)
u r the best!...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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really sweeeeeeeet and cute and by god i wish it happened in the show rather than this stupid fights

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