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Part=1
Ishita was in bus trying to call subbu continuously but he was not picking her call making ishita angry
I: kaha hai ye subbu? Subhe se mera phone nahi utha raha
She calls him again
Other side
A man is sitting in car busy in kissing a girl his phone rings he get irrate
He cut the phone in irritation
G: kya hua subbu kiska phone aa raha hai baar baar?
S: hai koi pagal baar baar phone karke disturb kar raha hai tum usko chodo naa humko ek dusre ke baare mai sochna chaiye bus
He said pulling the girl closer she pushed him
G: subbu bas bhot ho gya abhi tum apne parents se hamari shadi ki baat karo naa
S: haa baby zaroor karuga mai tum chinta kyu karti ho?
G: tum pichle 3 mahino se jahi sab bol rahe ho tum mujhe apne ghar walo se milwate bhi nahi ho
S: relax baby milwa duga naa tumhe mujh par vishwas nahi hai kya? Tum toh jaanti ho hamara kitna bada business hai appa hamesha busy rehte hai family bhi abrode aati jaati rehti hai ghar pe toh koi kam hi hota hai
G: itna bada business hai tumhara tumhe maine kabhi office jaate hue nahi dekha tum hamesha mujhe car mai hi milte ho aur naa hi apne ghar leke jaate ho bas bahar se dikha diya mujhe kuch samajh nahi aata tum kya karte ho? Mujhe abhi apne ghar leke jao koi nahi hai naa waha chalo phir abbi chalo
Subbu gets scared
S: arey tum kya baat pakad ke beth gayi mai tumhe shadi se pehle uss ghar mai kaise le jaau? Tum meri dulhan banke hi jaaugi aur wo mehal jaisa ghar tumhara hi toh hoga shadi ke baad
Girl gets happy
S: now come in my arms sweet heart
He hugs her and start kissing her
Other side
Bhalla mennsion
It was a big beautiful house like a five star hotel many cars were standing outside the house the house is very beautiful from inside also
There was a big hall
A lady comes out of room she is wearing beautiful designer saree with jewellery she shouts at top her voice
L: oye ramu kithe maar gya?
A servent comes running there
S: ji madam
L: ji madam ji madam kya laga rakha hai? Tumhe roz batna parega ki 4 baaje maa ki dawa ka whakt hota hai jaa paani leke hum raman ke liye ladki dekhne bhi jaana hai
S: ji madam
He goes from there the lady went to a room
L: maa chalo aapki dawa ka whakt ho gya jaldi chaliye agar raman ko pata chala ki uski daadi ne dawa nahi li toh pura ghar ser pe utha lege
D: haa toshi puttar chal rahi hoon mai tu chinta maat kar
T: haa jaldi chaliye waha ladki wale bhi hamara intzar kar eahe honge pata nahi raman kaha hai?
D: aa jaayega tu chinta naa kar
T: ji
Raman's office
He was busy in meeting totally forgets about going home his phone was on silent his mother is calling him continuously
Soon the meeting finshed raman gets free when he checked his phone he gets shocked seeing the missed calls he hits his forehead
R: shit aaj toh mai pakka gya
He take his phone and runs from there he bangs with someone
R: oh sorry mihir bye mai chalta hoon
M: bhai kaha jaa rahe ho itni jaldi mai
R: baad mai btauga abhi ghar jana zaroori hai warna lady dabbang meri jaan le legi
Saying so he goes from there while mihir smiles
M: inka kuch nahi ho sakta
Soon raman reaches home his mother and grand mother were sitting in hall waiting for him angrily
R: raman bhalla aaj toh tu gya kaam se kuch soch
He thought something
R: idea
He comes to hall walking slowly holding his leg
R: ouch
Both ladies gets worried seeing him
D: ki hoya champu tu thik hai naa?
T: raman kya hua bata naa? Pehle tu beth jaha aaram se
She make him sit on couch
T: kya hua puttar aise kyu chal raha hai?
R: kuch nahi maa wo jaldi jaldi mai aa raha toh office mai stairs se gir gya
D: tumhe zada chot toh nahi aayi naa puttar
She sits near him caresses his face
R: nahi daadi bas per mai hi dard hai thoda
T: haye abhi hum kya kare ladki wale intzar kar rahe honge
Raman smiles and thinks
R: acha hi hai mai bach jaauga
D: toshi tu ek kaam kar abhi doctor ko phone laga wo injection dege uss se jhat se thik ho jayega mera puttar
T: ji maa
She picks her phone to call the doctor raman gets scared
R: arey uski koi zaroort nahi itna dard bhi nahi ho raha
T: aise kaise zaroort nahi hai tu chup chap betha reh mai doctor ko bula rahi hoon
Raman gets up and takes phone from her
R:maa maine bola naa mai thik hoon dekho bilkul dard nahi ho raha mai toh dance bhi kar sakta hoin karke dikhau?
Ladies looks at him angrily dadi hold his ear
D: acha toh tu drama kar raha tha?
R: aah sorry daadi sorry maa
T: raman puttar ye sab kya hai?
R: wo maa mai late ho gya tha naa aap dono gussa karti issi liye
D: iss liye tumne humse jhoot bola par puttar hum teri maa aur daadi hai ache se jaante hai tujhe mai toh dekh hi samajh gayi thi tu natak kar raha hai
T: haa injection ka naam sunte hi kaise daar gya itna bada business man ho gya par chote se injection se darta hai
R: mai kisi se nahi darta wo toh bas aise hi doctor ka time waste nahi karna chata tha
D: haa hum ache se jaante hai puttar
Raman smiles and hugs both the ladies
R: meri dono ladies dabang bhot samjdar hai
They smiles
T: chal puttar bhot der ho gayi hai hum chalte hai abhi
R: jana zaroori hai?
D: haa bhot hi zaroori chal abhi
T: haa chalo raman warna tumhare papa gussa karege ki hum time par nahi gaye chal
R: haa maa chalo
They went outside
T: ab ye driver kaha maar gya? Gadi bhi nahi hai
R: maa gadiyo ki kami hai kya? Chalo meri car mai chalte hai
T: nahi puttar uss gadi mai kuch shagun ka sman bhi rakha hai agar rishta Paka ho gya toh
R: kaash naa ho
He said slowly
T: kya kaha tumne?
R: kuch nahi maa
D: raman tu phone laga naa driver ko
R: ji dadi
Raman calls the driver he is not picking the call
R: pata nahi phone kyu nahi utha raha ye?
Other side
Subbu drops the girl at her home his phone rings again
S: ye ladki mujhe jine kyu nahi deti?
He took out his phone and gets shocked seeing the number he immidetly picks the phone
S: haa mai abhi aa raha hoon sir bas do minute mai
He drove fastly
Soon car arrived in front of bhalla mennsion and stop in front of bhalla's
T: aa gya abhi iski kabhar leti hoon
She went to driver
T: bahar aao abhi
He comes out toshi ji looks at him angrily
T: kaha maar gya tha tumhe pata nahi hai aaj humko ladki dekhne jana hai
She said angrily
Raman comes to them
R: relax maa abhi aa gya naa wo chalo abhi late nahi ho raha?
He looks at driver
R: aaj ke baad aise late maat karna samjhe subbu
Subbu looks down nodded in yes
R: Good
Soon they sits in car and goes from there
They reached to girl's house
They went inside house while subbu was sitting in car waiting for them
S: kaisi kismat hai meri? Driver ki naukri karni par rahi hai arey mujhe toh raman bhalla ki tarah bada admi hona chaiye tha kya kismat hai uski itna aalishan mehal itni mehangi gaadi itni daulat kya kismat hai uski kaash meri kismat bhi aisi hoti par itna bada admi baane ke liye mehnat kaun kare? Mujhe toh short cut tarike se bada aadmi banna hai
Ishita calls him again subbu gets irritate
S: ye ladki pagal ho gayi hai socha tha itni sundar ladki hai kuch fayda hoga isko apne pyar ke jaal mai phasya par iss ne kabhi mujhe haath bhi nahi lagane diya phir socha shyad shadi ke baad mauka milega par iske baap ne shadi bhi nahi karne di socha tha shadi mai dahej milega saath mai itni sundar ladki aur shadi ke baad apna maan bharne ke baad usko chod duga par mera sara plan flop kar diya aur abhi meri jaan ke piche par gayi hai
His phone rings again he picks the call
I: hello subbu tum mera phone kyu nahi utha rahe subhe se? Kaha ho tum?
S: ishita mere paas baat karne ka time nahi hai tumhe kya lagta hai mai free hoon? Ek important meeting hai meri chalo mera dimag maat kahao baad mai baat karuga bye
He said rudely and cuts the call while ishita cries
I: kyu subbu mere saath aisa kyu kar rahe ho? Mai tumhare liye sab chod ke aa gayi aur tum ho ki
She closed her eyes remembering moment she meet subbu
Flash back
Two years before ishita comes to delhi for her studies she was medical student she wants to become dentist after completing her graduation she comes to delhi she get admission in delhi's top unvirsty being a bright student she was very happy and excited she wants to complete her studies and wants to become doctor she has worked hard for it
She lives in hostel whenver she used to go out with her friends subbu used to follow her first ishita was angry on him but he confessed his love for ishita ishita was not interested in him so she rejected his proposal but then also he didn't stop from coming behind her one day ishita was going to hostel after taking money from atm for paying her fees in the way a boy comes on bike he snatches away her bag ishita tries to cathch him but he runs away ishita cries as if she didn't pay the fees she can't sit in exams she thought to complaint to police but subbu comes to help her saying police will not do anything it's difficult to cathc the theif he offered her money for her fees ishita diened from taking money from him but he insists her so ishita takes money as she know his father can't send money as their financial condition is very bad
Ishita thanked subbu she think he is a nice man soon subbu start meeting her daily ishita also start liking him seeing his nice nature they become friends soon subbu told her he is a business man ond day he proposed her ishita accepet her prposal this time
They used to meet daily subbu comes to meet her in diffrent cars saying he has buy it with his hard earned money ishita is impressed by him
he tries to come closer to her many times but ishita was uncomfortable with his touches ishita said him to talk to his parents subbu always said he will talk to them but he never did it
After two years iyer comes to meet ishita in delhi she told her parents about subbu they agrred to meet him subbu comes to meet his family mr iyer asked him about his company his qualification and family but subbu unable to answer them he tell them lie about him mr iyer investigate about him and gets to know he is not any business man he is frode but ishita didn't belive his appa as subbu make her fool by his fake tears saying her father did not like him that's why he is telling lie at first ishita also doubt on him but subbu tries to do suicide saying he can't live without ishita but ishita saves him and said she will never leave him she goes against his parents but they didn't listin to her and take her back and fixed her marrige forcefully ishita tries a lot to call subbu but he always make exuses or didn't pick her call at last on the day of wedding she runs from her marrige
Flash back ends
other side
Bhalla reaches home after having dinner in restaurant servent comes and give them water they sits on couch raman was very happy as mrs bhalla rejcted the girl saying she is not raman's type makig raman happy
R: thank god mata rani aap ne mujhe bacha liya maa ne ladki ko reject kar diya
D: toshi tumne ladki ko kyu reject kiya itni achi toh thi jiss tarah tu nakhre karti hai tera beta kuwara hi reh jayega
T: maa wo bhi koi rishta tha mera beta laakho mai ek aise kisi bhi ladki ko apni bahu bana loon? Mujhe toh laakho mai ek bahu chaiye jo mere puttar se match kare
Raman kissed her cheeks
R: thank you maa you are the best
Toshi ji smiles and kissed his forehead mera puttar bhi best hai
T:maine bhalla ji ko bhi bata deti hoon phone karke
She went to call mr bhalla
Ramam hugs daadi happily
D: haa tu toh kush hoga hi tujhe aur teri maa ko koi ladki paasand nahi aa sakti pata nahi kya hoga mere puttar ka
R: daadi chinta kyu kar rahi ho aap? Agar bhgwan ne mere liye kisi ko banya hoga toh wo mujhe zaroor milegi
D: haa mata rani kare mere champu ko uski chameli jaldi mil jaye
R: kya daadi aap phir shuru ho gayi? Aur please usko chameli maat bolo wo toh pari se kaam nahi hogi
D: dekha isko abhi se kitna bura lag raha hai iski hone wale patni ko kuch bola toh abhi toh uss se mila bhi nahi
R: haa toh mil jaayegi kahi naa kahi toh hogi
Ishita reaches delhi she comes out of bus and looks around it was night so it was all dark ishita is bit scared as she did not where to go subbu also switched off his phone
She is standing on road looking for auto some men were looking at her top to bottom ishita gets scared put duppta around herself
Raman was talking with dadi happily
R: daadi ek kaam karte hai celebrate karte hai meri jaan bachne ki kushi mai abhi ice cream leke aata hoon bhot maza aayega
D: arey toh kisi aur se magwa le
R: nahi daadi mai khood leke aauga hamara favioure flavour
D: arey par baarish wala mausam hai bahar
R: toh kya hua? Mai gaadi mai hi jaauga
He takes his car's key
R: ok daadi mai abhi gya aur abhi aaya
D: arey par
Raman runs from there
D: ye kabhi meri baat nahi sunta
Ishita is wating for auto for long time but no auto coming on the road she starts walking on road slowly some men stops her on the way ishita gets scared
M1: hii madam ji aap itni raat ko akele kya kar rahi ho jaha it's not safe
M2: lagta hai shadi se bhag kar aayi hai
Ishita tries to run but the stopped her
M3: arey kaha bhag rahi hai?itni raat mai delhi jaise seher nai ladki ka akela ghumna safe nahi hai aao hum aapko chod dete hai
M4: haa chaliye naa hamare saath aap bilkul safe hai hum aapko apni baahon mai chipa lege
He said trying to hold her ishita pushed him and runs
They eun behind her
M1: arey bhaag kyu rahi ho? Ham toh rumhari help karna cha rahe hai ruko toh sahi
Ishita runnig trying to safe herself they are running behind him
It's start raining heavily
Raman takes ice cream form ice cream parlour and was going to sit in car when his car when he saw a girl in bridle attire coming towards her running some men running behind her he couldn't see her face because it was raining heavily slowly she comes near to him she was running seeing behind she didn't noticed raman and bangs with him she got disbalanced and was about to fall raman holds her on saving her from falling she closed her eyes getting scared while raman was lost in her she is looking very innocent and beautiful ishita open her eyes and looks at him Ishita was hanging in his arms raman is looking in her eyes ishita also looks in his eyes both shared intense eye lock
P.S: so guys please tell me how was the first part? Sorry if i did not matched to your expectations it was my first story not related to yhm so i am sorry if i did any mistake will wait for your review[
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