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Posted: 7 years ago
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They have all gone to the west
Of Suez leaving behind the rest
And in order not to ruffle their nests
Have taken along their mates

Oh what a rollicking time it'll be
As their spouses shopping spree
They will be working upto the hilt
their partners need feel no guilt

Each on his own and to his own
Will ensure the scenes well done
For some work is really worship
No need to egg them on with whip

For some work is their only life
With or without family or wife
For some its a missionary deal
they apply to it exceptional zeal

Its all about what counts most
A chicken roast or simply boasts
A challenge to defy all odds
To remain at the tops or just a way
To fulfil a talent and an interest
Which embraces art and spirit liberates





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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice poem.
But talent m hard work need not involve their respective spouses to keep monitoring them.
N sightseeing n shopping ,they can always afford .
It is more to keep the fanatics' n gossip mongers 'mouth shut.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: GBSC

Nice poem.
But talent m hard work need not involve their respective spouses to keep monitoring them.
N sightseeing n shopping ,they can always afford .
It is more to keep the fanatics' n gossip mongers 'mouth shut.


I couldn't agree with you more
Actually that is what I really meant
But refrained from enunciating it and left it to the reader to insinuate what you have said
That makes my work complete
Thanks

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