Samaina SS : 'Suhana Safar' (*Updated*; Epilogue on Page 85)

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#281

Part 6: Aaisha! Main tennu pehle vi dasaya hai...ae story meri one of the favourite haigi eh...cute, innocent romance...lekin lagta hai ab innocence is lending way to desires! 😉

Thankfully, tumhari story me they are normal college going kids in love, who are not immune to such feelings.

So pehli baar judai...n dono se sahi nahi jaa rahi...dono apne friends n family ke saath time spend kar rahe hain...but their hearts are with each other...

I really loved the 2 honk signal and the balcony scene and the way you melded the song lyrics with their actions...I could so imagine Samaina there blushing profusely...n Sameer's love lorn eyes set on his girl!

You incorporated the Megha ben incident as well here...would it have any bearing onto their story? I hope not!

Nanu! Nanu! Nanu! How we miss this character on the show!

Matlab yaar...kya sahi fansa nawase ko...Pandit ne phone kiya...Pandit pass mein rehta hai...to gaadi leke kyun gaya...Munna Dilli gaya hai...haaye! I relived the old memories of Nanu teasing Sammy about his special friend...tajurba isi ka naam hai haini haini?

I adore this story dear and am already waiting for the next update!

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#282

Part 5: Dheere dheere pyaar ko badhana hai...hadh se guzar jaana hai...you know I was humming this song all the time when I read this update of yours! Fantastic!

Pehle to you showed Naina-Shefali bond...I used to love that in the show...unfortunately beech me they cut it down n ab to dikhne se raha...you showed Shefali as a cool senior...dono ke timings alag (acha hai privacy rehti hai 😉)...yet understanding puri! Shefali didi..kajal do na...n Shefali's astonishment! And the best one was: "Maheshwari to gaya!" Chalo sabko pata hai dono lattu hain ek dusre pe! 😆

And Sam actual me lattu ho gaya Naina ka makeover dekh ke...wow! And his teasing...mujhe laga mere liye tayyar hoke aayi ho types!

Dono ka pyaar to badhta jaa rha hai...n thankfully Rohan yahan bolta hai aur samajhta hai ki bhai pyaar mein hai!

The entire meeting of Rohan, Naina, Sameer n Deepika at Chandani chowk was so cute! I was reminded of a story I was in the process of writing...usme bhi I had written something like this about Deepika thinking about Naina's name as bhabhi...n her bonding with her...hamare khayalaat milte hain vakayi! I was happy you wrote on these lines...show mein to Deepika-Naina ki bonding ke sapne hi sajate reh gaye hum...

And the best part was padhaku-padhaku dost-dost...sharmila Rohan bhi bhabhi se bak bak karne laga aur dono shararati sochne lage ki yahan bhi padhai ki baatein kar rahe hain dono!

And the exam prep! Really! I liked that Sameer is also trying to work hard here...trying to do his best...doesn't love bring out the best in you? Wish show mein bhi they'd shown Naina worried for Sameer's studies as she used to be in 11th...lekin yahan ladka paper ke time pe use ghur raha hai n she doesn't even know! Na hi use saath baith ke padhaya! Such a contrast to 11th std head boy exams...when she gave him her lucky pen n was constantly checking as to how he was faring in the exam...n jaan me jaan tab aayi jab he told his friends he'd done well!

Well written as always dear!

Eager for more!

Love

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Aisha

@Samaina_16

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Posted: 7 years ago

#283

Originally posted by: Ramy_ani
Amazing update

Thank you 😊

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Aisha

@Samaina_16

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Posted: 7 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: Sameerkideewani
awesome update dear
It was just perfect
So finally Jija-saali mil gye
SamAina scene was so cute mujhe bhi gudgudi hone lagi😳
loved Nanu and Sameer's scene
plzzz update soon
Lots of love

Thank you so much 😊

😉Abhi to jija sali ki bhi isharo isharo me baatein hui hain, picture Abhi baaki hai 😳

Hehe aapko bhi gudgudi hui, mjhe b likhti hue hui. 😊

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Aisha

@Samaina_16

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Posted: 7 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain
Mast update!!
Thanks a lot 😊

Samaina in Ahmedabad has a completely different feel! Aashiqui song playing in the background lifted it to another level..
You are right, Ahmedabad is inseperable from Samaina's story 😉

Naina Preeti conversation and Sameer Nanu conversation were just too good! Nanu always brings such an amazing energy to the show or stories. I loved how he managed to get Sameer to confess about his special friend in the story 😊
Nanu's character was very close to my heart, that's why I always try to incorporate his scenes in my stories. I am glad you love the bonding.

The story is progressing very well!

Thank you very much. My replies in bold 😊

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Aisha

@Samaina_16

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Posted: 7 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: vidrev
A very nice update and the way nanu pulled Sam legs was nice. Taiji tho kisiko nahi chodthi. Happy that nanu is still there for Sam as I love both of their bond very much. Thank you for the wonderful update.

Hey, I love Nanu and Sam's bond too. Nanu will pull his leg and at the same time always show him the right path too. 😳

Thanks a lot 😊

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Aisha

@Samaina_16

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Posted: 7 years ago

#287

Originally posted by: JaySee
Superb update Aisha.
You have shown beautifully how they miss each other and the kind of feelings that Naina is having just by the intense gaze of Sameer.
Best of all is the presence of Nanu. Eagerly waiting to see the meeting of Naina and Nanu.
Update soon.

Thanks a ton 😊

I wanted to dwell into the concept of slow build up of physical intimacy. Show me to kuch ho nahi Raha 😛

I have always loved Nanu so how could I not involve him here 😳

Naina and Nanu will meet in the next part surely. Will try to update soon 😊

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Aisha

@Samaina_16

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Posted: 7 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: dreamyp
Loved it.. last scene made me laugh.. gudgudi c hoti h hehe naina b na..

Thank you Meenakshi 😊

Naina jhalli hai na 😉

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Aisha

@Samaina_16

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Posted: 7 years ago

#289

Originally posted by: Anjali33
Tashu, subah se padhne baithi hu but Whatsapp aur Isko sath mein use kr rhi hu.. To late ho gyi, sorry!!
It's okay yar. Sorry vorry chodho. Kisi mahan Insaan ne kaha hai Dosti me no sorry no thank you 😆

Aww.. Babies mil nhi pa rhe
But as they say, door rehne se pyaar badhta h.. N you've expressed that very well👏
Thanks Anjali. Hehe you are right door rehne se pyaar bdhta hai aur Sameer ka kuch jyada hi bdhta ja Raha hai 😉

Naina ko pata nhi chal rha ki use wo kuch kuch jo use ho rha h, wo kya h☺️ but Sameer knows ki use kya ho rha h😉
Sameer practical demonstration de mar smjhega jaldi hi😉

Nanu's part was soo cute.. I miss him yaar😭
Me too yar. He was the best. Unko miss Karti Hun islie apni stories me zarur laati hun 😳