Sameer Naina OS series: Elements of Nature; Fifth OS; Space...pg 17

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Anmol

@Anmol333

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Posted: 7 years ago

#101

Awesome os 👏

I love the way you correlate things with elements...

Very well penned down...

Loved it.

Thanks for pm.

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Samaina_1990

@Samaina_1990

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Posted: 7 years ago

#102

Wonderful as usual Manisha...I'm a fan of the hero heroine ko dekhta reh gaya scenes...😆 Meri dil ki khawayish thi ki Naina saree me aaye n Sameer dekhta reh jaaye...I wanted to write this in my story too...but somehow circumstances did not favour the saree..😆 But you incorporated it really well...Sameer learnt a lesson not to judge someone by their looks only...well very written with a really important message. 👏🤗

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Rashupuru

@Rashupuru

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Posted: 7 years ago

#103

Good one! Nice to see an alternate to what happened on the show... Read the first post... Now Gonna read on! All the best with writing :-)

Edited by Rashupuru - 7 years ago

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misha.as

@misha.as

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Posted: 7 years ago

#104

Very nice and beautiful part Di...
very well written..
Naina in saree... Beautiful...
A good lesson to Sameer...

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

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Posted: 7 years ago

#105

Beautiful OS as always Manisha 😳
Brilliantly penned down
Update the next one soon
Thanks for the PM

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Bhavit Kapoor

@bawaswift

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Posted: 7 years ago

#106

Lovely n very very beautiful OS... ⭐️👏

Loved the OS n its element of Air being told by you Manisha... !

I myself felt how the boys said about Naina's look n never wonder how good she is at studies n why she is always chosen for the competes n for the stage performances.. ! The real thing that matters is the attitude towards life n its implement by a person.. !

The qualities of Air are.. Strong ideas,, clarity,, understanding,, truth,, being advanced in nature,, adventurous,, fresh,, powerful., etc...

The power of the mind that Naina used .. it helped her winning thru her appearance of brilliance n intelligence.. !

Communication of strong ideas n truth.. it helped her giving the World n Sameer an outlook that every one can look different ,, but the mind n the clarity matters.. n that made Sameer feel ashamed.. !

She is so advanced in her nature n being.. that little things do matter her.. but she has the potential to make him see what fresh n true things are.. ! The understanding of her own merits are important.. not her look.. !

Air moves us.. ! It moved Sameer... its going to help him realising what real Naina is.. !

What a symbolic thread it is.. 👏👏

Pari.. you have shown a real heart of a girl ,, who lives in air.. inhales n exhale it.. n knows where to mark the difference n dont get choked.. !

Loved how you have analyse the mind n heart of Naina.. n she changing the mind n attitude of Sameer.. with the help of her looks n knowledge.. !

Simply Awesome you are.. ! Going great dear.. keep writing n posting.. Its a delight to read you every time.. !

Thanks dear n God bless.. !

Sorry for the late.. 😳

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Swati Kapoor

@Swatishubh

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Posted: 7 years ago

#107

What you choose, is what you will have, what you allow is what will continue!

What a beautiful and a loving story you have planned for the element of Air 👏

Astounding and wondrous it is Manisha ❤️ 🤗

Well correlated the incident and well portrayed the characters! Loved how you have shown Air as the quality to freshen the mind and realising the done!

What Sameer and his friends said and Naina overheard was not only necessary but the only way to make someone realise where he went wrong. Loved the idea of her going to Shefali and the result - it was boldly awesome!

As air blows, she also left her fear behind, got some fresh air and start the things she wanted to! As air nourishes everything around us, it gave strength to Naina to show them what she is and can be, but that's not the real thing that matters. The things that matters are mind and soul and their beauties - other beauties are perishable and can't stay forever. What stays is the pure mind, good behaviour and attitude.

Air tells us to keep flying higher and make the lower levels staying up and stay calm. And this is what she made him feel and realised and today he has realised where he was wrong and he asked for her forgiveness.

Very thoughtful and meaningful OS dear ⭐️ Loved it to the core and loved writing about it too!

Thanks for the love and affection you always give to your stories and keep your efforts alive 👏

Luv ya ❤️ 🤗

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 7 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
Dear darling Manisha!
Hope you are fine now.Take best care of yourself.😊 Sending hugs from here.🤗
Now coming to update-
You know it already why I am always in awe of this series.Its not One shots to be typed and written away; its the tedious work of conceptualising the symbolism of elements and then writing out a single episode drawing parallels to the symbolism and basic human character in possible setting.Have loved this idea from beginning and still love how you marvellously you have stuck with the basic theme.👏👏

Air as an element has always been a powerful teacher and divination tool.Its the first thing that makes a mound of flesh spring into life and make the first cry of a new born baby.Such an important element.And loved how you attributed to his airy attitude.Judging from external appearances.Air outside is wind which is temporary.which provides no solace.Its the air that filters inside which sustains life.
Likewise the external appearances fade away and what remains is the internal beauty.And air is perhaps one such element out of all five which reaches mind,wisdom,spirit and soul.Air is that unique energy/element that works well even with two opposite elements like fire and water and it can also become an intermediary between the two.
Air teaches that there is much more to world than we can see and that we must adapt,grow and change as the world does.😳
Naina is the perfect air which he breathes in.😳

And thank you for that dedication.Glad to be part of this awesome series.😃

With love-
Minu.❤️

Thanks a lot Minu...yes air although being invisible...still it is so much important for all of us and no life can survive without that...but when it takes its disastrous form...it has the capabilityto destroy everything coming its way. But here I used the quality of air to take away things with it...like it took away his misconception about only the external beauty without actually knowing about the internal beauty. Glad that you liked my idea and hope you like the upcoming last one as well...😃

Thanks a tonne😃

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

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Posted: 7 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: Anjali33
Superb OS
Naina in saree😳
Very nicely you've related it to air

Thanks a lot Anjali...since the time I saw her in a saree i was planning to incorporate this into my OS... Glad that you liked this concept😃🤗

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braveheartdoc

@braveheartdoc

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Posted: 7 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: Vampire2468
Superbbb OS 🤗I am really liking the way u are correlating the nature in ur OS n explaining it's usefulness in life n in our lead couple's life too I loved how u choose air to express it ❤️Keep it up 👍🏼Update ASAP

Thanks a lot Mansi... actually all the elements play an important role in our life... im so happy that this concept has been liked by you all...will soon be updating...God bless you😃

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