Naina OS : Gudiya Ki Shaadi - Page 2

Lovely May!!Absolute brilliant piece of writing ...

May! This was one powerful piece of writing. You left me speechless. In the middle, I travelled down the memory lane where as a kid, me and my sister married our dolls. But like Rani, we too did not bother to ask if thr groom n thr bride wanted to wed. They were toys and it was a game. Somehow I shuddered to think what would've happened if I'd been in Rani's place or Naina's place for that matter.

Gut wrenching yaar 😭 him already ro rahe hai, tum aur baltiyan bhar ke rulav 😭

awesome os
simple yet painful
loved it

Beautiful OS May... It just took me back to my childhood days. poor Naina she thinks she's being punished coz she didnt understood raani's pain at that time 😭 but thats indian socitey damn we women are considered similiar to dolls as if we dont have emotions and any right on our lives . Its just not about marriage topic being women we face many such situations which makes us think y the hell we are born as girls boys have better life than us but kya kar sktey hai .. Indian society hasnt changed much 90s mei conditions were worst ab toh phir bhi families are supportive but I just hope Naina voices out and take a stand for herself and her love for sameer. Would actually love if u could add part 2 to it to show gudiya fighting this time ...

This was vey heartbreaking
Is there a chance of a part 2

Very different concept. :Oved it.

Originally posted by: Chatterbox1

Such a besutiful OS, please write another part..please let Rani take a stand for herself. I could feel this one so much..please give it a happy ending!

Thanks dear 😊 so happy you enjoyed and felt this OS so much. I penned this one very quickly and did not spend much time in editing.. hence really happy that it turned out well. I too really want Naina to stand up for herself!

Originally posted by: JaySee

Fantastic story.
I was in tears towards the end. Naina is just treated like a lifeless doll. More than that I feel like she is been treated like a domestic animal to which it's owner got no attachment at all. Selling off to someone where they can make/save more money. Feeling pity fro her.

I was in tears as I wrote the end too! It is so ironic that the same family that she is sacrificing her happiness for does not give two hoots about her happiness at all!

Thanks for your comments dear 😊

Originally posted by: Yudkbh30

So painful & heart breaking os

Thank dear. I know.. Naina is going through some situations where she has feels that she has no control over. hopefully she will realothay she owes it to herself and Rani to put up a fight!