SamAina OS: Chance - Page 5

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Posted: 6 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: vdya03

Awesome Mou!!!👏

How I wish this could happen in the show.
They could have atleast made her say all that but I guess they will drag the emotional practical track some more. 😕
Nd the scene at Sameer's house is just wow!
All of us would die if that actually happens in the show!! 😉


Thank you so much dear...! 😃

Yep, I wish too that the matter is dealt with sensibly... but don't know... Sam has already forgiven Naina... and I don't think she is trying to find any way out for him...

Hahaa... yeah... romantic scene aa gaya toh fandom ki Diwali... let's keep our fingers crossed... 😆
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Posted: 6 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Sania98

I knew it that you might come up with this topic. And as always you just nailed it with perfect confrontation.

Thank you for amazing update😊


Thanks a lot Sania... 😃

I am glad you loved this one... 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Princesswarrior

Hi there! Thanks for writing this. 😃 This was so amazingly beautiful. I loved it. Although it was long, yet not at all boring. Instead I was wishing that I could read more. 😆Emotions of both were beautifully described.. Naina's actions were practical and well thought.👏 You did a great job there. The promises made by Sameer were just too adorable, something All of us wish to listen someday. 😳 The end was stupendous⭐️... Great job! Keep writing

Regards.
Inayat
Ps:thanks for the pm😉


Thank you so much for the appreciation Inayat... 😃

Hahaa... yes, my updates are usually long... I just go with the flow and the detailing tends to increase the length... glad that you didn't mind it... 😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priya2910

What an awesome OS.

Samaina are superbly potrayed. Chacha ji shines through. Dialogues are brilliant. I like the way a confident Sameer stumped Vishakha. Reading this OS felt as if I am watching the show. Brilliant 👏


Thanks a lot Priya... 😃

Like Ross said in his comment, Chachaji does have the capability to guide Samaina... unfortunately they don't share, so we are kind of missing that aspect...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#45
Read it finally Mou...
Beautiful Dear👏👏...The satisfaction tat i get while reading urs is always commendable...The closure to each n every scene is so endearingly narrated...I loved how Chachaji made Naina see her shortcomingss...n show her the strength to stand up for her love!!Wat was so poignont is the way she trapped princi in her own JAAL...i wish n so wish that Naina does xactly the same thing ..that is to question princi on her double standards...i always adore the Fighter Naina...even if shes trapped from all the corners..she has the will to come with the right tricks n solutions!!Thanx fir bringing her out in ur stry...n then manofying Sameer with kisses was a cherry on cake...The last bit with Vishaka was yet another superb confrontation👏...im in so awe of ur writing skills that everytime u hve smething worthwhile to present us viewers with ur beautiful pieces...Thanku so much !!!
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Posted: 6 years ago
#46
Amazing OS
You have written it so beautifully :)
I really wanted such convo between princi and naina its a high time princi literally need a reality check i hate her behaviour towards Samaina pura college kuch b kry no issue but Samaina sy hi duahmani hy :/
I loved how naina was manoing sameer their sweet romance :D
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Posted: 6 years ago
#47
Amazing Mou, exactly the way it should go from here in the serial as well. If the CVs dont give such closure to this issue then the essence of the story is getting lost somewhere.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#48
Absolutely loved your take on this whole scenario...kinda satisfying reading what we will never be able to watch in the show..
Naina and chachaji's convo was really well written and your little dose of romance was just Perfect.

Hope to read more from you :)
Keep writing.
Sneha
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Posted: 6 years ago
#49
Mou... Finally I'm back...and frankly
I couldn't have been happier for u to chose this theme as your weekly os.

This is the second ... No third time that Naina has slapped Sam...and I seriously find it very very disturbing...and trust me...I was very happy wen chachaji pointed out that she was behaving exactly like her father...

Any relationship demands a certain amount of respect...and that respect should not be lost even in the fit of rage...I just hope our Naina in the show realises this soon... She has hurt Sam in the fit of rage...whereas Sam has always refrained from doing any such thing...

Coming to the os mou... You are a brilliant writer...and the best I've read in a very very long time...inspite of being a voracious reader ...I simply could not connect to any writer post Sidney Sheldon... But don't u... U have just stolen that spot from him😆

The fact that u are spinning tales out of simple happenings in the show is stupendous...and no matter what. ...I demand a new os every week from u ...

The fact that you chose chachaji as the guiding light in naina's life yet again...the way he made her see Sam's perspective... But still the same time let her contemplate on her wrong doings was amazing...the narration was so amazing... That I could actually imagine them both sitting on the edge of the bed...and having this conversation⭐️

That conversation with the principal...bang on👏... I simply loved how u highlighted that kartik had indeed been left free after doing worse things with Naina...the conversation there was perfect...⭐️

I liked the fact that Sam did not melt instantly at Naina's apology... It was important that she realise that it's not easy to just slap ur life partner...and know that u will be forgiven easily...

But wat I loved was the fact that Sam inmediately forgot all his anger the moment his protective Instinct for naina came forth...😳...

And... Take a bow... U know Sam's each nerve... nobody gets into the skin of his character the way u do⭐️
The way u described his thought process...him pondering over his mom's words...then thinking against those very words ... brilliant⭐️

Aah... The innocence in those kisses ... I could literally visualise the whole thing playing in front of my eyes... Praying to God that we see something of that sort in the show itself😳...

And...brilliance is an understatement in the way u carved out another amazingly interaction between samaina...truly reflecting the characters in the show...if naina's kisses cried out innocence...Sameer's were full of desire... exactly what we were treated to last Monday...⭐️...

And u penned down the full track in just one line..."our life partners fulfill our shortcomings"... And I feel this is what sun's down the relationship of samaina...they both are as different as chalk and cheese...but put them together...they are a complete package and a force to reckon with!


Thank u so much for this mou...

Looking forward to the next weekend...and the new take u are going to spin for us 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#50
Awesome Mou 👏 . Your story is more satisfying than Cvs . Kash episode me bhi yehe hota 😕 .
With love
Your biggest fan 😳

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