Ishra OS - Le chal mujhe saath tere (current track) on 20/11

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Anju

@Muskan193

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Superb di.. A big clap for you
It was just amazing
What i wanted you gave me..
I was also disapointed when i see it was all ramans dream
But this version of yoyrs was amazing
Mr.Raman cant stop hinmsef fron thinking about miss ishita
The bike ride was very ronantic...
And rain dance..Haye
Kash yhm mein bhi aisa hi hotha
Waiting for more os from u di
Thanks for pn
Love you anju

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sweetdivya24

@sweetdivya24

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#32

What a os didu

I loved it

How beautifully u have written

I was thoroughly enjoying while reading

Cvs have just ruined this romantic bike ride

But the way u brought this I was like yesss Mann this is it

The way raman was missing ishita

N bike ride N rain dance omg

This os was outstanding

Do write os more often didu would love to read them

Cvs scene barbaad kren toh kya hua aap jaise writer hain naa hmare pass jo hmen woh moment dete hain

Love u didu

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Jyoti8

@Jyoti8

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Beautiful

Ravan Kumar kudse jealous Hai..

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nafnaf

@nafnaf

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#34

A superb OS Pooja!!
This is how it should have happened on the show!!!
But never mind you fulfilled all our wishes!!
Beautifully expressed and written!!
Raman thinking he was dreaming!!
But she was real - yayyy!!!
Ishita talks about her Raavan not fulfilling her wish!!
Raman getting jealous of himself!!!
He agrees to fulfill this fantasy of hers!!!
They have such a romantic dance both kind of remembering "their kuch kuch hota hai momen!!!!"
They almost kissed...!!
And finally she is going "home"!!!!!

Ooohhh now you have to continue please!!!!
Looking forward to the next update sooon please!!!
Thank you so much for the pm!!

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Sarthi Sharda

@sharda_123

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Awesome lovely superb os dear

Thanks for pm

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prachii

@prachii

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#36

This is too good

Loved the way raman was jealous on himself . He s such a baby

I wish they dint hear horn 😆

Would love to read more on this . If possible continue