PreeDit OS : A shoulder to laugh on - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Dear Aayushiii...
As much as I am amazed always at the wonderful stories you have woven, this one is no exception. ⭐️

My heart was yearning for Preedit in the show, glad that you blessed us atleast here with the concept. More Love to you for that ❤️

So so so...Samaina and Swamun had played their roles in Preedit, unintentionally though. Really they are friends for a lifetime.😊

Preedit had all the rights to vent out the anger. After all, their best friends-souls have kept them in the dark. Had it been me, it would have been a worser reaction (the way I would react if you dont PM me about your new post 😆😆😆 )

Loved how you have narrated the anguish of Preeti and Pandit. Preeti is not just Naina's soul sister, she is her best friend who is her rock pillar support, someone who always made sure Naina's smile never faded even in the toughest of times. The same holds for Pandit- Sameer relation as well.

It has always been observed two individuals in the same pain always end up in great bonding and wow..Preedit did the same. They consoled each other, blurted out their anger and were pacified.

These two are really bhukkad, even in such a situation, they cared to share the chocolate and had a puppy fight as well😉

Those golden words of Pandit that he is always there to make her smile and Preeti's gesture accepting him as his best friend, you made us feel aren't they made for each other...it was just a matter of few minutes and their souls are already connected. 😳

I did notice the indirect proposal between them, was anyway bored with cliche dialogues and you did add lot of flavors to it.

Love, Love and More Love🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Prizi

beautifully written
ab to swati ka v setting ho gaya.. kuch to preeti k liye de do


Hahaha! Haan Preeti ki turn kab aayegi? 😳

Thank you! 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful and a light hearted OS. You have picked up their actual character and plot and woven a fantastic story on it.
Loved it very much.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: mystique123

Dear Aayushiii...

As much as I am amazed always at the wonderful stories you have woven, this one is no exception. ⭐️

Flattering! 😆 You do know na how much you make me happy by saying things like these 😃 Thank you! 😳

My heart was yearning for Preedit in the show, glad that you blessed us atleast here with the concept. More Love to you for that ❤️

I want them too! They're such a perfect couple for each other, I think CVs don't give them coz focus PreeDit par chala jayega LOL.😆 Much love to you! <3

So so so...Samaina and Swamun had played their roles in Preedit, unintentionally though. Really they are friends for a lifetime.😊
Haha! Ye bhi dekh liya? 😆 Haan preeti ab Naina se gussa nahi rahegi, Pandit se friendship kara di 😉

Preedit had all the rights to vent out the anger. After all, their best friends-souls have kept them in the dark. Had it been me, it would have been a worser reaction (the way I would react if you dont PM me about your new post 😆😆😆 )

Hahaha! 🤣 I know, it would be disheartening to know your friends forgot you , especially when they know you're like family to them :) Asking once is in itself enough :)
I will PM you always 😛

Loved how you have narrated the anguish of Preeti and Pandit. Preeti is not just Naina's soul sister, she is her best friend who is her rock pillar support, someone who always made sure Naina's smile never faded even in the toughest of times. The same holds for Pandit- Sameer relation as well.

Exactly!! Naina-Preeti share a bond that literally warms the beart. Preeti has always been there for her. And likewise, Pandit has supported Sameer-Munna in whatever they do without question. 👏

It has always been observed two individuals in the same pain always end up in great bonding and wow..Preedit did the same. They consoled each other, blurted out their anger and were pacified.

Yeahh! Pain binds us together, yes they cried, consoled, laughed and befriended. 😳

These two are really bhukkad, even in such a situation, they cared to share the chocolate and had a puppy fight as well😉

😆😆 I wanted to make the moment a bit light so chocolate share krwa di :P

Those golden words of Pandit that he is always there to make her smile and Preeti's gesture accepting him as his best friend, you made us feel aren't they made for each other...it was just a matter of few minutes and their souls are already connected. 😳

Haan! I imagine them as that. Their story should start with the strongest form of friendship and develop from there into something wonderful :) yes, connected! 😃

I did notice the indirect proposal between them, was anyway bored with cliche dialogues and you did add lot of flavors to it.

Yes. I wanted to leave the ending with an hope of them getting together but in a fun and interesting way 😳

Love, Love and More Love🤗

Awww back to you! Love🤗


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Thanksss ⭐️
Edited by A.Green - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: JaySee

Beautiful and a light hearted OS. You have picked up their actual character and plot and woven a fantastic story on it.
Loved it very much.


Thank you for saying that! 😳

Glad you felt I could do justice to their characters 😊
Glad you liked reading it :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you so much! 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
Wow wow wow!!!
Kitna sweet tha!
Loved the last line of pandit.. pyaar ho jaata hai aksar best friends ke beech... and her reply hayee! Dekhenge phir.. achha hai na.. loved it!
Loveddd it all..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: 9211

Wow wow wow!!!

Kitna sweet tha!
Loved the last line of pandit.. pyaar ho jaata hai aksar best friends ke beech... and her reply hayee! Dekhenge phir.. achha hai na.. loved it!
Loveddd it all..


Thank you so much 🤗

Glad you liked it! 😊

Haha best friends mein pyaar ho jata hai 😉 Woh dono hain hi aise, ek sher toh dusri sawa sher 😆 happy to know you liked that ending bit :)

Thanks again! 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
It was cute dear 👍🏼
Thank you so much for PM
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
Ayu dear I love you yaar🤗 dil le lo
OS padhne lagi tab se Ab tak main pagal ko tarah apni battisi dikha k smile kr rhi hu😃 itna pyaara OS h

Preeti to h hi teekhi chhuri😉

Last k dono dialogues..my my
Aur likha kro yaar Ayu

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