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Posted: 7 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: durgeshwari

Thanks for all the love. really appreciate it.

I'm utilizing my leave to the best... Ha ha

Chapter 4

After this incident Naina retreated into her shell.
Sameer was jolted out of his illusionary existence and realized what a blunder he had done.
He tried and how...
He went to meet her in mandir but to no avail
He called her on landline but no avail
He tried talking to her in class but no avail

She was so indifferent that it killed him... This was the second rejection after his mom...

If he went for help she helped him.. else she ignored him...

After 10 weeks...
Science teacher had made groups for science projects.
Munna Naina and Sameer landed in the same group.
Sameer had viral.
Running nose, fever ,choked throat...
All three decided that they will meet tomorrow at school for the project.

When Munna and Naina arrived they found Sameer had not turned up.
Both sipaahis called sameer's house and spoke to his mom who requested if they could come as he was not well. Though he had brought all the required stuff yesterday from the market.
Naina offered to complete the project if Munna can just drop all the project related stuff to her house. She was reluctant to goto his house.
Munna said Sameer had changed and wouldn't like to freeload. So let's got his house maybe he is unwell.

They reached sameer's house. Munna being Munna ran straight to his room where Sameer was sleeping. Naina who was new to the house followed Munna.
She found him sleeping.
Peacefully like a child.
Red nose, swollen eyes, wearing a cap, hair all ruffled, so peaceful without any malice...
She tried ignoring the sweater he was wearing which she gifted as it brought many painful memories...

Munna jumped to the bed and said Sameer uth Bhai
How are you?
Sameer got up rubbing his eyes... He had lost his voice and very silently asked Munna where is Naina.. we had to meet for the project na.
Naina said hi Sameer I'll wait outside hope you are feeling well.
Sameer noded
Once Naina left munna said
Bhai sweater
Sameer smiled and said Bhai what to do it's all I hav left now
Munna said don't worry things take time.

Sameer joined Naina and Munna in the sun...
Sameer was sneezing profusely and his vice was gone.
He had dry cough and coughed like an old man...

Naina was silent but couldn't take it anymore she finally asked Sameer have you taken medicine?you should have your breakfast and take medicine...

Sameer felt like he was whacked by 1000 cow tails...

Naina had initiated a conversation and spoken directly to him...
Omg...
Finally
His prayers are answered...
One day she will forgive him and start loving him again...
He looked at her as if she had spoken in Japanese
His mouth was open...

Munna said Bhai kuchh khaaya? Dawai li? Naina asking in Hindi.
He said no.

Then suddenly she saw his mom and father all decked up leaving the house with the servant. Her mom called out and said Sameer take care.
Sameer smirked.

Naina's protective instinct took over her. She asked if there was someone who could make him.some food. Sameer said no he will manage.
He could see her get uncomfortable with his mother leaving him unwell.
Hmm hmm...
Within the darkness there is still hope...
He looked at her getting uncomfortable...

He knew she was hurt, she was gaurded so that he couldn't hurt her anymore..it was a defense mechanism.

But the love still remained.

His heart was jumping but he knew the criticality of the moment and remained still.

Finally she said Sameer you should have breakfast and medicine. In case there is none in the house I can fix you breakfast then you can have your medicine.

Munna said Sameer I forgot to bring your medicine. I will rush and get it from the market. Sameer noded though he had full stock of medicine in his room.

Naina and Sameer went to the kitchen. Sameer's heart was thumping like crazy. He wanted to hug her apologize and kiss her. Weeks of no correspondence had driven him crazy. This was the girl who loved him like crazy. Whose sweet talks changed him... Kaada...
Kaada...

Sameer you should have kaada it will clear your sinuses and give relief to your throat...
Have you tried it before?
Sameer was brought to his senses... Yes yes we have kaada for breakfast everyday. You make I will have it's very tasty...

Naina smiled and asked him to bring various ingredients and she put them in boiling water.
She understood Sameer seldom came to kitchen... But she enjoyed this exchange.

Now kaada was ready and she asked for "pakad"...
Sameer didn't know what to do and he held naina's waist thinking Naina is asking him to pakad her...

She was asking for chimta or tong to pour the vessel...

Naina again threw him daggers when he came close and held her waist.

What are you doing Sameer?
Naina you only said "pakad"

Oho I meant chimta Sameer not to hold me...

Sorry Naina I apologize high fever is getting to me... I would not want to do anything to make you uncomfortable...

She asked him to drink the kaada and she would make him parantha so that he could eat his medicine.

Sameer took the first sip and said yeh Kya Hai... Naina said you should know better you have this for breakfast...
Sameer smiled and tried to drink it... Naina said Sameer drink it I will put butter in parantha to make it tasty

Sameer sighed and finished the kaada...
She made two paranthas for him... He took the plate and ate in the sun... By that time Munna had also come... Sameer looked so happy and Munna knew the reason...

Sameer had his lunch had medicine and they had a discussion on the project for two hours.

Munna offered let's take a break and watch a movie. Naina was reluctant and Sameer agreed. All three sat in Sameers room and watched a movie on vcr.

Sameer only looked at naina's face and smiled peacefully and slept.
Munna and Naina switched off the vcr and left.



Imagining her cooking and caring for him creates a very soothing and hopeful feeling. Like they will emerge stronger and closer after the break-up.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
Chapter 5
Phone rang in the evening.

Again the sweet two rings. Naina was engulfed by the painful memories.

She went to pick it up to give Sameer a piece of mind.

"Naina"
Omg... His condition had worsened.

"What happened Sameer you sound so unwell? Did you have medicine?"

"Naina sorry for calling you at your house. Can you please explain to chottu how kaada is made.
I got relief in the morning."

"Ok Sameer. Also I will explain how choori is made. It's roti and ghee. Soothes the throat."

"Ok thanks . I'll give the phone to chottu."

Chottu knew how both the recepies were made. Sameer insisted he comes on call and keep this strictly to himself.

Naina explained the process to chottu.
Chottu listened and said "thanks Naina bhabhi".

Silence at naina's end
Silence at sameer's end

Sameer felt Naina will jump through the phone and hit him.
Naina ignored and asked Sameer how much is the fever.
He said it's 100.

Now silence...
Naina said take care Sameer and rest well..
Thanks Naina...

Silence
Silence

Naina
Ya Sameer

What else should I have?
Naina smiled...

She knew he was alone and wanted to speak to someone to feel better.munna had told her since their phone calls ended he would cry to sleep or sleep wearing walkman.
Then the bet and the slow claps memories came back haunting her...
What if he wants to hurt me again...
What if I get hurt again...
Sameer will walk off unscathed...
No Naina no...

Take rest,soups, kaada and
Choori Sameer...
Goodnight...
Feel better...


Naina was sleeping when she heard a thump in the balcony. She was alone today as Chachi and Preeti had gone to her grandmother's house.
Naina ignored and closed her eyes. Suddenly a cat started crying at the top of her voice. A cat with bad throat infection...

Oh no...
Then someone coughed...
Oh no...

She rushed to the balcony and pulled him to the room...

His hands were bruised as he had a bad fall from the wall to the balcony...

Sameer what is this...

Naina...

Chottu didn't make the kaada well... As you can see my throat is still bad ...

Why have you come here?how will you go back?

Through the balcony...

Naina touched his forehead and found he still had fever.
He was burning infact...

Sameer how much fever you have?

Don't know ... I wanted to meet you Naina... I miss you... Our talks... Our calls... Don't close down on me but I love you... He had tears in his eyes...

Naina looked at him... He was burning with fever and she couldn't ask him.to leave. He was behaving like a stubborn child and she was melting.first she had to get the fever down.

She hit her head with her hand...

Sameer you will get me thrown out of the house...you are burning with fever and you have jumped the wall to come here... We don't know how you will go back... I don't know what to do with you...

She took.out a handkerchief got a bowl of cold water from the washroom

Naina you want to do my facial?

Sameer lie down

Naina I am not that type of boy

Sameer...


He lied down and she put cold water handkerchiefs on his head

She got a thermometer And the fever was 103

She gave him.medicine and continued putting cold water strips on his head...

Sameer closed his eyes... He was home... Home was her... He felt so relaxed and peaceful...
He looked at her angry face and smiled... You know when you reach your destination and he was home...

Naina kept putting cold water hanky in his forehead for hours to bring the fever down...

Finally Sameer slept... After few hours Naina couldn't.keep.her eyes open and slept on the edge of the bed...

Sameer woke up and found her lying on the edge of the bed...
How cute she looks when she's not firing these daggers at me these days...

He touched her cheek and pulled a strand of hair from her cheek... He kept a hand on her face and said Naina I will never ever hurt you... With that he lifted her hand and kissed it and went to the balcony...

He came back.to his room and dozed.off...
He needed Naina back.in his life...

Omg...

Ok now I am really tired and will doze off...

Again thanks for all the love ...









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Posted: 7 years ago
#13
Read all the parts in one and it is superb 😳
beautifully penned chapters dear
I can't wait to read the next part.. update asap
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: .Khamosh.

Read all the parts in one and it is superb 😳
beautifully penned chapters dear
I can't wait to read the next part.. update asap



Wow that's great... Thanks for the kind words..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 4 & 5 were superb
Sameer's mom was careless as always
Munna is so understanding..he left them alone
Pakad🤣
Naina caring for Sameer.. putting cold water strips on his forehead😳
He was home indeed😃

Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Anjali33

Part 4 & 5 were superb

Sameer's mom was careless as always
Munna is so understanding..he left them alone
Pakad🤣
Naina caring for Sameer.. putting cold water strips on his forehead😳
He was home indeed😃

Update soon



Thanks Anjali
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Posted: 7 years ago
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OMG..m crying..It was sooo ggooddd...god,,,
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: VeebafanSonam

OMG..m crying..It was sooo ggooddd...god,,,


Thanks so much
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Posted: 7 years ago
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this is really beautifully penned dear...especially in last 2 parts ...ur narration was so good.it was like, i m watching those scene in my mind...
plz update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh god!!! I was looking for something like this for so longgg!!!! Thank you for writing this!!! And please Continue soon!

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