Sameer-Naina SS- Unanticipated Moves (Part-10 Updated)PG-44

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Isha

@mystique123

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#281

Minu...

Such a beautiful update ⭐️ Loved it to the core ❤️

Oh..So Kartik is the captain and Sameer his deputy...hmmm...interesting...looks like much more is in the offing.

Glad that Sameer could connect the dots and derive at the culprit:Kartik. He also even realized that Kartik is That man who lives for self alone, lives for the meanest mortal known. He is just self absorbed who thinks of his happiness and have no regards or respect for others.Selfishness is that detestable vice which no one will forgive in others and I am sure Sameer will pay him back on similar lines to Mr.so called Sikander uff Kartik. I really loved the way you have shaped up their convo 😊

Dalai Lama once said Don't let others behavior destroy your inner peace and I admire Sameer for shifting his attention from the crappy Kartik to his love Naina.

Such adorbs Sameer-Naina and their love is 🤗 He is always there for her not because he wants her to be with him but because he wants to be with her .Their love is that journey that starts at forever and ends at never.

Naina losing the speech makes me confused... is it one of Kartik's trick again😲.Sameer is goona ruin him, if it is...😉

When they gaze at each other they see their today, tomorrow and forever together.She is his sun, moon and the galaxy, his passion,his life and his world. She is the reason for his existence.She is the music that calms his soul. He touched her spirit and she touched back his heart with her soul.

Their love reminds me that Love is a beautiful journey where every step is a destination and every moment eternity. ❤️

Eager to know what happened next.😊

Love❤️

Edited by mystique123 - 7 years ago

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Seema

@JaySee

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#282

Superb update Minu. Atleast Sameer Karthik face off happened. Karthik is literally a coward who thinks that he can win others by backstabbing those who are near and dear to him.
Don't know why, I am getting a feeling that Sameer is going to use the opportunity of speech to expose Karthik in front of entire college. Will be really interesting to see how he is going to produce the proof.
Pls update soon.

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Anjali33

@Anjali33

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#283

Ahh! It's lovely Minu

I loved loved loooved the confrontation between Sameer n Kartik

Kartik was shit scared😆

But of course, apni besharam wali aukat dikhaye bina to rahega nhi na wo

Why do I hv a feeling ki ye speech normal speech nhi hoga.. Pardafash krne wala h Sameer is speech se??

Speech ka paper bhi Kartik ne hi gayab kiya hoga

And one of their firsts😳 it was beautiful

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Aayushi

@A.Green

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#284

Res!

Although kya mast update tha

Unres! 😳

Best part was the last bit. Sameer, Naina loves you, Sameer loves you too, that has my heart ❤️

Starting with the update, I loved Sameer and Kartik's confrontation and the basketball that was involved within 😉

Sameer is gonna show the Self-proclaimed Sikandar who is the boss and I am excited! 😎 The detective Sameer has unravelled the mystery, just a proof is what he needs 😳

I love the conversation by the river 😃 But I was shocked at Naina's thoughts 😲

Absolutely marvellous how you didn't let that conversation get serious, Sameer told her he would follow, aww, such a cute boy! <3 Humari kahani adhuri reh jayegi ^_^

The last one was so cute, Naina gayegi and sab itne excited 👏

Hug between them was absolutely amazing, how he couldn't concentrate on the problem coz she was hugging him

The way Naina relaxed when Sameer said he would do it! ⭐️ Ab toh Speech ka intezaar hai sachii 😉

And the description of the kiss, well no words to appreciate what you have written, the play into the kiss, the whole environment was made lively by your words, I could seriously imagine them ☺️

Adored this update! <3

Continue soonish. You keep delievering the unanticipated much in line with your title 😆

Edited by A.Green - 7 years ago

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Yudkbh30

@Yudkbh30

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#285

Wow so beautiful

Plz update soon

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ArshAriya

@ArshAriya

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#286

Awesomieee superb update continue soon dear

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UnknownJhalli

@UnknownJhalli

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#287

wonderful update dear

so finally pta chl gya ki yeh sb Karthik ne kiya hain ! coward

hmm that romantic moment between Samaina in the last part was just amazing I blushed so hard while reading it

Sameer the saviour came in rescue for Naina

I think next update me in pardafaash ho jaayega

Update soon

Lots of love 😳

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suhaaniladki

@suhaaniladki

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#288

So finally jagga jasoos sameer ne real culprit figure out Kar hi liya ... Confrontation between karthik and sameer was good too. Now m waiting to see how will sameer expose him I think may be in speech but as the title suggests I would love to read what will be Sam's next unanticipated move.. And the lovely romantic moment samaina shared was bliss😳

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Lakshmi

@lakku19

Navigator

Posted: 7 years ago

#289

Super update minu..

Please update Kati patang too..waiti Wa eagerly

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#290

Minu! Finally read both the parts over the weekend. I must applaud you for presenting such a thrilling story, interspersed with witty humorous lines. This is one of your best attempts at humour.

I cracked up everytime I read the funny dialogues, especially Sameer's! I'm impressed. But more than the humour bit of it, I'm impressed with the Karamchand Jasoos avatar of Sameer...And that scene with Munna as Dr. Watson! O bai...car se aata hai to ghar dur hoga...main amir nai Sameer hun...aur meri behen bahot choti hai...

The way Sameer wrote the notes!! Wow!

Kartik- yahan bhi aa gaya!

Swati-Kartik! Nah

My Topper

I just loved the addendums here. So finally Sameer has arrived at the truth. The basketball encounter between Kartik n Sameer reminded me of Sameer's 1st day in school in the show n his encounter with Pankaj! Scoring baskets over each other was an awesome way to list out the scores in the conversation.

So Sameer needs proofs!

Ab speech ka paper gayab hone mein bhi kya Kartik ka haath hai?

Sameer is always there- saviour for his girl. And finally he got his much deserved prize!

Kudos Minu! This is one hatke and unanticipated story! Waiting for the next twist!

Love

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