ISHRA TS-|| Lost Without You|| Epilogue on pg 13 - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
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congratulations for new story
awesome starting
Raman came to know all truth and tried to recall.
interesting
update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congratulations for your new story
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome update
Raman come to know the truth
Update soon
Thanks for PM
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Part 2


Simmi come to pihu's room and start packing her clothes telling that she is going to hostel back.


Pihu- plz simmi bhua I don't want to go back plz.


Simmi- Just shut up. Don't you dare say a word otherwise (raising her hand to slap her)


She was about to slap pihu when raman come from behind and shout at her


Raman- Simmiii!!!!!!


Simmi stop listening to raman's voice while pihu raman and hugged raman tight. Raman pick her up and hugged her while pihu hugged raman tight hiding in him. Raman come towards simmi angrily


Raman- How dare you raise your hand on my daughter.


Simmi- Bhai she was saying that she don't want to go back hostel and she was going on crying and I got angry and by mistake raise my hand.


Raman- This mistake should not be repeated. And pihu is not going back hostel.


Simmi- But Bhai, why.


Raman saw pihu has slept hugging him. He tucked her and kissed her forehead and took simmi outside closing the door. They come in hall, She again asked him for denying sending pihu back to hostel, while everyone come in hall listening to simmi's voice.


Raman- Because I am saying, that's it. And have I talked to her teacher also and told them pihu is not coming back and she will now stay with us.


Simmi- Bhai I am her guardian so I will decide where she will live.


Raman(shouting)- And I am her father dammit. And I have every right to decide about my daughter.


Simmi- Oh now you recall that you have a daughter, where were you from last two years. I have taken care of her from last two years.


Raman- I didn't remember dammit. I didn't even remember myself. And really thanks to ishita ji that she bought pihu in function that day. Otherwise I don't know when you are going to tell me that I have a daughter. Or even want to tell me. See I was not well at that time but now I am okay and now I can take care of my daughter very well so from next time don't you dare raise your hand on my daughter.


Saying this raman went to pihu's room and pick he up and went to his room taking her and locked the room. He lay her on bed and slept besides her hugging her.On the other side simmi and param was shocked with raman's outburst and simmi and so much angry on raman to think something. After some time all slept.


Next day Ishita got discharged and come home. While in Bhalla house pihu wake up and saw raman holding her and sleeping. She really misses her papa and sleeping with him and was happy seeing him sleeping holding her. She was smiling seeing raman when raman open her eyes and smile seeing pihu looking at him smiling.


Raman- Good Morning Pihu


Pihu- Good Morning Papa.


Raman- You wake up my baby.


Pihu- hmm, and kept her head on his chest and her eyes get moist.


Raman felt her shirt getting wet and saw pihu crying.


Raman(wiping her tears)- What happen baby, why are crying.


Pihu- papa I missed you so much. Thank you for not sending me hostel and stopping simmi bhua from slapping me.


Raman's heart broke seeing her daughter crying like this and thanking her.


Raman-(wiping her tears)- pihu you don't have to thank me baby. You are my baby my jaan, and I will always protect you, and about not sending you back then baby now papa can take care of her princess. How can I let my baby go to some place where she is not happy. And I am really very sorry baby for taking so much time for bringing you back. Will you forgive papa.


Pihu- You don't have to say sorry papa. I know you were not well, so it's ok. But now I am happy that I am with you. I missed you so much. You are the best papa.


Pitah se hai naam tera
Pitah pehchaan teri
Jiye jis sahaare pe tu
Pitah se woh saans mili
Hai pitah, rab tera

Ho Ishwar Allah, Jitne bhi Rab hain
Noor tera tujh mein hi sab hai

Rab hai hai
Tu hi sab hai hai
Rab hai hai
Tu hi sab hai hai


Raman- I am the best papa because I have the best daughter.


Pitah ka mol hai kya
Paas reh ke jaana nahi
Pyar pita se karein
Ye keh na paayein kabhi
Hai pita sab tera

Ho Ishwar Allah, Jitne bhi Rab hain
Noor tera tujh mein hi sab hai

Pita ke aashirwad se tune sab kuch paya hai
Kya lekar tu aaya jag mein
Aur kya tune kamaaya hai

Ishwar Allah, Jitne bhi Rab hain
Noor tera.. tujh mein hi sab hai


They both smile and hugged each other, but in next moment she become gloomy and tears were again start flowing from her eyes. Raman saw this asked her


Raman- What happen now baby, why are you crying again.


Pihu- papa ishima


Raman(wiping her tears)- Baby no need to cry and you know what I have a surprise for you.


Pihu- Surprise kaya papa.


Raman saw time it was 10am.


Raman(st)- Ishita ji must have been discharged and return home I guess, but I think first I should call bala and ask him


Thinking this he call bala if they have come back. Bala said that they have come back home and ishita is being discharged. He became happy and said ok and cut the call.


Raman- You wanna see your surprise


Pihu- Yes


Raman- ok come.


Pihu- But where we are going papa


Raman- You come I will tell you.


They went downstairs. Raman saw romi and tell him to take her to iyer house and went back to get ready. Romi bring pihu to iyer house. Pihu saw ishita sitting there and get happy and run to her crying calling ishima. Ishita saw towards pihu and gets happy and bend to her level and both hugged each other tightly and crying. Pihu was going on crying and tighten her hold around her neck and if her ishima will disappear if she loosen her hold, while ishita was also crying and caressing her hair calming her down.


Ungli pakad ke phir se sikha de
Godi utha le na Maa..
Aanchal se meri munh ponchh de na
Maila saa laage jahaan

A aa e ee oo oo ri ae ae..
O oo ann ahaa


After some time ishita pick pihu and settle on sofa settling her in her lap and hugged her tight.


Pihu- I was so scared Ishima. I...I...I thought I lost you again. Plz don't leave me ishima. I can't live without you. No one loves me. Plz plz ishima plz never leave me again.


Aankhein dikhaye mujhe jab zindagi
Yaad mujhe aati hai tere gusse ki
Daata bhi toh tune mujhe, phoolon ki tarah
Kyun nahi maa saari duniya teri tarah

Maatha garam hai, subah se mera
Rakh de hatheli na Maa
Tune kuch khaaya?
Der se kyun aayi?
Koi na poochhe yahaan


She was going on saying not to leave her alone to ishita while ishita's heart was paining seeing her daughter pleading her not to leave her. She was going on caressing her hair saying some soothing words to her. All the eyes were moist in the room seeing pihu's state. At last ishita broke the hug and cupped her face and said kissing her forehead


Ishita-Shh...shhh... enough baby. I am not going anywhere now. I will always be with you. Ok, plz stop crying baby. You know na I can't see you crying. It hurts me a lot. So plz stop crying baby. Plz baby plz for your ishima.


Pihu stopped crying and hugged ishita tightly while ishita was patting her. In no time she slept. Ishita took her in her room and lay her down on bed and kissed her forehead.


Heera kaha, kabhi nagina kaha
Mujhe kyun aise paala tha Maa
Teri nazar se mujhe dekhe na jahaan
Duniya ko toh daantegi na, daantegi na Maa

Teri nazar se mujhe dekhe na jahaan
Duniya ko toh daantegi na, daantegi na Maa


Then she covered her with blanket and went to freshen up. She took bath and get ready wearing red anarkali suit. After getting ready she went down and saw raman sitting in hall with everyone. She went down near him. Raman was talking to appa when he saw saw her coming down. Raman got up and stand near her. They were standing near each other, when ishita spoke


Ishita- Thank you so much Mr.Bhalla for saving me. Really thank you soo much. I really get scared laying there and thought maybe now I will not be able to see anyone now. But you come on right time and saved me. So thank you so much Mr. Bhalla once again. I am really not getting how to say thank you to you.


All the while raman was just standing there and seeing her without blinking eyes. Then when she stop he said


Raman- There is one way that you can thank me and I can accept it.


Ishita- Tell me Mr. Bhalla I will do anything.


Raman(smiling and smirking)- Soch le madrasan kar paye gi. Toh theek he( seeing his watch)- Tere pass 2 ghante he apna booria bistra baandh aur ye(moving his finger up to down) apna iyer wala livas chod aur apna bhalla wala livas pehen aur mere biwi Mrs. Ishita Raman Kumar Bhalla banker aur hamare bachho ki maa unki ishima and Bhalla Khandan ki Badi Bhau Ishita Bhalla ka roop dharan kar, aur harame beti ko lekar apne ghar wapas aa.( Showing his watch and still smirking)- 2 ghante he tere pass sirf. 2 ghante me mujhe mere biwi mere Jhansi Ki Rani hamare ghar aur hamare kamre me wapas chaia hamare beti ke saath. Aur agar 2 ghante me mujhe mere biwi hamare ghar me nahi mili to by god ye Dilwala apne dulhaina uthakar le jayega.


(* After all hamara hero jo karta he tashan ke saath karta he. What do you think.)


(Think about it Madrasan, will you be able to do. Ok then(Seeing his watch)- You have only 2 hours, pack your bags and this( moving his finger up to down)- drop this iyer outfit and wear bhalla outfit and become my wife Mrs. Ishita Raman Kumar Bhalla and our kids mother their ishima and Bhalla's elder daughter-in-law and come back to our home with our daughter.(Showing his watch and still smirking)- You have only 2 hours. In just 2 hours I want my wife my Jhansi Ki Rani in our home, in our bedroom. And if in 2 hours I didn't met my wife in our home then by god this Dilwala apne dulhaina uthakar le jayega.


(* Hey I know you must be thinking why only this dialogue I have written in both English and hindi. Right, But yaar some dialogues suits in hindi better. Don't you think so. Like this our raman's tashan wala dialogue. Do tell me about my this thought also plz. It's just my thought.)


Saying this he went from there. While ishita still processing what raman said while all were also shocked.


Ruswaiyan hai.. Ruswaiyan..
Tanhaiyan hai.. Tanhaiyan..

Aksar meri baaton mein toh zikr hai tera
Teri saanson ke itr mein dooba main mila

Tere ishq se rihai hogi na meri
Jannat ka nasha teri panaho mein mila

Tu mila.. Tu mila.. (tu mila)
Sajde ka hai sila (hai sila)

Tu mila.. Tu mila.. (tu mila)
Sajde ka hai sila (hai sila)


Shagun come out of shock and went to ishita and hugged her, then ishita come back to her senses.


Ishita- Shagun did you hear what he said


Shagun- Yes ishita I heard it.


Ishita- That's means raman remembered everything.


Shagun nodded while all got happy and hugged each other happily.


So guys, that it for this part. So how you all like it. Next will be epilogue. Plz do tell me. And guys plz plz comment. I have now almost 100 followers but that comments number of comments I get is not even a half in number compare to it. So plz guys plz do comment. Your comment really encourage me to write more so plz do comments. It's my heartily request to all of you. So so hit like and give your wonderful comments.

I have written a note below, do read it also.

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Edited by sharda_123 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey guys how are you all. I am back now. I hope you all missed me. As I have been already written this part when previously I get a day off, so I updated it now. So now as I am back I will give updates. Its just that I have to write all the part of all the stories. So I will start posting other stories also as soon as possible.

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Sarthi
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Posted: 7 years ago
#36
Excellent part waiting for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
#37
Heyy..
Woww..

Amazing Os..

Love it..

Love RKb in full tashan..
His warning to Simi was LOVE.
N Raman N pihu scene was Lovely too..
Omg..he remembered everything..
Love his way of showing authority!!
Of course your thoughts are similar to me..Some dialogues should be in Hindi as it make the speaker strong..N when it's RKB then everything is allowed..😉

Wonderful part..

Thanks for PM..

Will be waiting for epilogue.
Update Soon..

TakeCare..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#38
Awesome update.
Raman and Pihu moments were emotional.
Pihu was go on crying..
Raman asked Romi to take her at iyer house.
There she was crying hugging her IshiMa..
Loved the update.
And that Raman's dialogue at last was superb..
Update soon
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#39
awesome and fabulous update
loved Ramans tashan wala dailogue
waiting for the next update eagerly
continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#40
Raman saving pihu from Simi and blasting at her was nice.Raman pihu ishita pihu scenes were emotional. loved raman saying that he is the best dad as he has the best daughter. Raman calling ishita back was so interesting. dialogues were superb

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