Sameer-Naina OS:Love Is Not Easy - Page 5

Originally posted by: suadvani

Love this!!!

Thank you😳

Originally posted by: Anjali33

Awesome OS

Naina's excuse to reject d rishta😆 writer dimag u see

Nanaji kyu mar rhe h yaar😭

Thank you Anjali😃 Haan writer hai to creativity bhi rahegi na.😉😆

Originally posted by: moumita04

Minu - Hugs to you for this... 🤗

How do you do this? How do you write so eloquently and retain the charm of the story at the same time? Take a bow! 👏👏

Your words from beginning to end not only unfolds each scene you describe but also the emotions felt by the character... Be it something as trivial as Taiji's frustration or as profound as Sameer's pain... You truly don't need paragraphs to convey emotions, your one line is enough...

I lost my heart to this story when you described their phone conversation and Naina's feeling - "His voice falls into my ears and they are no more words... they turn into rhythms of a melody."

This happens - yes, this happens... just hearing the voice of your love is enough... words don't matter... distance doesn't matter... it doesn't matter if he is whispering sweet nothings or out-rightly scolding... all it matters is listening to his voice... and the heart soars on wings of love to take a flight in the color soaked sky leaving behind a smile so bright that it gives us a glimpse of heaven even in the pain of intense longing...

I loved this OS... ❤️ Thank you so much for the PM. Please keep writing more...

Thanks Mou for the detailed feedback and appreciation 😃 Hugs to you for loving my works so much 🤗 Less is More is one part of writing and I just tried experimenting.Was skeptical because sometimes in first person narrative the narrator's voice and emotions shadows others.Glad that every emotion intended could strike the right chord...And yes the voice of love is just a healer in itself.The sweet nothings are simply the lyrics of that song of beloved. Loved the ending lines.😃 Thank you for the encouragement.❤️

Originally posted by: Ishika36

Well written

Really pyaar hona jitna asaan hai utna hi mushkil usse nibhana hai

Thank you dear Ishika 😃

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Beautiful..

Thank you 😳

Originally posted by: msdfan

It was an amazing OS Minu.. 👏

Beautiful piece of writing.. Loved it..

Thanks for the PM.. 😊

Thank you dear Sona for the appreciation😃

Originally posted by: smiley_lizi

Such an emotional Os.

Made me teary.

It had its soithing charm also.

Loved reading it.

Thank you Laizu for the appreciation and glad you loved it so much.😳

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

It was very beautifully penned down Minu...You very nicely managed to bring out the pranky side of Naina which she utilises for her love...so that the guys reject her again and again😉😆

Sameer asking her strictly to avoid fasting is so natural... it shows his concern for her health😊

The return gift was a great idea...and could feel how he still misses his Nanu😳

Thanks for the pm and sorry for being late😳

Thank you dear Manisha for the appreciation 😃 Prankster Naina awakened all for her love.😆

Wow Minu..

Originally posted by: Azraa01

Absolutely Beautifully written

Thank you dear 😃