Sequel FF: Sameer 'sang' Naina (Section V Part 2 updated- Pg 107) - Page 6

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Posted: 7 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: msdfan

Beautiful start with Naina's birthday

Show mein to 2 chije kabhi dekhno ko nahi mili.. first Naina's Birthday and second Sameer's jealousy.. aapne de diye 😊

Now waiting for the Naina's birthday celebration.. hope so kuch achha hi hoga

Aapne to aaj surprise hi de diya.. 1 hi din mein 2 stories.. Thank you for sequel.. totally loved the first part 👍🏼

Update soon... Thanks for the PM


Hehe- true yaar...dono cheezein cover ho gayi yahaan par...😆😆
Thank you dear!! Yeah- my way to deal with a depressing precap- load love into Samaina world!! 😆😆

Love,
Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: priyavishu18

Its Interesting Update...

College s full swing going on...Sameer Jealous s Nice...

Yaar its only 2 to 3 Parts College...

Then Please Move on their Marriage Part...

How they convience both their families...

Want a Samina Proper Wedding Track...

Want Taiji Jealous tat simple Naina Wedding the Rich Maheswari...

Don't worry dear...sab milega...bahot kuch batane ko...twists n turns...😃 I do hope I'm able to keep you guys interested though...😳😳
Thanks a lot dear for the wonderful review!!
Love,
Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: AlishaSyed

Wow such an amazing update .. beautifully written and we'll described .. loved it .. and especially love the way you started the story form his entry and the year where ddlj has been released .. hayeee Dil le lo .. Naina ki irritation and waiting

. Maybe Sameer ne kuch bada plan Kiya hua hai .. hahaha Sameer The Jealous Maheshwari .. loved it I love seeing possessive jealous Sameer .. and hoping to see Sameer as jealous in the show as you have shown him here ..
Going to read it again

And eagerly waiting for next part
Don't forget to PM me


Hey dear Alisha!! Thank you so much yaar!!
Yeah- you know what- I'm a big fab of DDLJ- Somehow wanted to ghusaofy that film...I actually have only one regret in the show- why didn't they set it in 1995!! 😆😆
Yeah so somehow I had to keep it a year before DDLJ released (due to reasons the updates would disclose)- but then couldn't help myself from the Raj of DDLJ reference...I know I know...filmy me!! 🤪
Yes...Sameer has to safeguard his girl from unwanted attention...coz Naina is too bholi-bhaali to know how men can be...actually for girls like Naina, boys like Sameer are the best!! 😃😃
Love,
Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago
#54
Hayye Sur this is so sweet, Raj/Simran feels indeed. And I am a huge DDLJ fan :)
Also I will have to read the Love in Mt. Abu one, I cheated and read random chapters in between out of curiosity (guilty I know🥱) and loved it . All these stories are making me feel like a teenager again Not sure if that is good or bad 😆

Cheers!
N
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Posted: 7 years ago
#55
This was awesome.. how he has eyes only for her when ton of other girls r drooling over him! Update soon... with his bday surprise!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Samaina_1990


Hello again Simi!! Haaye!! Again hugs!! 🤗
So glad you enjoyed the start- I remember you told me you were waiting for this one...ab Friday ka precap dekh ke mera mood bada kharab ho gaya tbh...so this was my way of getting some positivity back in the Samaina world!! 😳😳
Of course Sameer is worldy wise- he understands how men are!! Just like he understood Arjun's intentions in the show too when he's trying to set Shefali for himself...And of course, Naina is beautiful, whatever Taiji might say!!
Sameer ka surprise karna to possible hai hi...varna mushkil ho jayegi uski love story mein...😆😆 The gang would be back soon! Don't worry- shayad hamesha saath me na dikhein...but would get to know their individual stories too!! 😳😳

Thanks again dear!!!
Love,
Sur

yes dear sur... I was waiting fo for this so eagerly... I maen it... U know what... my way of dealing with depressing tracks is reading ' love in mt. Abu' and it always works... That one is a masterpiece... Its very close to my heart and will always remain so... In fact your version is much better than the show itself... I can read it any no. Of times... It amazes me that u r new to writing... U r as good as a professional writer... Do not stop writing dear... I'm saying this as a loyal fan of yours.
Love and hugs
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Posted: 7 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: tanya119

Hii!

Though i haven't read ur prev FF due to busy school days.
But all i can say is that , this one is just amazing!
I so wanted to read something like this. .. Two of them already in a relation nd how they passes through various stages of a relationship , when matured.

In the show , i think the cvs have forgot abt naina's bday😆
But u did gave importance to this and that too by making this day turn into a beautiful one for naina.

Looking frwd to ur further update to know whether he had really forgotten her bday or something else is there in his mind😉

Loved ur style of writing !

Ps : i would read ur other stories once i get free from exams.

Tanya


Hey Tanya!! Thank you so much dear!! 😳😳 I'm glad you enjoyed it!! All the best for your exams!
Love,
Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks dear!! 😳😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: moumita04

Aah Sur... Finally this story is up...!! Kitna intezaar kiya humne aur kitna intezaar karvaya tumne..!! But totally worth it... 😃


I read you comment on my story... and yeah ise padhne ke baad woh PM karna zaruri tha... I was astonished... Great minds do think alike... 😆

I can visibly see the change in your writing style... and its a treat to read... more detailing, more symmetry and I always love the dialogues you put in... 👏👏

First Question - I remember you said earlier that you showed Naina in Pink top and blue jeans... but yahan to top bright yellow ho gaya..! You changed??

Now about the story - what a day to start your story with... Naina's birthday..! It has to be special of course... How can Sameer not celebrate the day...! 👍🏼
The entry suited him to T... and the way they talk in between class... 😆😆 Achcha hua professor ne class me se nai nikal diya... Both of them like to see the possessive side of each other... haaye..!!

Bechara Sameer... He has to fend off guys interested in Naina... but its so good to see this side of the story... The jealous Sameer is lovely to read about... Ek hi chapter me 2-2 ladke...Atul and Ravi... hahaa... I hope aage aur bhi ho aise... 😉

You know the dialogue you wrote for Sameer - "Ghar main chod aaun ya wo bhi usi ke sath jayengi aap?"...Hahahahaa... 😆 This reminded me of my dating days when we were not married... We had a lunch date fixed and that morning a guy from my team who is 6 years older to me and was about to be married soon, gave me a side hug on the news of my promotion. This guy was just a good friend of mine, and plus I was his manager for god sake... But it didn't matter to my hubby, who was then my boyfriend plus a colleague... That afternoon before leaving for lunch, he tells me "Mere bike pe hi bethna hai na? ya aaj lunch bhi usike saath karne jaogi uske bike pe." 😆😆😆 I was so amused, as that was the first time I saw a spark of jealousy in him... You just brought back all those pleasant memories...😳😳

So... I am sure Sameer cannot forget her birthday... What's lined up next?? I am eager to read how he celebrates her birthday! 😊

Congratulations on starting this wonderful FF... I am sure this would be as much loved by all and just as much beautiful to read as the prequel, maybe even more...!! 🤗

Love,
Mou

Hey Mou! Dil khush kar ditta!! Mast comments!! 😃😃 I know...I'm still not able to come to terms with the fact ki hamari stories itni similar lines pe hain- 2 bande jinse Sameer jealous hota hai...ek canteen mein...aur dusra notes lene ke bahane Naina ke piche bhagta hai...Naina ka birthday ka khayal!! haha!! Sach mein...great minds like us do think alike! 😉😉
Arey waah- tumhari memory ki daad deni padegi! You remembered the pink top and blue jeans...well yes I did change par iska reason tumhe aage chalke pata chalega 😆😆 hopefully next update mein...
About the jealousy angle- seriously Mou! kitni similar lines haina...tumhe yaad aa gayi tumhare Sameer ki jalan haha...😆😆 Jijaji ko padha dena ye lines...unko bhi yaad aa jayega!! 😆😆
Thank you so much yaar!! 🤗Tum hamein protsahit karti raho (Sameer ki Hindi mein bolun to encourage 😆😆 I kind of miss Sameer ki wo Hindi me bolo na lines...😆😆)...dekhein aage chalke firse hamari stories me kab similarity aati hain (ek aur aayegi thodi thodi...lekin abhi nai bataungi 😆😉)
Love,
Sur
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kiran1018

Loving the fresh new story. Seems very interesting with romance, fun, and sweet moments. Can't wait to see where you take the story from here. Love love love seeing a jealous Sameer always. I am so glad you showed shades of jealousy in Sameer. I am sure The Sameer Maheshwari has some big plans for Naina which will take her breathe away. Can't wait to find out in the next part. Thanks for the PM. Can't wait for the next part. Thank you for a fresh new story. And you know what's so nice and different about this story? The style of writing is completely different from your current ff on Samina (Expectedly Unexpected). That's great as we get to read two stories with two different writing styles. I am not sure which one I will like more but what I am sure of is that I will be eagar and excited to read both.


Aww thanks dear!! 😳😳 Yes it is a fresh story...but a sequel to my first story here...so the writing style is relatable to that one I guess...I know it's very different than how I write for Expectedly Unexpected...I have to put myself in a different frame of mind when I pen that one down.
I hope you end up enjoying both of them!! 😳😳

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