YUDKBH FF- First part updated

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Everyone,

I came up with my first ever YUDKBH story..

I wish aap sabko pasand aaye

My story will cover Saina, preedit and Swamun All J

PArt 1:

My story starts after Bet and From Sameer's Birthday Party

M: Yaar Sameer tujhe kya lagta hai wo padhaku, behenji, maniben naina tere birthday Party me aayegi

P: ha yaar Sameer. Bet to tumne lagali par kya u use pura kar payega. Yaar bina balo ke tu kaisa lagega. Me to soch bhi sakta

S: Arey chup karo tum log. Mera Naam Sameer hai. Bet to jeetke dikhaunga. Naina mere birthday Party me aayegi bhi aur mere sath cake bhi kategi. Dekh lena. (he Smirked)

And they all smiled.

Here at Naina's home.

N: kaise jau Sameer ke bday party me. Usne kitne pyar se mujhe bulaya hai and upar se ye bhi bola hai mere bina cake nahi katega. Hey bhagwan ab me kya karu. Agar me nahi ja payi to...nahi nahi. Mujhe kuch karna padega.

Then she was preeti entering in their room.

Preeti: Arey naina tune ab tak kapde change nahi kiye. Taiji dekhegi na to maar padegi. Jabse school se ayi ho tab se kuch soch rahi ho. Kya hua batayegi.

Naina thought preeti can help her in this as she knows how smart is preeti in all this.

She said: Preeti sun na mujhe tumhari ek help chahiye thi. Dekh mana mat karna..pls

Preeti: arey me q mana karungi.bol na. kya hua

N: wo actually...kya hai na...mujhe na...wo na...tu bhi...(Naina started blabbering)

Preeti: arey ye kya badbad kar rahi hai me tu wo..ha. thik se bola na kya hua

N: wo na Sameer ka birthday hai aur usne mujhe bulaya hai. Mujhe bhi jana hai. Par pata nahi ghar pe kya bolu. Tu pls kuch kar na. tub hi chal na mere sath. (naina said everything in just a breath)

Preeti was shocked and terrified.

Preeti: Naina, kya..birthday party..wo bhi ek ladke ki..wo bhi hum dono..pagal ho gayi hai kya. Gharwale bilkul nahi jane denge.

N: Arey isliye to teri help mang rahi hu. Pls kuch kar na

Preeti: waise naina tu kab se in sab bato me interest lene lag gayi..ha

N: Arey mera matlab hai ki Sameer mere sath ek hi class me hai. Aur class ke sab log ane wale hai.aur usne mujhe bhi invite kiya hai. Agar nahi gayi to accha nahi lagega. Sabko chidane ka ek aur mauka mil jayega. Pls preeti kuch soch na. tu bhi ayegi to mujhe accha lagega aur company bhi mil jayegi mujhe. Pls kuch kar na

Preeti: accha thik hai me kuch sochti hu. Waise mujhe bhi ye parties bahot acchi lagti hai.

Naina hugged her and said thank you preeti.

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Next part will come soon..

Thanks for reading J TOMATOES ARE WELCOME😆

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braveheartdoc thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sure please go ahead...eagerly awaiting your write up...😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Jaldi krna plzz
I'm excited for it😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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cute start to the story...Preeti going with Naina to the party...ab to party mein dhamaal hone wala hai...waiting for preedit...unki convo would be great😛
One suggestion: can you give a name to your story and also please change it to FF...as OS is a one shot...thanks for writing dear😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

cute start to the story...Preeti going with Naina to the party...ab to party mein dhamaal hone wala hai...waiting for preedit...unki convo would be great😛

One suggestion: can you give a name to your story and also please change it to FF...as OS is a one shot...thanks for writing dear😊


Hey thanks...it's my first attempt...
Even I m thinking the name of my story...will update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's amazinggg
Preeti going to d party, ab majja ayega
PreeDit gonna rock d party😆
I'm waiting for SaIna scenes in d party..n hopefully ManTi too
Update soon n if possible PM me
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjali33

It's amazinggg

Preeti going to d party, ab majja ayega
PreeDit gonna rock d party😆
I'm waiting for SaIna scenes in d party..n hopefully ManTi too
Update soon n if possible PM me


as i said earlier my story will have all the 3 couples except shefjun...

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