#3Song Os Thon : Sang sang yun chalun by akriti154 on pg 137 Mar 29

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Ishrasoul

@ishrasoul

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Posted: 7 years ago

#251

hello friends
This song was suggested by raksha i really hope you will enjoy reading this one shot...
Ishra One Shot: Bawra Mann raah take tarse
As the cool breeze blows and stars shining at the sky aroud the moon as the star twinkle a cute giggle echoes... "puttar tu bhi na poori bachi hai pagal hai koi December ki thand mein aise bahar aata hai an elderly woman comes and wraps the shawl around the girl standing looking at the sky...
"mummy jee I was not sleepy. Girl replied..
" you should have told me na ... tujhe aise akele nahe ana chahiye tha... She worriedly cups her face and caresses her cheek with love...
"I am totally alright she smiles at her...
She holds her hand and says: come let go inside pata nahe tujhe in sitaroon ko dekhne say kiya milta hai...
Her eyes welled up with fresh tears... she wipes her tears before her mummy can notice it... her mood goes off but suddenly a feather touch inside her makes her smile she touches her unborn baby growing inside her thinking about him... After he went away this baby was the sole reason of her happiness... she misses him too much its been four month he is away from her...
Mrs bhalla the mother in law of ishita looks at the dull face of her daughter in law and feels sad that she is all alone when she needed raman most...
Mrs bhalla: puttar raman will come soon...
Ishita smiles to hide her sadness and nods her head in agreement... Toshi jee blesses her and ask her to sleep now and leaves...
Ishita touches her baby and says: I miss your papa so much... apko pata hai mumma raat mein stars ko kiyon dekhti hai...the baby kicks in return...
Ishita chuckles and says: apke papa kahin bhi door hoon per ye asmaan to hum sab ke liye shanjha hai wo jahan bhi hai ye asmaan mera bhi utna hai jitna unka... jab ye sitare chamakte hain to muje pata chal jata hai raman bhi muje dekh rahy hain aur mushkura rahe hain... A lone tear escape from her eyes...
Bawara mann raah taake tarse re Naina bhi malhaar banke barse re
Ishita looks at the picture hanged at the wall she gets up and walks towards the picture she caresses the picture and says: baby you will listen how mumma and papa met...agar hum na milte to hamesha adhoore hi rehty... apke papa kehte hain we are made for each other... agar mein haan na kehti na to tumhare papa wesy hi sarak pay flowers lay kar khare rehty...
Flashback start
Ishita final MBA students waiting at the bus stop ishita curses seeing the whole road jammed she looks at the watch and thinks: what the hell... today is last date of foam submission and this traffic jam... Her chain of thoughts break as the loud whistle echoes around a young troop of army comes out of their car and start removing the jam by making way for the vehicles... ishita smiles looking at the army officers...
one of the army officer looks at the bus stop his eyes stops at the sight of ishita... his heart start beating more fastly... bus comes and ishita went away while the officer smiles madly and ruffles his hairs and says: captain raman kumar bhalla now its time to start report to your would be wife... naam kiya hoga...itni cute hai naam bhi koi cute sa hi hoga...
And from the next day raman start coming towards the same bus stop to get a glimpse of her but couldnot get the courage to go and talk to her he always dreamily looks at ishita and admires her making ishita too notice him...
its been whole one week and ishita was again waiting for bus when raman comes and stand beside her...
Raman: excuse me...
Ishita glares at him...
Raman: see... I am an army officer... my name is Raman kumar bhalla...
Ishita: mein kiya kar sakti hoon why you are telling me...
Raman: see I ... want to ... marry you... because I love you... he said in one go and nervously closes his fist tightly..
Ishita looks at him shocked...
Raman: please say yes...
Ishita: no...
Bus comes... ishita comes and leaves...
Later at night
Ishita opens the window and gets shocked to see raman standing there holding flower... ishtia signs him to leave while raman sign in return I love you...
raman looks at sky star twinkle making raman smiles... Ishita observe raman smiling and couldn't stop herself to smile...
Loud thunder makes ishita scared and soon it start pouring while raman was firmly standing there...
ishita feeling bad seeing raman getting drenched.. she thinks that raman only wants to impress her that's why he is doing this...
Ishita: do ghante khare rahy gay phr chale jain gay.. She thinks and closes the window and lays on bed to catch some sleep. But couldn't sleep .
After four hours it was midnight 2 am she gets up and sees outside the window and gets shocked to see raman still standing there... he sneezes and smiles looking at ishita... grabing the towel and hurriedly makes a hot coffee ishita comes outside and forward it to raman...
Raman: I don't need this ...
Ishita: take this and leave please...
Raman: I am not going to leave without getting your answer...
Ishita: apke khare rahy ne kuch faida nahe hoga...
Raman: agar tum haan nahe karogi to mein hamesha yonhi khara rahonga...
Ishita: kuch bhi... koi kisi kay liye aisa nahe karta...
Raman: har koi aisa nahe karta per mein tumse pyaar karta hoon...
Ishita leaves...
Raman was on mission to get his love... all night passes raman was waiting for ishita while ishita was looking at raman hiding behind the curtain... seeing his love his desperation to go at any level for her makes her believe on his love... she notices one thing whenever the star twinkle on sky raman smiles seeing it...
Morning
Raman still waiting... his wait ends as ishita comes out... raman forward the flower who was now in very bad state... ishita smiles...
Raman: I love you...
Ishita: ishita...
Raman: sorry... He looks questioningly
Ishita: my name is ishita...
Raman: such a beautiful name... to kiya decide kiya??
Ishita: Sunday ko papa free hain apne parents ko lay ayega... she smiles and turn to leave..
Raman: wo to theek hai per mera jawab...
Ishita: love you too... She blushes and runs back to home... raman jumps in happiness...
Flashback ends...
Ishita: bus only one month more then papa will return back to us... he is on mission na... wo jahan post hoye hain wahan mobile kay signal bhi nahe aate.. isiley papa humse baat nahe kar sakty... baby you miss papa na... baby kicks... ishita: but I miss him more...
Aadhe se adhoore se Bin tere hum huve Pheeka lage hai mujhko saara jahaan
Bawara mann raah taake tarse re Naina bhi malhaar banke barse re
Time was passing bhallas were taking good care of ishita but the feeling of raman not being with her was still there... she wants to experience all this with raman but duty comes first... today was the ghodbharai of ishita and ishita was badly missing raman she was very gloomy and lost in thoughts of raman...
Raman sisters were making ishita ready but she was in her own world... Soon ritual start making her more yearn for raman...
Yeh kaisi khushi hai Jo maum si hai Aankhon ke raste hanske pighalne lagi
As all blesses ishita and baby ishita quickly send prayers for raman wellbeing and for his safe return...
Mannat ke dhaage aise hain baandhe Toote na rishta judke tujhse kabhi Toote na rishta judke tujhse kabhi
Getting exhausted ishita rests and closes her eyes... and drifted into dreamland to see raman in her dreams...
Sau balaaye le gaya tu sar se re Naina ye malhaar banke barse re
Soon the time of her delivery nears and there was no sign of raman coming back... raman friend inform bhallas that their duty is extended for three months more... Making ishita more disheartened as she wanted raman to hold their baby first...
Main kagaz ki kashti Tu baarish ka paani Aisa hai tujhse ab ye rishta mera
Tu hai toh main hoon Tu aaye beh loon Aadhi hai duniya meri tere bina Aadhi hai duniya meri tere bina
As the new dawn brings a new light in the world... ishita turns in her sleep but a strong masculine arms wraps around her... sensing his touch ishita immediately opens her eyes and smiles widely seeing raman sleeping beside her... getting emotional due to hormones tears start flowing from her eyes...
Jee uthi sau baar tujhpe marke re Naina ye malhaar banke barse re
She caresses his face and continues to look at him not getting enough of him she hugs him tightly and cuddles more to him... making him smile in sleep... he says: jaan aram se baby hai...
Bawara mann raah taake tarse re Naina ye malhaar banke barse re
Ishita: kab wapis aye...
Raman: jab tum araamse so rahi thi...
Ishita: uthana chahiye tha muje...
Raman: I have no heart to disturb you...
Ishita: I am so happy to have you back all safe and sound... she exclaims...
Raman: muje to tumhare pass ana hi tha... He smiles and takes her in his arms and put one hand on his baby and says: missed you so much...
Ishita: meine bhi bohat miss kiya
Raman: mera champ aur champ ki mumma kaise hain..
Ishita: perfect aur ap bhi agaye ho to we are more than perfect...
Raman hug ishita and says: i cant wait to hold my champ
Ishita: aik minute
Raman: kiya hua
Ishita: apky dost ne kaha tha ap late aogay..
Raman winks at her and says: it was lie mein tumhain surprise dena chahta tha...
Ishita makes a baby face and says: mein kitna sad hogayi thi aise koi karta hai...raman chuckle while the baby kicks to get the attention of her papa and mumma... raman and ishita smiles and engrossed to talk to their baby...
That's it my dear friend... I really hope you all will like it waiting for your lovely comments and response don't forget to hit like also...
Love you
Riddi...

Edited by ishrasoul - 7 years ago

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myangels

@myangels

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Posted: 7 years ago

#252

Nice OS..
Raman fell for Ishita at first sight..
Ishita was reluctant as she can't express her feelings in words..
But Raman loves her unconditionally ...
Both got married with their parents blessings..
And they are leading a happy married life..
Thank you..

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Dilpreet kaur

@cooldilkaur

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#253

Beautiful os di

Loved it

Ty 4 d pm too

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Twinkle Solanki

@Twinklesolanki

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#254

Lovely os

Love how raman proposed ishita

Love ishra romance

Love ishita's talk with baby

Waiting for your next os

Thanks for pm

-TWINKLE

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myangels

@myangels

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#255

Lovely OS Di...
Ishita was missing Raman..
IshRa are expecting their first baby..
Raman is an army officer..
Flashback was cute..
Raman came back before her delivery..
Ishita was the happiest...
Thank u...

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Divanru

@Divanru

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#256

Lovely OS .

Such a beautiful shot it was .

Raman was an army officer and was on his duty while ishita was pregnant and missing him.

Flashback was beautiful .

He was adamant to win her love .

Finally he came back to surprise her.

Loved it

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Rithika

@srithika

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#257

Lovely os dii
Ishu missing Raman
They expecting their first baby
Raman is in army
Flashback was cute
Raman came back
Ishu was the happiest
Thnx for the pm dii

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jaanishra

@jaanishra

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#258

Nice story..

Raman army officer... Ishita waiting for him... Fb was beautiful.. Raman wants to win her by any chance.. Raman told a lie and kept her waiting.. But he surprised her.. Soo cute.. Loved the os di..

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Sanjna55

@Sanjna55

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#259

Hey

SARTHI.. :)/

Wonderful Os

Love it

Ishra dance was LOVE

Love the concept

TakeCare

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divz9769

@divz9769

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#260

beautiful OS

ishita and toshiji scene was nice ishita was missing raman she started talking to her unborn baby how she and raman met flashback was lovely ishita was waiting for the bus to go college but their was too much traffic ishita was cursing the traffic jam when some army officers came and started clearing g the jam ishita smiled looking at them raman was army officer he saw ishita and fell in love with her ishita went as her bus came raman smiled form next day raman daily started coming to them bus stop to get glimpse of ishita one week passed ishita was also noticing him one day raman came to her and introduces himself he confessed his love for her ishita went from there without replying at night ishita opened the window and got shocked seeing raman standing there with flowers it was raining ishita asked him to go he said i love u ishita thought he is doing that to impress her she thought he will go after sometime he closed the window and tried to sleep but was not able to four hrs passed ishita went to window an saw him still standing there she closed the window next day she saw him standing there still she got confirmed he loves her truly she took towel and made coffee for him and went out she gave him he said he don't need that he gave her flower she smiled an asked him to bring his parents to her home to talk with her father raman said she didn't replied to his confession ishita said she too loves him and ran away inside blushing flashback ended it was ishitas godbharai she was sad as raman was not there function got over ishita saw the dream raman is not with her at the time of delivery ishra scene was lovely

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