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Hi All,

This is another OS from my end dedicated to Suparna and Suhani. Last OS had them in tears hope this brings smile. As promised Suparna school wali kahani hai.

Please ignore the mistakes. Not Spell checked. Hope you all will like it.

Eagerly waiting for your feedback.

Love

Saijda

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Jee Le Zara

Naina Agarwal the School Captain of a reputed school ,topper in Academics & extra-circular activities , most disciplined and above all favorite student of teachers. What else anyone would want ,wasn't it perfect for a student.? Little did she know that life has many other colors that she hasn't seen .

After the morning prayers everyone was waiting for the teacher to enter the class. Naina was the class monitor and keeping everyone quiet was her first priority.

"Yaar yeh Naina na khud maza karti hai na humein karne deti " Munna , Pandit whispered with a slight irritated tone.

"Good Morning Children ! , Good Job Naina the class is so well managed by you " the teacher appreciated as usual .

"Teacher ki Chamchi " !! Kamya murmerred.

Naina thanking teacher sat at her place next to Swati.

"Maine last sum nahi kiya , tu zara apni book dikha na " Swati asked

"Tu hamesha aise karti hai , kuch mehnat karegi to sab sums solve kar sakti hai , par nahi sab aasani se chahiye . Dost houn isliye tujhe last time help kar rahi houn, next time I won't. It's for your own good". Naina opened her book and placed in front of her to copy before teacher could check assignments.

"Thanks Yaarr .. You are the best " Swati thanked her and quickly started copying it.

"Excuse me teacher ! , I am Sameer , May I come in ? "

"Yes of-course,!" Addressing the students" He is new joinee in our Class . Sameer was studying in Switzerland and now he has joined us .

" Welcome Sameer. Naina please help him with the current portion and give your notes to him "

Sameer Sat near Sanjay next to Naina's bench unaware of the storm he had caused with almost all the girls of the class.

"Kitna Handsome hai aur Abroad padhke aaya hai. Mere jaisi hi ladki uski dost ban sakti hai baki to sab iske standard ke nahi " Kamya whispered excitedly to Hema.

After the class Naina handed him the notes and asked to check with the office staff if they have the text books and other stationary and went on with her regular routine.

"Tu kis type ki ladki hai , matlab tujhe koi emotions hai bhi ya nahi ?? " Swati questioned her.

"Kyun, What did I do now ? " Naina replied.

"Itna handsome ladka aur tujhe baat karne ka mauka mila ,to thoda muskurake kuch aur der baat karti, usko stationary room tak lekar jati shayad dosti ho jati .Atleast mujhe hi help hoti" Swati said to her with a bit of disappointment.

Naina never understood why all girls were so mad about love and boys. School is for studying and making your career , that was the motive she strongly believed in.

"Shall I take you the office administrator room for text books ? " Kamya asked Sameer.

"No Thanks , Munna Pandit already offered to help " Sameer declined politely and left from there.

That thirty minutes session with Munna , Pandit was more the enough to give a background about everyone in the class, teacher and school overall. Sameer connected with them immediately and were fun to hang with.

A few days had passed , the exchange of notes and some small discussions around the subjects was what Naina and Sameer mostly talked.

Accidentally one day Sameer reached school a bit early and found Naina reading something.

" Hi , Good Morning Naina"

"Good Morning Sameer ! , How do you find this school, is the syllabus all fine for you? "

" Yes sab thik hai ! Bas thoda Hindi mein help chahiye ? Basic hindi sikhi thi. Bolna aata hai par jo tough words hai woh samaj mein nahi aate. Wahan to maine German sikhi thi" he replied.

" Oh ! Acha . Tumhe mai Hindi sikha sakti houn, kya tum mujhe basic German sikha doge ?? "

" Deal !! " he forwarded his hand but she just smiled. It was agreed they would meet daily 45 mins before the school starts , with 30 mins for Hindi and 15 mins for German class.

Next day after going through the first hindi chapter, she marked all the tough words for him and the meanings. Gave him the homework of what was taught so that she can check his understanding. It really helped him.

"In German the alphabet has 26 letters, 3 umlauts (Ä,Ö,Ü) and one ligature (ß- se). Some letters are pronounced very similar to the English pronunciation, but some others are a little different. One thing they don't spell "J" in their language as we do so "Japan " will be called as "Yapan"

" Jagdish will be Yagdish , saying this she laughed and it was so contiguous that he could not stop and laughed with her as they started making fun with all the words starting with J .

"Pehli baar tumko itna khulke haste huve dekha hai, bahut khoobsurat hai tumhari smile , and when it reaches your eyes they shine like stars, Always keep smiling Naina " Sameer said to her .

Hearing this she thought it was true she hadn't laughed like this for ages. May be trying to prove her father she was no less than her brother and to get his approval she was always trying to be perfect and obedient.

Next day same pattern was repeated and he taught her some basic sentences on how to talk formally

" Whats your name " - "Wie heißen Sie?

" My Name is Naina " - Ich heiße Naina .

Days went on and Naina could introduce herself in German and also do a bit of small talk . Sameer and Naina bonded well. Swati, Naina , Sameer , Munna and Pandit formed a closed group and named it as Fab Five (Fabulous Five ) . They would all go together for lunch. Naina always saw Sameer bring Pasta, Salad with Bread or some Quinoa etc. "Pata nahi yeh pheka pheeka kaise khata hai , swad naam ki cheez pata hai bhi ya nahi" Naina thought to herself

While they were studying she asked him " Tum tikka bilkul nahi khate ho kya ? "

He replied he is used to less spicy food.

"Pani Puri , Chaat yeh kabhi khaya hai ?? " she asked him as if that was the best food in the world

When he just nodded in negation , she asked him to stay after school and she will take him to a chaat stall and they both can enjoy Pani puri.

Even though Sameer had Pani Puri with more of meetha pani he still had tears .Whereas he could see the excitement of a kid while Naina was savouring the thikki pani puri.

"Bache bhi khate hai itna Tikka , tum nahi kha paa rahe ho " Naina laughed and teased him.

"Bhaiya , mujhe bhi ek plate thikki pani puri dena , ek dum thikki " Sameer asked to prove her he was capable of eating spicy food. He had turned red and water was flowing from eyes and nose. She instantly rubbed the tears flowing on his cheeks and quickly ran to the sweet shop to get gulab jamoons for him. Though the act of wiping tears was very simple , it had a profound effect on his heart , none had rubbed his tears when in pain and here she was worried for him.

"Yeh lo khalo , bola tha mat khao itna thika tumse nahi hoga. Ek din koi everest thodi hi chad sakta hai , dheere dheere practice karni padti hai " .

He ate one while taking the second one he asked "adha aadha karke khale ? Happiness is real when shared " he quoted.

She wanted to say No, but looking at the eyes filled with affection she agreed and took half , the other half was then taken by Sameer.

From then on there was a lot of change in the friendship equation. Naina use to get him his favorite aloo paratha aur some sweets which he liked, she introduced him to her favorite world of books ,her likes dislikes which she had hidden it from everyone ,she openly shared with him without any fear. He would get her novels that she loved, take her once a week to eat chaat and also he had increased his spicy food intake to fulfill her demand.

Sameer noticed she was totally different when with him. She was carefree , cheerful , one who found happiness in little joys of life. They way she use to be with him he never saw her with anyone something stopped her from doing so.

"Naina tumne kabhi class bunk ki hai??" he asked her .

"Nahi, aaj tak ek bhi nahi " she said proudly .

"Kya !!! kabhi nahi ?? To aaj ek kaam karte hai ,last period bunk karke we will go or a ride.

" Nahi!!! Pagal ho tum . Mai nahi karoungi yeh sab. "

"Naina , pleaseeeee . mere liye ek baar . Try karke dekho jo nahi kiya hai. Aur waise bhi jo teacher padayegi woh tum janti ho ,so we are not losing anything or doing wrong. Sometimes we can break rules without harming any one . pleaseeeeeeeeeeee" Sameer almost pleaded .

"Thik hai , bas ek baar ! " atlast Naina relented.

As decided they both escaped secretly. Naina suggested a nearby hill which has a beautiful track for bicycle riders. They both rode to the hill and sat there looking at the beautiful view of the city.

"Bahut maza aaya , sach mein , woh class bunk karna was a thrilling experience " she said with great enthusiasm

He sang these two lines for her

Tu khwaab sajaa, tu jee le zara, Hai tujhe bhi izaazat, karle tu bhi mohabbat

Khud se pyar karna sikho Naina, khulke jeena sikho. You don't have to be perfect.

Next there were her few firsts that she tried with Sameer. A girl who had never ever taken scoldings from teacher missed doing her homework, mismanaged the class took scoldings from her teachers. But she didn't regret strange as it seemed to her because she wanted to see what if life doesn't offer what she needs or what is expected . Will she be able to handle if she has not done anything which she is supposed to do.. As Sameer had rightly said to her "We are not going to win every time, some times we fail, sometimes we are short of somebody's expectations. You don't have to prove to anyone. Failure is simply the opportunity to begin again. One has to learn to accept ones flaws and rise above them. Accept your imperfections to be perfect"

Sanjay who was Naina's friend didn't like this new Naina. He knew the reason for this change was Sameer. He confronted Sameer near the cycle stand

"Naina meri best friend hai, woh hamesha first aati thi and she was disciplined obedient and now with you she is doing things which she had never done. Just be away from her. Don't influence her "

What irritated Sameer was the statement " Naina meri best friend hai !! " , a bit possessive Sameer said "woh meri best friend hai "

Sanjay equally angry argued " She is my childhood friend and you have come just now in her life "

"Dekhtein hai Naina kisko apna best friend maanti hai , Mujhe ya tumhe " Sameer challenged.

Three chances were to be taken and the one who would get the maximum attention from Naina would be her best friend.

Next day Naina was having her breakfast with Swati. Sameer and Sanjay both approached her and asked for the Aloo paratha. Only one was left so she tore the paratha into two and gave each one half. It was a draw , score still 0-0.

"Naina mujhe tumhari Hindi ke notes chahiye " Sanjay and Sameer both asked again at the sametime.

" I have to finish something today ,so you both copy it now before the break ends " and placed the book on the bench. Score still 0-0.

Sameer knew her love for Chaat, so he asked her "Aaj chale Chaat khane ? " she agreed. Sanjay who had listened to this asked her to stay after school to prepare for the upcoming debate competition.

During lunch break Naina informed Sameer that she won't be able to join him as she has to work with Sanjay on the upcoming debate. This was the last thing Sameer wanted to hear, this infuriated him so much that he crushed the glass bottle he was holding and blood started oozing out from the cut in his hand.

Seeing this Naina was horrified and started crying . She tried to stop the blood by tying her hand kerchief " Kyun itna gussa karte ho !! Ab chup chap chalo , pehle first aid karvate hai , Pagal ho tum. Why don't you understand anything that hurts you , I feel the pain . Dard tumhe nahi mujhe hota hai Sameer." she said while walking with still tears in her eyes.

Sanjay who was witnessing all this said to himself " Best Friend nahi , Naina to Sameer se pyar karti hai " he just smiled and left from there.

When they were alone Naina asked Sameer " I love you " german mein kya boltein hai .

Sameer smiled and said " Ja, Ich bin liebe du auch" .

Naina repeated "Oh ! Ja, Ich bin liebe du auch matlab "

Sameer responded instantly "Yes, I love you too and repeated slowly word by word "Ja , Ich bin liebe du auch"

She just blushed as both knew what they wanted to say and hear. Holding each others hand they just sat silently and let their hearts talk to each other.

In dino, dil mera, mujhse hai keh raha

Tu khaab saja, tu ji le jara

Hai tujhe bhi izaazat, karle tu bhi mohabbat

Love

Sajida



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Posted: 6 years ago
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Res🤗

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Sajida di, itni jaldi ye os dene ke liye thanku... this os is sooo sweet!!!❤️🤗

Aapko german ati hai? Sameer from Switzerland... wow😳!!! Sameer pe to sab ladkiya flat ho hi jaati hai... charm hi kuch aisa hai mahashay ke!!!

Rules are meant to break.... kabhi kabhi karna chahiye... kuch naya experience hota hai!! Naina khulke jeene sikhi Sameer ke saath...🤗!!! The song is sooo apt,di❤❤!!! And the title too😳!

Sameer ka ye jo possesive nature hai na... sometimes I love❤❤!!! Possessiveness ke wajase khud ko hurt karli.... aur naina ne bhi german seekhne ka faida le li...!!! I just missed pvkm Samaina... !!! Your os reminds me the love confession of them.... love the os❤❤!!

I am sooo happy that you wrote school wali story... thanku di🤗!! Write more and gift us to read...❤️🤗!!!


With love,Suparna

Edited by Suparna13 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice OS... Song selection s awesome!!!!

loved all your OS, SS...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sajida first of all a huge hug and very big thank you for coming up with this soo soon🤗

you made us cry in your previous OS but this made me really happy

Sameer came and changed the boring Naina into his loveable Naina

And he fighting with Sanjay thinking her to be his best friend but later releasing that he loves her

that was soo beautifully done

I totally loved it

I loved the progress of their relationship

And then finally the confession in German

ahaa aise fayda uthaya jata hain ek nayi language aane ka

keep writing and coming up with more stories

Edited by munchkinland - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Very cute story and interesting addition of German

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Beautiful OS. Loved their school friendship.

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Beautiful it was .. Two souls coming from a totally different background found love in each other ... Loved the whole setting of the update and the fact that from the very starting Naina was totally herself when with sameer .. She somehow felt safe around him .. Last bit of the update was cutest

Love

Laalchi reader

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sajida. 🤗


This was so beautiful. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I could imagine it all, scene by scene. Their German classes, their day out, their smiles, their happiness. Everything! It was so vivid. Giving me major writer goals. Btw, you know German? Or did some research 😛. That part reminded me of someone actually. Aise hi phooch Liya. Don't mind please.



The song was aptly chosen and so properly put! I'm so much inspired to write something but time and other things have always been a hindrance. But trust me! This was so beautiful. I wanna Sameer Naina to go back to their school life once again after reading this. Seriously. Thank you so much. 🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Loved the cute & sweet OS.

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Loved it sajida, you bring every emotions in this story like caring,loving,emotinal side of naina. You are right kabi kabhi rules break karne cahiye like "Rules bane hi break karne k liy hote h" . Sameer ne naina ko b masti Karna sikha diya.Aur hume b thodi germen language sikhne ko mil gayi. You put so much effort in your stories. I wish k aap bhut acchi aur badi writer bane aur hume aapki stories padne ko milte rahen. 👏

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