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Samainadeewani

@Samainadeewani

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Nive way to start my weekend..

How beautifully you showed their desperation and need to be with each other

I actually read it twice and now going to read it once again

Seriously this lost made my day

Rain was very aptly used in the story...

What can I say about dialogues ...dil le lo

Sameer's statement about loving his girl was soo passionate

Yet so subtle

Hats off to you

Last line was cherry on cake

Loved the update

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Niakhush

@Niakhush

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

First if Minu I really dnt knw why am i habituated to read all it such os at a wrong place...this time to the title itself had a disclaimer..yet I read it in office... Saturday's office sucks!!

The os was full of passion...love everything...u cn write so well...the best part was I love u anyways even in a mess... awesome os dear!!!

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priyanka

@doublecross

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Not everyone can do sensual hot and sensitive together, you need special talent for that! This was a perfect amalgamation of passion, love, emotions, care and selflessness. I guess the beauty of the lovemaking was depicted in one of its purest form where love is accepted even when it's messy! Kudos to you for coming up with such a brilliant idea. Weekends are usually dull but story writers like you make it special for us. Thanks for the brilliance and perfection!

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Haayee...I'm still dreaming about rains...and their love making!!! Sameer liking his girl...even when she thinks she is unfit, she's messy...was awww! That's how a man is when he truly loves his woman! He wants her, she wants him...nothing else matters! Period! (Well, not even that!)

I really loved the intensity of the scene Minu!! It was sensual to the hilt, without being explicit at all. I'm eager to read more on this...or more such parts like this...keep them coming!!

Pyaar sach me shayad wahi samajh sakte hain, jinhone sach me kabhi kisi se pyaar kiya hota hai...is emotion ko samjhaya nahi jaa sakta...bas mehsoos kiya ja sakta hai...and is emotion ko sirf Sameer aur Naina mehsoos kar sakte hain...

Loved it to the core!

Love,

Sur

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Sona../PJ

@Sona07

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Wow Minu.. It was magical.. Loved it.. 👏

Too hot yaar.. Good to read.. I already read it twice

You made my day with this beautiful OS.. 😊

Sameer's dialogues is beautifully written.. Last line was the best 👍🏼

Thanks for the PM

Edited by msdfan - 7 years ago

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reema1991

@reema1991

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

It's beautiful dear❤️ thanks for pm😊you have written it so beautifully...their desperation for each other and the way Sameer showed his love for Naina was so intense...thank you for this os on boring weekends

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Veda1125
Wow..loved it ..." Wind is here"..brilliant!

Thank you dear...You have always been encouraging. 😃

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mehraan

@mehraan

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Intense n passionate Darling!!❤️...Jus luv how Sam baba cnt get enough of her...!!The last line tuk my DIL away. .

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Laizu Khan

@smiley_lizi

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Wonderfully written.

Would love to quote these lines again from here which I found best.

"I love you when you are good,when you are bad and even more when you are beautifully messy."

"Why do you love her so much?''

"Because you don't meet someone everyday who can embrace your madness.''

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Phoenix

@Phoenix100

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#20

So beautiful minu

I don't have words to explain how good it was... Just perfect

The love and passion was so intense... You made my day with this dear... The love they have for each other is for eternity... The passion they share is just for each other...

Like sameer said "Because you don't meet someone everyday who can embrace your madness.' such a meaningful line.

"I will make you live for me,today and years after.''... This was so wonderful... Even if all other reasons for her to live are over, there's still one reason for her to live and that's him.

"I love you when you are good,when you are bad and even more when you are beautifully messy.Not a word more.''

... This line implies the love he has for him... He'll love her the way she is.

You made my day dear... Lovely