Sameer-Naina SS- Unanticipated Moves (Part-10 Updated)PG-44 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Mayashika

I knew it wasn't going to be easy to go to Nagpur together but they didn't even reach there together😭 Well, life doesn't go as planned..It's sad, actually.

True dear..Life is not as per our plan ..Man proposes and god disposes.

The guilt and the sadness was perfectlly represented, I could feel the heaviness in my chest maybe because I have seen it closely...When it seems like your dreams are shattering, it's such an unpleasant feeling you get.

Its really unsettling and choking.

He would withstand it all but never let her be a broken soul or broken dreamer.

That pretty much sums up his feeling, isn't it!? There is nothing to add.

Such a romantic moment that was, him setting her hair. Her imperfections are just for him to see!

And haha, that quick innuendo.😉

Glad you loved the whole of it.😃

I loved that short scene of Jija-Saali, I always enjoy them😳 They have such an adorable bond.

Loved the flashback!

Something happened in the trip. If the reason is someone, I would like an angry Sameer.

Can't wait for the next...!

Updating soon.😃

Originally posted by: _.SilentHeart._

PART 2..

So sorry dear for being late in commenting

Happy belated birthday to Chachaji.. 😃

Thank you dear on his behalf.😃

As usual beautiful update.. Loved it!! 👍🏼

Thank you for appreciating.

Umm bright red nail polish.. This girl is totally tease 😉

She is giving hug to him, this means that this girl has come a long way.. But he wants more, consolation prize

Sameer is such a despo boy, can't control.. "Hum tum ek basket ball ground mein khade ho aur kiss ho jaaye" he was singing this, it was really funny 😆

Glad that the song actually made you laugh.😃

So the forehead kiss was his prize, it was cute... but he wanted something different

I enjoyed the tashan between Sameer and Kartik's gang.. loved the way he answered them 👏

Kartik needs a good tashan.I am not liking how they are forcing the tashan on show.

Preeti is very smart.. She knows perfectly that how to deal with Taiji, her idea was an awesome

Bad Jokes of JBR.. It was fun to read 😆

Priyank ko 76% kaise mil gaye, cheating hi hogi yeh toh.. Fir bhi jeetega nahi wo

Iske liye stay tuned.😳

Thanks for the PM dear

Originally posted by: _.SilentHeart._

PART 3

Again beautiful update dear.. Loved it!! 👏

Loved the scene where Sameer was consoling Naina..

Sameer is a perfect SIL for SS.. thappad ki baatein kar raha tha 😆

Firse Naina Sameer ko choose kar rahi hai.. She must understand that the study is also important.

Isliye toh Sameer samjha raha hai.He is near her and can't let her fail like last time.

You have written beautiful dialogues for Sameer.. "Pushpa! Sorry Naina!I hate tears re", loved this one 👍🏼

Glad you are loving the dialogues.😃

Rain flashback was so cute.. It was totally pyaar ❤️

Felt bad for Naina, she has also lost her smile.. Her dream also broke, Hope that Sameer will do something 😃

Sameer would do but what he does for that keep reading.😃

Cliffhanger!! But I love it.. It increases curiosity

Update soon and Thanks for the PM dear

Awesome update dear

Hey minu

Kya suspense he can't wait to read further

Originally posted by: shravyarao

Loved the twists n turns you are coming up with, its making the story intriguing. I can't stop laughing with the sameer n sunaina's convo, loved it, nagpur mein kisi pagal kutte ne nahi kaat diya isko lol. Yaar, totally loved how sameer took care of naina, when she was feeling all out of sorts. So, kartik stole ved's notes n naina was late for the competition. What is karthik upto now? Kartik deserves some more, priyank deserves more than him. I don't know why, but i don't like priyank at all in the show, i kinda want to kick him everytime he comes up, no offense to anyone but i think his character was built to be disliked, Sameer loudly proclaiming and asserting his love for naina to get rid of her insecure self to see herself through his eyes hayee..!! and him becoming ahmedabads jasoos 😆 can't wait for the next one.

Thanks for the PM love.

Thanks Shravya for appreciating and loving it.You are a fabulous writer and such kind words coming from a writer does encourage to strive better and write out the best.No body loves Priyank and I feel his character is being wasted making him flat.Round character can anyday be interesting to watch.Sameer is definitely goals here.Updating soon.

Are are ho kya raha hai confusion confusion confusion... Sunaina ko pyar ho gaya wahh .. so sameer jasoos ko abhi our jasoosi karni padegi hmm interesting please update soon and thanks for the pm

Oh my God .. this story so interesting and every part is so good

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