Originally posted by: moumita04
Aah Sur... Finally this story is up...!! Kitna intezaar kiya humne aur kitna intezaar karvaya tumne..!! But totally worth it... 😃
I read you comment on my story... and yeah ise padhne ke baad woh PM karna zaruri tha... I was astonished... Great minds do think alike... 😆
I can visibly see the change in your writing style... and its a treat to read... more detailing, more symmetry and I always love the dialogues you put in... 👏👏
First Question - I remember you said earlier that you showed Naina in Pink top and blue jeans... but yahan to top bright yellow ho gaya..! You changed??
Now about the story - what a day to start your story with... Naina's birthday..! It has to be special of course... How can Sameer not celebrate the day...! 👍🏼
The entry suited him to T... and the way they talk in between class... 😆😆 Achcha hua professor ne class me se nai nikal diya... Both of them like to see the possessive side of each other... haaye..!!
Bechara Sameer... He has to fend off guys interested in Naina... but its so good to see this side of the story... The jealous Sameer is lovely to read about... Ek hi chapter me 2-2 ladke...Atul and Ravi... hahaa... I hope aage aur bhi ho aise... 😉
You know the dialogue you wrote for Sameer - "Ghar main chod aaun ya wo bhi usi ke sath jayengi aap?"...Hahahahaa... 😆 This reminded me of my dating days when we were not married... We had a lunch date fixed and that morning a guy from my team who is 6 years older to me and was about to be married soon, gave me a side hug on the news of my promotion. This guy was just a good friend of mine, and plus I was his manager for god sake... But it didn't matter to my hubby, who was then my boyfriend plus a colleague... That afternoon before leaving for lunch, he tells me "Mere bike pe hi bethna hai na? ya aaj lunch bhi usike saath karne jaogi uske bike pe." 😆😆😆 I was so amused, as that was the first time I saw a spark of jealousy in him... You just brought back all those pleasant memories...😳😳
So... I am sure Sameer cannot forget her birthday... What's lined up next?? I am eager to read how he celebrates her birthday! 😊
Congratulations on starting this wonderful FF... I am sure this would be as much loved by all and just as much beautiful to read as the prequel, maybe even more...!! 🤗
Love,
Mou