IshRa: Burning In Love Part 7-The Clash! Page 1

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello Friends, This story's previous thread has been locked so opening a new thread, Anyone interested to read Previous parts, here's the link to Previous Thread:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ye-hai-mohabbatein/4720477/ishra-burning-in-love-part-6-ruhi-knows-page-15

Part 7-The Clash!

Anchal's POV:

"Aunty, I'll park the car and come, till then you go inside..." I said as I stopped the car outside the Mall.

"No Beta, we'll come with you, Why you'll come alone?' Ishita Aunty said sweetly.

I was about to say something when Sanjana interrupted , "Mumma, you are behaving like Anchal is a 2 years old, she's a grown up and I'll be with her, don't worry ,You and Papa go inside and start shopping...

"No, I am not going with Ishu...I am better in gaming zone only..." Mani Uncle said as he looked towards Ishita Aunty who looked towards him with a 'Oh Really' look.


"Wait, What I do to you that you can't come with me for 5 minutes, once Sanjana comes, go with her to gaming zone..." Ishita aunty said glaring at Mani Uncle.

"No, you'll start you shopping in 5 minutes and then make me hold those heavy shopping bags..." I and Sanjana had a sound laugh at it while Ishita Aunty looked towards Mani Uncle angrily.


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"Now, I'll not let you go to any gaming zone, now you'll only hold my bags...Anchal-Sanjana ,come inside after parking car..." Ishita Aunty said as she held Mani Uncle by arm and dragged him out in a rather funny way.


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We both nodded like two innocent children, as soon as Uncle-Aunty were out of sight, we burst out laughing.

"What were you trying to do?"I looked towards Sanjana with raised eyebrows.

"Give some alone time to Mumma-Papa, off course you know it...and you were all set to spoil it..." Sanjana replied.

"You and your craziness, you'll surely get them married..."I smiled as I restarted the car taking it to the parking area.
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Shagun's POV:

"We reached..." Raman said as Ruhi who was sitting next to him in car jumped up sitting upright.

"Yippe..." Ruhi remarked smiling.


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"Raman, you park the car, I'll take Ruhi inside till then..." I, who was sitting in the backseat said while Raman nodded.

I and Ruhi came out of the car while Raman restarted it to the take it to the parking area.

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Sanjana's POV:

"Wait Anchal...lets stand here for a while..." I said as I and Anchal came out of the car.

"No yaar Sanju, Ishita Aunty and Mani Uncle would get worried, we'll make them spend alone time some other day..." Anchal said walking at a fast pace, I who was behind her suddenly held her by her arm dragging her back.

"What?" Anchal exclaimed worried.


"Have you called your boyfriend in the Mall that you are so interested to go inside...Wait for some time yaar..." I said with a sound that accounted for teasing mixed with anger.

"You can never get a better topic than this, right? Yaar, Ishita aunty and Mani uncle might actually get worried..." Anchal replied sternly and turned to go.

"Sanjuuu..." Anchal screamed as soon as she turned, a car had come in front of her, lest the driver hadn't applied the brakes on time, the car would have been on Anchal.

Anchal closed her eyes scared while I who was behind her came in front angrily.

Banging front window of the car angrily, I was shouting at him which I think was inaudible to the one sitting inside. Opening the door of the car, he came outside.

" Are you mad? Can't you see we both are standing here?" I screamed at the top of my voice.


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"And is it a place to stand and chat?" The Uncle, visibly of around 40 years shouted back.

"Its parking area, not road that we can't stand and talk..." I replied, in no mood to back off.

Anchal who was standing with closed eyes suddenly opened them realizing she wasn't hurt(The fear of getting hurt had completely taken over her) and hearing me shout.

"Parking area or road, you cannot just stand and start talking..." Replied the man, himself in no mood to back off.

"Sanju...What are you doing? Un...Uncle I am sorry for her behaviour, she's very impulsive , she cares for me a lot so just got worried..." Anchal interrupted our fight as we both turned to her.

"Anchal..."I whispered trying to stop Anchal who rather held my arm to stop me.

"Better way of talking..." The man said looking angrily at me while I turned my face to other side.

Anchal looked towards me with a 'what you are doing?' look.

"Listen, mistake was hi..."I started speaking but was cut in the middle by the ringtone of a phone.

"Hello..." The man picked up his phone unaware of my words.

Writer's POV:

"Hello Raman, Where are you? It doesn't take 10 minutes to park a car..." Shagun said from other side.

"Shagun, I am coming, just got caught up..." Raman cut the call as he look towards AnchJana.

"Mistake was yours..." Sanjana angrily spoke up.

"Sanju..." Anchal tried to stop her again.

"Leave it, I am already late, not interested in fighting with a silly teenager...My mistake..."Raman sat in his car and he begin parking it.


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"What the?" Sanjana angrily remarked with a 'Woah' face.

Anchal laughed as she saw Sanjana with that expression ,"First time someone ignored you that way baby..." Anchal walked off laughing while Sanjana stood there gritting her teeth.

"I...I hate such people..." Sanjana remarked as she moved behind Anchal pacing up.
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Ishita's POV:

"Where are they left?" Mani who already had 2 shopping bags in his hand asked sadly while I giggled looking at him, to be truthful , my anger had mellowed down.

"Must be busy talking somewhere, you know them na Mani..." I said as sweetly as I could, Mani glared at me knowing my antics.

I continued giggling.


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Anchal's POV:

"Where's Mumma...See , I told you they both don't care, they must have even started shopping and because of you I even fought with that Uncle...Huh...and you were there apologizing to him...Mistake was his yaar and he showed me attitude..." Sanjana was sure angrily as she walked with me searching for Uncle-Aunty.

"Stop it...I truly don't know whose mistake I should think it to be of but yes, he was elder to us and we should talk to him with respect..." I scolded Sanjana who made faces.

"He is elder and so he should be understanding but he..." I cut Sanjana in the middle.

"There are Uncle-Aunty, in that shop, lets go and don't talk about this incident with them, they'll get worried..." I said while Sanjana walked behind me irritated.

"Why you don't let me complete..."
I didn't care to listen to Sanju, I enjoyed teasing her , I just walked towards Ishita Aunty and Mani Uncle, as I was entering the shop where they were , I stopped...as I saw him, he was standing outside the shop looking inside as if keeping an eye on someone or rather...Ishita Aunty.

"Ab Chal...why are you standing here...few minutes back you were lecturing me about not making Mumma-Papa wait..." Sanjana said keeping a hand on my shoulder from back, I looked towards her worried.

"I realized I have to make an important call...Tu chal, Mein do minute mein aati hun..." I said as I walked towards him.

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Author's Note:
So AnchJana meeting with Raman, how was it? I hope nice. Sorry for this much delay, My replies on last Part Queries in next post. So the question for this update is, "What are your thoughts about the character of Anchal, Basically do you like it?" Waiting for your replies...Do like and comment if you liked the update.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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My Replies:

fsharma : Thanks a lot for answering my question dear, thats really sweet...Even I am wondering thats why asked that question.

Heatsha8176: Thanks a lot for Reading and commenting dear...Well lets wait and see what Shagun does in this story...

Jayeeta_06: Thanks alot for such a sweet comment dear, Prithvi 's entry will be soon.

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To all others to liked and commented on last part, Thanks a lot lot lot for continuously supporting me.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Mani ishita scene was funny.Aanchal Sanjana added charm to the update.When they met with a 40 yr old man i wondered if its raman.otherwise why wud a random middle aged man get so much of imp in a scene?As I guessed it was Raman.It was sour meeting,but very interesting.wonder how will they react knowing how raman is connected to Ishita.
I liked Aanchal in this part.she behaved more maturely n calmly than Sanjana.loved Aanchal apologizing to Raman on behalf of Sanjana n telling sanjana that they should not talk like this to elders
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Fantastic Chapter

Aanchal and Sanjana just added the right dose of spice and charm to this chapter which I totally enjoyed
meeting Raman after so many years and I do wonder how will react though Aachal apologized and spoke to him politely telling Sanjana not to speak rudely to elders but still I wonder if Aanchal will change if she finds out that Raman is connected to Ishita



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Posted: 7 years ago
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superb update
ishita and mani part was funny
anchal is mature girl while sanjana is like a kid she was fighting with raman
pls update soon

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update


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Posted: 7 years ago
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wow dear
nice update
liked it...
well written
continue soon
thnks 4 pm

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