Sidushka SS-'In Hope Of Love' || Chapter 2 Updated on Page 3

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Lavanya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: war_is_peace
i am loving this lavs. 👏
continue soon 😳
i like how its all dated and timed. easier to relate😳

Thanks Hiya 😳

Yup, I too had felt that adding a timeline would make it more relatable and so I decided to add it.

Will update soon :)

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Lavanya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

@meghzzz and @Kaushiki-Thanks for your response.Will update soon.

@Mahi-I'm glad you liked it behena 😳 I would say its probably going to get a bit more worse before things improve for Anushka but this is just a premature idea.I'm still not absolutely certain as to how it'll go forward but I'll try my best to write a good and relatable story. I'm a bit weak on the romance front though 😆 And my romance will be more through conversations and small gestures so I'm not sure if people would like that 😆 Anyways, there's a long time for that. So much more will happen before that. Thanks for your response Mahi :)

@Anu-Thank you so much.The 'professional writing' compliment is very special for me :) I'm glad you liked it.Will update soon.

@Jenny-Thank you for such a beautiful and elaborate response.I'm glad you liked the first extract.Anu is the focal point of this story and so I wanted to introduce her well.Will update soon :)

Edited by KumbhkarnKiNani - 7 years ago

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Mahi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: KumbhkarnKiNani
@meghzzz and @Kaushiki-Thanks for your response.Will update soon.

@Mahi-I'm glad you liked it behena 😳 I would say its probably going to get a bit more worse before things improve for Anushka but this is just a premature idea.I'm still not absolutely certain as to how it'll go forward but I'll try my best to write a good and relatable story. I'm a bit weak on the romance front though 😆 And my romance will be more through conversations and small gestures so I'm not sure if people would like that 😆 Anyways, there's a long time for that. So much more will happen before that. Thanks for your response Mahi :)

@Anu-Thank you so much.The 'professional writing' compliment is very special for me :) I'm glad you liked it.Will update soon.

@Jenny-Thank you for such a beautiful and elaborate response.I'm glad you liked the first extract.Anu is the focal point of this story and so I wanted to introduce her well.Will update soon :)

Not that I'm good at it either! I don't mind getting small things. They matter more than anything else. Subtleness fan here! <3

Okay, make it worse but I want them kicking off together soon! However small it be <3

Waiting :P

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Lavanya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: ..AjabdeBaisa..
Not that I'm good at it either! I don't mind getting small things. They matter more than anything else. Subtleness fan here! <3
Okay, make it worse but I want them kicking off together soon! However small it be <3
Waiting :P

Yup. Need a few more readers though to actively continue this. I hope some more people will join in as I continue writing furthur.

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mistofshadows

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

...this is different.

Anushka is definitely not the Reddy darling and Siddhant is something yet to be opened up. We just got a simple glimpse of him. Nita also gets a little bit of screen space

I am interested. Just a question. Will there be KK and his empire

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Lavanya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: mistofshadows
...this is different.
Anushka is definitely not the Reddy darling and Siddhant is something yet to be opened up. We just got a simple glimpse of him. Nita also gets a little bit of screen space

I am interested. Just a question. Will there be KK and his empire

Hello mate :) Firstly, thank you for your response 😃

Yes, in all likelihood the story and the characters here will be totally different from what we have in the show. Infact, all characters from the show may not be present here and a few new ones may pop up as well 😆

@Bold-You'll have to read furthur to know that 😉

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Padmajaan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

👏 👏 👏 Lavanya.

Awesome breezy read. You had me engaged throughout.

I really liked the style. You have your own style and it doesn't waver. That's tough in writing!!

Nita seems not much different from the Nita we know. Not very helpful isn't she?? But this Anushka is more sensitive to her mom's taunts and harsh words.

Loved the idea of the scooty.

Your style is vivid Lavanya. I could actually imagine the scenes, Anushka Reddy on her scooty, the lift, the rain, the bright morning sun, the hospital, the front desk at the hospital, everything and yes that last line about how the young lady did not even realize how habituated she was getting to sleeping pills. Very powerful writing.

👏 👏 👏

Keep it up and keep it coming.

I will be waiting.

Much love to you Lavanya

Padma

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Lavanya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Thank you so much for such a detailed comment Padma :)

I'm glad that you liked the story 😃 The most satisfying thing for me was your point where you mentioned that you could visualize the scenes which I had penned. I'm so pleased to know that.

I'll update the next part soon. Thanks again for your lovely response :)

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Lavanya

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Lavanya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: plmzaq
Interesting start
Love it
Continue soon

Thank you :)

I surely will 😃 Will post Chapter 2 tomorrow 😊

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Aayushi

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Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Nicee! That was a fantastic start. I feel Siddhant and Anu know each other, maybe I'm wrong, let's see! 😛😆

Liked the things running in their mind at the moment, so Anushka took journalism against her family's wishes and she feels quite lonely, that's a nice change! 😉

And Siddhant loves purva so much awww. 😳

I'm awaiting further, update soon! :)

Edited by A.Green - 7 years ago