Naya Pyaar..Naya Intezaar..Samaina FF

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Naya Pyaar...Naya Intezaar
Hello everyone present in this YUDKBH forum..Today I'm going to tell you a story making up in my mind.Yeh In dinon ki baat hai..Also our Naina is not motherless..
Disclaimer:This story is not pure fiction..it is reality...
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Character Description
Naina:A flamboyant , cheeky ,She is self absorbed on her pains but easy going with her friends..Struggling with her 1st breakup
Sameer:Studious,Not interested in love at all,wears a big spectacles which are larger than his face..Clean shaved face..Neatly combed hair(not wavy type)
Flashback: Naina's Home
"Promise us you will never again fall in love it is a greater sin to fall in love..In our family you're the only one did this..Shame on you..You soiled our dignity and our pride..You''re a blot in our family's reputation told Naina's mother..
Scene 1:College Classroom
After Naina's name came Sameer's name in roll no register as after Naina there was no one whose name started with O-R...Teacher called out loudly "Naina Sameer...Sumeet...Sameer's friends teased him "Oh ho Naina Sameer...But one way or another he likes being linked with her..He remembered their interactions
It is her 1st day in college..She was trying to forget happenings that is tormenting her for past 3 months...She entered room silently ..She thought "I should shed these worries and Should start afresh..She maintained to create a 3 closer friends..Swathi,Pritha,Bhavya..They always Sat together ,ate together,bunked together..The 4 girls were introvert towards the boys... for Naina it was not because of introvert but she had promised her mother that she will never fall in love...They were the beautiful backbenchers that every guy in the class fighted for sitting in boys side backbench
Sameer always noticed the chirpy Naina..She was so cute...He thought..But he never bothered her..As for him Greek algebra mattered more..He always Sat on 1st bench...He oiled his hair very much..A pure Geek

"Laksmi,Lucy,Naina,Sameer " you all are in same group for doing the lab..Naina was busy talking to her friends she never minded the things happening in class...No guys was attracted to Naina as she cared less for the guys looking her ..But all the guys was jealous of Sameer as he was the only guy who is in a group where there is only one guy.. In lab he always ignored Naina..Also she always called Sameer broii..He never ever tried to listen to her..Their 1st semester was over...
Nothing happened between these two..Sameer was busy with his studies and Naina busy with her friends and studies...
2nd semester has begun ...Now Naina has become conscious about her beauty and started to take care of it..Now boys last bench become crowded...Every boy in the class staring at her..Even Sameer...
Their 1st lab in the 2nd sem...Now he started to like Naina's presence..He Sat near her for the 1st time.For the 1st time he scanned her thoroughly...She is not just cute..She is hot too..he thought..Her nosering started to bother him..Whenever she smiles that nose ring gave an extra prettiness to her pink tinted cheek and nose..For the 1st time he felt irresistible...Her tiny mole down her lips became his favourite spot to stare..With this thought he circled her chair for 1st time..Like to show his fellow classmates that she is his possession...
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Roses and rotten tomatoes are welcome...My first attempt as a writer..😉



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DevVarunChandni thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you for your comment..Keep reading this
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice start...liked the different ambience you chose for your fiction 😊
Keep it up 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Nice start...liked the different ambience you chose for your fiction 😊

Keep it up 😃

A real life story..:) you know what I mean..Thank you for your feedback...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 2
He felt a spark for the 1st time..Now he can hear his heart is beating like a song...
Pehla Nasha Pehla Khumar Naya Pyaar hai Naya Intezaar Kar loon Main Kya apna haal ae dil hai bekarar mere dil hai bekarar tu hi Bata...
They sat together...Her legs was touching his...At first he jerked his leg away but after 1 second his leg glued into hers...
Choo kar gayi Teri choovan Behka Hua main yahan Mehaka hain mann
She was in her imaginary world with her lost love..
Lag Ja Gale Ke phir hasi raat ho na hoo Shayad phir se janam main mulakaanth ho na ho
1 year ago:
She was sitting with her laptop and was checking her fb account suddenly a friend request came..
Rohit Aggarwal
She checked his profile..He was 4 year senior to her..Alumni of her school...Batchmate of her friend's brother...She accepted it..She was sure that he was "Every girls dreamboy..
tringgg
Bell rang...She woke up from her dream world ..For the 1st time he hated the bell..In all these days he hated lab..Now he started to love this lab..It is the only place he can interact with her..He can feel her..With heavy heart he went to his hostel room..
Chalte Chalte yuhi ruk jaatha hoon main baithe baithe kahi kho jaatha hoon main kehthe kehthe hi chup ho jaatha hoon main ..
KYA YAHI PYAAR HAI??
Their new class room for the 2nd sem was an untidy one..No proper seating,love birds of the class Sat together this was irking teachers..But they were busy teaching and ignored these. Next day for the 1st time in his lifetime he sat on last bench..
Thank you all for your valuable comments. Sorry for the typing errors..
Hope you all liked this part..







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Posted: 7 years ago
#6

Originally posted by: Anjali33

Superb..totally different one

Originally posted by: NIDA.ISHRAFAN


Thank you...Tell me if there is any problem regarding the writing style..
Edited by DevVarunChandni - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Short and cute update...I liked it...please try to keep it longer next time 😊

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