Ishra ss-#2 tune dil mera toda#3,last pt on pg 136 updt on Dec 16 - Page 17

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Part 15
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Prasant tried to instigate Raman against Ishita. But both of them are inseparable. Hope everything gets sorted soon. Loved the update. Continue soon.
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PART 16

Shagun-why this girl is shouting here, and what she is doing in our house at the first place. Is she ur new maid. She said looking at ishita making Ishra shocked and Raman angry.

Raman-what the hell, what do u mean by calling ishita maid. She is not maid, samjhi tum. He said angrily while Shagun said-then who is she.

Raman was tongue tied wheb Shagun asked again-if she is not maid then who is she.

Ishita looked at Raman and said-u guessed it right shagun. Main maid hi hoon, aur kya ho sakti hoon.

Raman looked at ishita and said-please ishita, don't.

Ishita wiped her tears from cores of her eyes and said-no, I am maid only. Aapki aur aapki biwi ko naukarani, kuch chahiye kya madam.

Shagun-chai bana do, nahi coffee nahi milkshake. She said confused what to ask for.

Raman -shut up Shagun, she is not maid aur woh kuch nahi banane wali. U go inside, he said Shagun to which she only nodded and went inside the room.

Ishita too turned to go when Raman held her hand and said-what do u mean ki tum maid ho.

Ishita-kyun kya galat kaha, actually she is better then u. Usne kam se kam maid kaha aapne toh mujhe mistress bana diya. She said looking at him with accusing eyes.

Raman couldn't take her accusation anymore, he pinned her to the wall and said-shut up, bahut bakwaas kar li tumne ,but now u have to keep mum and listen what I am telling. Samjhi tum, chup rahogi tum bilkul. He said angrily making ishita look at him.

Raman lovingly caressed her face and said keeping his head on her shoulder while ishita just closed her eyes feeling his touch -tu mistress nahi hai meri, jaan hai meri. Bahut pyaar karta hoon tujhse. Samajh rahi hai tu. Yes I know u r very angry with me but I have a rea,he was saying when ishita fell on him loosing her senses.

Raman hold her in neck of time and called her name but she didn't responded. He picked her in his arms and again ran towards the hospital.

Doctor checked ishita and said to Raman -its not good Mr bhalla. Iss tarah se bp fluctuate karna, is very dangerous. U have to keep her baby or else, u have to loose ur baby. She needs proper rest and care. Please make a peaceful environment for her. And seems she didn't had anything since long. Please tell her to take healthy food or else ur baby will suffer.

Raman -sorry doctor,i will surely keep her tension free, I can't afford to loose her or my baby. I will take care of her.

Doctor -thats good.

Raman -can I take her home.

Doc-she is unconscious now.

Raman -no problem doc, I will take care of her.

Doc -okay then take her home.

Raman nodded and soon he took her home. Raman made her lay comfortably on the bed and pecked her temple softly.

Raman -I Am really sorry jaan, for giving u so much pain. But what to do, nothing is in my hand. Jaise sab haathon se chut raha hai. I don't know how to tackle everything alone. Tum meri sun nahi rahi and I can't leave her too. Please jaan at least u listen to me. Warna main mar jaaunga. He said and kissed ishita's palm.

Shagun saw raman crying and hugging ishita. She felt bad for them. She went to his room and called prasant.

Prasant was combing his hair when his phone rang. He picked it in a jiffy seeing Shagun's number .

Prasant -haan hello, kya hua, what u called me at this time.

Shagun-sahab, main nahi kar sakti yeh sab. Woh dono Ek dusre ko bahut pyaar karte hai. Mujhse nahi dekha jaata unka dukh sahab. Raman sahab bahut pyaar karta hai uss madam se, jaise main tere se karti hai. Aur woh madam maa banne wali hai, jaise main tere bachche ki maa banne wali hai. Chod do naa sahab unko, aur mere se shaadi kar lo. Main tere ko bahut khush rakhegi.

Prasant got angry hearing this and said-shut up u bloody bitch, aukaat bhool gayi hai kya apni, u r just a bloody mistress of mine. Tujhe yaad hai naa kahan se uthaya tha. U r a bloody prostitute. Mujhse shaadi karegi, don't u ever dare to say this again. Aur chup chap woh kar joh main keh raha hoon,warna joh paise mil rahe hai naa, woh bhi nahi milenge. Aur phir wahin wapas jaana hoga jahan se tu aayi hai. Samjhi.

Shagun said yes meekly while her eyes got filled.

Prasant -toh rakh phone, badi aayi shaadi karne wali, bloody prostitute. Saying so he hung the call while shagun start crying hearing his harsh words.

She was crying when Raman came in and saw her crying.

Raman -what happened shagun, why u r crying. Kuch dard kar raha hai kya.

Shagun wiped her tears saying no and went to washroom. Shagun sat on the rim of the bath tub and start remembering what happened with her in the last three months.

Shagun was a prostitute with whom prasant met when a client arranged her for him. They spend the night together and then prasant started spending nights with her more often. He often gifts her clothes and some accessories. Slowly Shagun start liking him and slowly the like turned into love. One day she confessed her love to prasant only to get lashed out badly. Shagun was heart broken and she stop meeting prasant. Prasant too didn't give a damn. Then one day Shagun came to know that she is pregnant with prasant's child, so she went to him to request prasant to accept her and her baby, but he insulted her badly. Shagun was heart broken, she was going when prasant called her and told her to help him in separating ishra and in return he will give her money to live a good life with her baby. Seeing no other option she agree and came to create difference between ishra.

Shagun-agar paise ki zarurat nahi hoti toh main kabhi aisa Kaan nahi karti. Main gareeb zarur hai par jaanti hai, jisse Aap pyaar Karo agar woh dhokha de toh kaisa lagta hai. Main jaanti hai ishita madam kitni dukhi hai. Par main kya karegi, mere ko khud ko aur hone bachche ko paalne ke liye paisa chahiye. Main apne bachche ko uss daldal mein nahi chod sakti. I am sorry raman sahab, ishita madam, meri wajah se aap log itne dukhi hai par main bhi mazboor hai. She said crying.

On the other hand, Raman was also lost in his grief. That night all slept in their own grief.

Next morning, ishita got up and went to kitchen and start making tea for them happily forgetting totally about shagun wheh her eyes fell on Raman's room whose door was closed. She remembered the most bitter truth of her life and her eyes got filled. That's when Raman came out and both shared a brief eye lock, and then ishita get herself indulged in her work ,Raman too didn't said anything thinking not to stress her more and start doing his daily chores.

After some time, ishita served him breakfast and was standing in a corner looking at the scene in front of her eyes.Raman was combing his hair and went to dining table ti have his food. He tried to call her to join him on table but she denied as usual.

He often ask her to join in and she denied as she has to do many works at that time and today also she is doing the same,arranging his things but now everything has changed.she lost the authority over her Raman.a tear fell off her eyes thinking about it.she was going to her room when shagun screamed.

Shagun- what's this ishita.why u r standing idle.don't u have any work.make a coffee for me.she said opening her arms in air,she just woke up.though she don't want to do all this but she had to follow prasant's instruction, so she was trying to hurt ishita, so that she went to prasant leaving Raman alone.

Raman raise his head to look at ishita hearing shagun's voice.she was looking at him with anger while he look at her with helplessness.

Raman- why u r screaming on her like this shagun.

Shagun- then how should I behave Raman.after all she is our maid.

Raman roared at his top of voice- she is not a maid, got it.

Ishita cut his words and said- nahi shagun ma'am.I am ur maid.she said stressing on the word ma'am making Raman grit his teeth in anger.

Shagun- if u guys r over can I get a coffee.don't know what's wrong with u .

Ishita- jee,saying so she went into the kitchen.

Raman went to shagun and said- why u r doing this.u know naa she is pregnant.

Shagun-toh,why u r worried.its her husband's work.

Raman was tongue tied and went inside his room in anger while shagun sat down reading a magazine.

After a while,

Raman- Ishita,I am not getting my CD.come and find.

Ishita slowly went inside the room giving shagun her coffee.

Raman locked the room and said pinning her to the wall- why u r doing this ishita.u know naa how much it hurts whenever she calls u as maid. Please ishita, just once listen to me.

She answered expression lessly- why u r doing so sir,let me go.I have lots of work.

Raman- don't pretend that u r not understanding anything.u don't have to be maid. I will arrange everything for u. I will buy a house for u and u can stay there happily.for god's sake ishita,u r pregnant ,baby.

Ishita- aur kya hongi main aapki.mistress??kyunki biwi hone ka haq toh aapne shagun ko de diya Raman.aur kyun jaun main Kahin, this is my house, u throw her out, why r u throwing me out. she asked with moist eyes.

Raman cupped her face and said-please don't say this ishita, I can't throw u out. u r my jaan .don't u know how much I love u.trust me main sab kuch thik kar dunga.

Ishita- trust??u really think after doing this,u deserve my trust.no Raman I can't trust u.and if u really love me then go to ur so called wife that u love me and I am pregnant with ur baby.keh do jaake usse ki main maid nahi pyaar hoon aapka.can u do this Raman.

Raman look down hearing her words.

She wiped her tears and said- then sorry Raman sir.I can't trust u for me and my baby.let me go sir.she said stressing on the word sir.

Raman left her hand feeling guilty.she walk towards the door ,turn and see him.

Tune dil mera toda
Kahin ka naa choda
Sanam bewafa sanam bewafa

Raman look back at her with moist eyes,

Main nahi bewafa,main nahi bewafa

The day went in a jiffy, Raman was trying hard to talk to ishita but she was ignoring him to core. Shagun was also trying hard to insult ishita. While ishita was just lost in her sadness but trying to be strong for her baby.

Later in night, Shagun went to his room to sleep, seeing this ishita too closed her room's door and cried.

Raman went to ishita's room. Knocked the door but she didn't responded. At last went to his room and lay down on the couch.

In midnight, Shagun got up and was going to washroom and got shocked seeing raman.she went closer to him to check him and said-hey bhagwaan what happened to him. Kahin Mar toh nahi gaya.agar yeh mar gaya toh mujhe jail ho jayegi. But maine toh kuch nahi kiya. But no-one will believe u, Bhaag jaa Shagun isse pehle ki Isse kuch ho jaaye aur tu pakdi jaaye. Haan yahin sahi rahega, bhaag jaa Shagun. She said and went out of the house.

Ishita got up hearing some sound and thought to check. She went out of her room and saw the main door and raman's room door open. She closed the main door feeling weird and was going to her room when thought to check Raman.

She walked inside the room with slow steps not knowing how she will react if she will see them together. But got shocked seeing raman on the couch.

He was sleeping half on the couch and half on the floor while froth was coming out of his mouth.

Ishita ran to him and hold raman tight.

Ishita -raman, Raman. Aakhen kholiye Raman. Raman please raman open ur eyes. She said patting his cheek while he was hanging lifelessly in her arms.

Ishita hugged him more tightly and shouted -raman.

That's all for now, enjoy and do comment and hit like. Will wait for it .

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Awesome update di.
Prashant sent shagun to create problems in Ishra life and shagun agreed for her child. Shagun dont want to hurt Ishita but she is insulting her. Ishita taking all this while Raman trying to make her understand. What happened to Raman? Shagun run away while Ishita was shocked. Superb. Hope Raman is fine and soon all got sort. Update soon
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Awesome update waiting for next part update soon please waiting for it eagerly
Continue soon plzzz
What happened to raman
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Shagun is helpless
That prashant 😡
What happened to Raman
Why can't he say everything to Ishitha
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