ISHRA FF- KYA PYAAR KAAFI HAI? Part 16 updated on 26/07

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Posted: 7 years ago
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A story about Ishita and Raman, how they fell in love having different lifestyle and culture.
After marriage, Will they thought "KYA PYAAR KAAFI HAI?"

INTRODUCTION

RAMAN BHALLA
25 year old belongs to a middle class family. Currently working in Khanna Group of Companies as an Assistant Manager.

Om Prakash Bhalla- Raman's Father
(Retired govt officer)

Toshi Bhalla- Raman's Mother
(A loud Housewife)

Simmi Bhalla- His Sister
(Pursuing B.Ed)

Romi Bhall-His Brother
(Pursuing B.A)

ISHITA IYER
23 year old and a modern(very) girl
She has completed her MBA and currently doing job as an Assistant Recruiter in Khanna Group of Companies but belongs to a rich family and doing job just for time pass.

Vishwanathan Iyer- Her father who runs his own business and spoils Ishita a lot

Madhavi Iyer- Her Mother(housewife) but she is very grounded and rooted

PS- First time trying hand in writing. So kindly encourage by supporting my story

PART 1,2 & 3-page 1

PART 4,5 & 6- page 2

PART 7-page2

PART 8-page 3

PART 9,10&11- page4

PART 12,13-page 5

PART 14&15-page 6


Ps- this story is just for my love for #ishra.. they inspired me to write my first ever story. Also, it would not be based on number of likes on my story😛

Thank you

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Kindly support my first ever story😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice concept dear
Looking forward to it
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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PART 1

In office, Raman and HR manager discussing about a vacant position which should be filled as soon as possible because it is increasing burden on others.
HR manager calls Ishita to involve her in the discussion when Raman first time saw her. She was wearing a white shirt and sea green pencil skirt. Raman was lost in her beauty and suddenly reality hits him that Ishita is greeting him with good morning. He replied to her ever sweetly.
In lunch break, Ishita was sitting with her colleagues and they were discussing about men of their office. A girl(mihika, Ishita best friend works in same office) told them that she likes Raman a lot as he is so hot and muscular. Ishita get anger and told her that she shouldn't think about his senior like this. So, mihika teases Ishita and ask "Does She likes Raman?"
Ishita starts fumbling with her words but Mihika catches her then she told that she likes Raman from her first day of office. Mihika was shocked and asked how???

FLASHBACK
Ishita enters into office and her HR manager greeted her and gave her few instructions about her work. Suddenly, she saw a handsome man entering into office with a smile on his face and coming towards her but shagun blocked his way and afterwards she never got a chance to meet him
(Flashback Ends)

But Today she got a chance to meet him and touch him(Handshake) but controlled her emotions in front of Raman.
Mihika- Then why don't you go and tell that you likes him.
Ishita- Are you mad, I am Ishita Iyer daughter of Vishwanathan Iyer. He has to come and propose me, not me never.
I had seen him today that how he got lost in me and soon he will fall in love with me

Edited by dostvilla - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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PART 2
(Imagine Bhalla house as old Bhalla house which is compact but beautiful.)
At night, Raman was on his bed and dreaming about Ishita with open eyes. He was dreaming her angelic face and then see his own hand and felt her fragrance. Suddenly, Toshi shouted puttar khana kha le tera manpasand palak paneer banaya hai which breaks his chain of thought.
At dinner table, all found Raman suspicious because he was smiling foolishly.
Simmi- kya baat hai bhai, bahut muskura Rahe ho. Kahi hmaari bhaabhi ji ke bare me to ni soch rhe😳
By hearing this, he spit the water and all was shocked and surprised but he composed himself and said Aisa kuch ni hai bas aaj boss ne taarif Kari kaam ki islye khush hu. Just to avoid further embarassment, he finished his food fastly. He wished good night to all and returned to his room.

Senior Bhalla's Room
Mrs. Bhalla-Bhalla ji aj Raman Ko aise muskurate dekh m bahut khush hu. Mera bacha hamesha dusre ke bare me sochne wala aj shayad Apne liye khush hai.
Mr. Bhalla- Aap sahi the rhi hai Toshi ji, Raman bachpan se hi Aisa hai jo phele dusro ka sochta hai aur for khud ka. Aaj bhi use phele Apne bhen bhai ke career ki jayada fikar h Apne se. I m proud of my son.

Iyer House(Imagine a big mansion)
Ishita on dinning table having dinner with her family.
Mr. Iyer- Ishita why don't you join our own business instead of doing this small job. You are born to give orders not to follow them.
Mrs. Iyer- Vishwa ye kya bol the ho but Mr. Iyer makes his wife shut by saying itni mhenat m kiske lye kar rha hu, sirf apni beti ke lye. Mujhe bilkul ni pasand koi mere bete ko order de😡
Ishita- Amma Appa please aap dono ka ye topic Roz ka hai, kuch Naya bhi try karo 😲. And Appa you are right but it's fun to do this job. When I feel that I can't take all this, I will come and accept your offer. Till then I want to just enjoy my life.

ISHITA BEDROOM
After dinner, Ishita thinking how to make Raman fall in love with her. She called Mihika.
Mihika- Ha bol Ishu
Ishita- Raman
Mihika- kya Raman? Aage to bol
Ishita- aage ka tu bta m kya Karu taaki Raman khud Aakar bole "I love U"
Mihika-arey zamana Badal Gaya h kitna, tu jakar bolde ki tu usse pasand Karti h
Ishita- Nooo... I am daughter of Vishwanathan Iyer. He has to come not me.
Mihika- Ishu zidd chod...
Ishita- tu rhene de ma khud socti hu Raman Ko kaise patana hai. For now, BYE kal milte h office me
Mihika- pagal h tu bilkul Ishu. Chal BYE

Suddenly, an idea popped in Ishita's mind and finally she slept.

What will be her idea???

Edited by dostvilla - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congratulations on your first story..
Nice concept...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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congratulations for ur first story
interesting and beautiful
both parts were nice
pls update soon


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Posted: 7 years ago
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PART 3

Next day
In office Ishita wants to have a glimpse of Raman before starting her day and God heard her. He enters with his ever charming smile and greeted everyone. when his eyes met with Ishita and both shared a long eyelock. Meanwhile, Mihika came to Ishita and shake her which broke their trance and both get back to their respective work.
Mihika teases Ishita which makes her blush😳
Mihika- Oye Ishu, koi plan socha Raman Ko patane ka
Ishita- ye Raman kya lga Rakha h, juju hai tumhare. Zara respect se bolo
Mihika- ohooo!! Abhi se itni possessive hai.. Dekh jiju bulwa rhi h to pkka patana padega tujhe
Ishita-tujhe koi shak hai.. Ishita Iyer Ko jo chayen wo bs chayen
Mihika- She got stuck with her words and said wo koi chiz ni hai Ishu
Ishita- she ignored her words and said chod na bas ab aage dekh kya hota.. Raman se m bahut pyaar Karti by aur unhe mujhe aakr bolna hi hoga ki wo mujhe pyaar karte h
After office time ends, all are going to their home. And Ishita knows that Raman is a workaholic who always leave after everyone.
Ishita goes to Raman's cabin for knowing requirements to fill the vacant position. Raman tell her that it's very late, you should go home,we will discuss this tomorrow. But she was adamant so he makes her sitted. She sits in front of Raman, both were nervous. Raman tells her all the details and told her to go home as it's very late now.
Now Ishita starts her plan to make Raman fall for her
She gets up to go but faked that she lost her balance. Before she touch the floor, Raman holds Ishita by her waist and Ishita put her arms around his neck. Both felt spark by touching each other. But, Raman comes out of the trance and ask Ishita
Raman- Are you alright??
Ishita- suddenly realised she had to fake injury. So she starts crying. Ahhh... Ahhh.. Sir bahut Dard ho rha hai
Raman- he got tensed and asked her to walk towards couch
Ishita- Sir I can't walk and starts her fake crying again
Raman- not able to see her like this. Take her in his arms and put her on couch
Ishita- smiles seeing his concern and got lost in him
Raman- kaha Dard ho Raha hai
Ishita- takes her hand and put it on her ankel . This passes a current in Raman and Ishita smiles inwardly that soon Raman will propose her.
Raman- comes out of his world and trying to sooth her pain. He ask feeling better?
Ishita- yes much better
Raman- how you will go to home
Ishita- by auto(she had sent his driver back already)
Raman- It's very late. Shall I drop you?
Ishita- got happy and said Thank you Sir
Raman- let's go
Ishita- Sir, I can't walk and spread her hands to give him hint to carry her
Raman- he was on cloud nine and carries her happily.
He again take her in his arms and walk towards exit and make her sitted in his car.
He asks her address and she told him.
To initiate the conversation, Raman asked about her family.
She happily told him about his family which makes Raman shocked.
He ask her why you use auto if your father is a well known big and rich bsinessmannn. This make Ishita tongue tied and fumbling with her words to hide her lie.
Ishita- wo wo ma wo
Raman- kya hua Ishita
Ishita- actually main car se hi aati hu daily, wo aaj mere driver ki tabiyat thik nahi thi to Mene use ghar bhej Dia
Raman- how nice of you
Ishita-she felt relieved that he doesn't catches her lie
To divert his mind, she asks about his family. He happily told her .
He put a break and Ishita realised now she has to go home now
Raman- shall I call Ur family if you are not able to walk
Ishita- No I am much better, I will go by myself.
Raman- with heavy heart.. BYE Take care
Ishita- BYE.. she opens car door to step down. Suddenly she turns back and kiss on Raman's cheek. He got shocked, nervous, blush and what not😆
Ishita- Thank you Sir and blushed with her bold act and got down from the car
Raman- touched his cheek and smile and turn back his wheel to his home.

Both Ishita and Raman were lost in each other's thought and waiting for next morning to meet each other.
Ps- writing is so fun.. so I will continue to write amd will not depend on comment or likes.
We are so much obsessed with ishra that we do read all FF/SS/OS whether we appreciate writer or not.
So my updates are for obsessed fans like me😆


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Posted: 7 years ago
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PART 4
Next Day,
Both reach office on time just to have a glance of each other. Now Ishita wants Raman to express his love as soon as possible. She can't wait more to become his.
Ishita knows Raman also likes her as she can see in his eyes but at the same time she knows he is very shy and he will not say three magical words to her easily. She thought to express her love to him as it doesn't matter who says first. Meanwhile she got a call from his father to know about her evening plans for a dinner date with his family. Ishita said she has no plans and will noin her family at night and hang down.

Raman who is also in Ishita's thought want to know whether she likes him or not. His heart say she likes him otherwise why she will kiss him in the car but he was in delimma as he is a family man type and Ishita is a carefree girl who just want to enjoy her life. Will she understand his duties towards his family??
A knock on his cabin's door breaks his chain of thought and he said come in. With that, Ishita enters into his cabin. She wants to tell him she likes him but will he say the same.
Ishita slowly coming towards Raman and her leg banged with the chair(this time in real). She straightly landed on Raman's lap and he holds her protectively by her waist. Both were lost in each other, when Raman found Ishita's top button got broken and showing her much cleavage.
Raman- Ishita wo wo tumhara wo... Actually tumhari shirt ka button toot Gaya hai, he said ever fastly as he can with his eyes closed.
Ishita- noticed her shirt and instead of covering herself she is lost in Raman's cute face.

She put her one hand on Raman's cheek and kissed him on another cheek. This makes Raman to open his eyes and he also lost in her. Both shared an eyelock after kiss. This kiss ignite Raman's passion towards Ishita. He leans and kiss on her lips, seeing her blush he chewed her lips and makes an entry in her mouth. Both were fighting for dominance and suddenly Raman cabin's door open but they were lost in their first kiss and Shagun saw them kissing each other and got biggest shock of her life. His love is getting intimate with Ishita and she turn to go back and closed the door with a bang. This breaks their trance and Raman makes Ishita stand on her feet. Both were flushed with this intimacy and having mixed emotions.
Raman- Ishita we need to talk privately.. her eyes got popped up. Then realised what he said, I mean a coffee in evening.
Ishita- she said OK
Raman- meet me after office at nearby CCD Amd tumhara button 😉

Ishita- takes a all pin from his table and adjust her shirt

Ishita- after that she left his cabin
Raman- she is so talkative but didn't speak anything other than OK. Does she likes me or not? Does she regret our kiss?
Other Side,
Ishita goes to Mihika and hugs her happily.
Mihika- what happened Ishu.. you are looking so happy. Jiju ne propose Kiya kya??
Ishita- nahi to.. par aaj karwa kar rahugi main
Mihika- Great.. ye bta tere lips Ko kya hua.. kisi machar ne kat Lia kya
Ishita- She blushed and said Ha bahut bade machar ne kaata h.
Mihika- so you mean jiju aur tune.. Hawww.. shaadi se phele
Ishita- Haww..tu toh aise bol rhi h jaise kiss ni suhaagraat mana ki ho Mene tere jiju ke Sath
Mihika- tera Bharosa ni hai..jis speed se tu ja rhi hai na tu wo bhi mana lege jiju ke saath
Ishita- Blushing and said ab kaam karle mujhe tere jiju se Milne Jana hai Shaam Ko
Mihika- ookkk chal lag jate hai ab kaam par

Evening
Mihika- Ishu Best of Luck... Jiju se bulwa Lio aj toh three magical words
Ishita- koi shak. Chal Bye
Mihika- bye

Shagun heard all this and thought Raman toh aise ni the, wo to bahut suljhe hue hai unhe ye Ishita kaise pasand aa gai. Jarur isne Apne in chote chote kapdo ka Jadoo Chalaya hoga. Aakhir Raman haii to ek mard hi.
Mujhe Laga Raman Ko Sidhi sadhi ladki pasand hai islye hamesha suit salwar phene mene par ab ni. Raman Ko bhi Wahi chayen jo Sab Mardo Ko toh main bhi Wahi banugi Apne Raman ke lye.
Ishita you just wait and watch... Raman to mere hi hoge

Edited by dostvilla - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loving the story... Update soon👏

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