Sameer Naina OS series: Elements of Nature; Fifth OS; Space...pg 17

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Sona../PJ

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Posted: 7 years ago

#131

Brilliant OS series.. 👏

Loved it..

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Sweetylina

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Posted: 7 years ago

#132

Five elements to decide our being in this finite life.

Five elements which create us in flesh,blood and psyche and controls all our internal and external activities...above all control our being and existence.

Have been your follower since beginning.

Amazingly set settings and connections.

Have not been able to reply due to time constraints.

This is one of the different style of series.. all elements and all emotions bundled up together.

Totally loved it.

Last update was the most emotional one.And the favourite in this OS series.

Do come up with some thing like this.

Keep writing.

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Sweety.

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 7 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: Anjali33
Such a fantastic OS Manisha
Your way of correlating these elements of nature with SamAina is justso brilliant
Entire OS series was a splendid one👏

Thanks Anjali... I'm happy that I could complete the series and also that it was liked by everyone 😃

Means a lot to me really😃

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 7 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: Vampire2468
Fantastic OS Manisha 👏Loved it a lottt ❤️I am loving the way u are correlating the elements of nature with our lovely couple SaIna From all ur elements of nature I loved this one- Space the most 😳Want more from u

Thank you so much Mansi 😃

This element was the toughest out of all... really had a tough time conceptualizing this one... im glad that you found this the best out of all😃

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Phoenix

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Posted: 7 years ago

#135

Binge read all... Loved every part ❤️

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Laizu Khan

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Posted: 7 years ago

#136

Wow, what an amazing idea of OS.⭐️
Soul connection concept is awesome. 👍🏼
And how brilliantly you correlated all of them together with Samaina. 👏
Loved reading it Manisha. 😛

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Bhavit Kapoor

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Posted: 7 years ago

#137

Believe you can, and you are halfway there cos patience is the key to success n you can achieve it with your confidence.. !

-- by me n other sources.. 😛

A pleasant update Manisha.. loved it to the core dear..⭐️👏

The last letter.. the phrase itself was killing but the flashback made it clear.. that yes picture abhi baaki hai.. 😳😃

Sky is the limit they say.. n it has its own qualities of.. being mysterious., formless, boundless,, infinite,, beyond the mind n the soul,, n incomprehensible to the ordinary intellect.. !

The talk to the moon by the either side.. the messages sent n taken.. the belief n confidence they both attired with.. ! Loved how they feel for each other,, without even meeting cos they promised.. to each other n the World. !

The arguments,, the insults,, the fights,, resulted in the separation of the two love birds.. leaving them talking to each other via vibrations,, thru the very fact that their love still exist.. n somewhere inside them both they knew it.. ! Well explained n themed the story.. ! ⭐️

i felt for Naina not tying rakhi to her bro.. its not easy for any sister.. but when things get worsened.. they not only spoil the relation,, but with a lifelong mark left.. !

This was the worst outcome..

The way she spoke at the stage.. giving all the credit to Sam n accusing others including the one sitting there.. it clearly implied that how far she has gone from her bro.. n he is willing to get her sis back .. but all in vain till now. ..

The way Sam bumped in to Naina.. the repeat of the first meeting.. the first touch of the hearts.. n the first heartbeat that belonged to each other that time.. it again happened.. n today has happened for the best to the rest of their life.. cos now with full determination they have met n have decided to live with each other a loving life..

The heavens have helped them to meet.. without any bounds now,, n forever.. cos they have learnt the real love.. n that only they can revive n possess it.. n they shall be doing it.. !

The faith,, faith in their love made them meet again.. n what a symbolic element yet once again Manisha.. applauds dear.. ⭐️⭐️

Thank you so much for the beauty of the five elements you have presented to us.. n making me a part of it.. I cant even think of any way to thank you more dear.. God bless you..

May you keep going the flow.. n give us more n more good topics n themes to rejuvenate our mind n body n soul.. every time.. !

Thanks dear.. tonnes of them.. !!! 👏

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swatisinh2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#138

Nice collection by u all

Loved to read

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 7 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: Muggle_Diaries
Finally was able to read all of them. 😃
It was well written. I loved reading it. 👏
Keep writing more.

Fire can burn everything in its wake, but also purify. Sameer's anger, his fire was a destructive force. The love of Naina tempered that fire into passion. When fire becomes passion it becomes creative, instead of destructive.

Water is deceptive. It looks calm on the outside. But it has a depth which can shock people. Naina's care created a ripple affect in Sameer and Vishakha's life, their stagnant relationship suddenly started flowing into a river.

Earth is stable, but yet it can betray you anytime, the tectonic plates can just pull the ground from under your feet. The support Naina and Sameer has for each other is as stable as earth.

Wind is 'Chanchal'. Can also bring chaos. Naina and Sameer's life turned chaotic when they met each other. Nothing remained same. Just like wind, their relationship changed directions at every juncture.

Naina's and Sameer's is connected through their souls. No distance can keep them apart.

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Kshithi

Thanks a lot kshithi for taking out time to read all of them...I'm so glad that you liked them all😃

This series has been very close to my heart... i'm happy that it was liked by so many people😃

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 7 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
Yeh Kiski Hai Aawaz Jisko
Na Sun Ke Bhi Main Sun Raha Hoon
Kaisi Ye Aahtein Aa Rahi Hain
Kaise Ye Khwab Dikhla Rahi Hain
Mere Dil Bata Kaun Hai Aa Raha
Kyon Hawa Aaj Yun Ga Rahi Hai...
This song flashed through my mind while reading this.Loved the setting and the progression.
Nothing can hurt and make a soul bleed than a forceful and painful separation.Farewells are always tear jerking but a separation without a proper farewell is heart wrenching.
Arjun and Rakesh deserve the punishment.Somani and his solutions.Mohammed bin Tughlaq would have been very happy to see his successor--The strategist Somani.🤔
Our side characters or so called extras are always there as important pillars to strengthen the two broken souls.
Moon light though has many symbolisms,one of the symbolism is that ''Moon light is a wounded healer.''Hence it has to be the moon who can heal the separated and aching souls.
Loved the connection to sky and being.Beautifully conceptualised and you excelled.👏👏

On a side note,loved to know Naina pursuing English Literature.😃 Naina to meri dost nikli.😆😆

Waiting for more of your works.
With love-
Minu😳

So true... seperation without a proper meeting leaves us in a state of anxiety... so i tried to present the situation where atleast he left a letter for her... Arjun Rakesh ka punishment should be worse than this😡

I myself agree to what you wrote about the moon...its such a pleasant feeling to look at the moon when you are going through the worst of the emotional times😊

Thanks a lot for the appreciation😃

regarding literature...tumhe mind mein rakh ke hi likha tha😛😉

Bless you Minu😃