Ishra ss-meri mannat tu#4,pt 28 on pg 136 updt on Dec 14

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Khushiishra

@Khushiishra

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Posted: 8 years ago

#201

Nice part😛

Ishita becomes raman's jaan😉

So cute ishita is jallu😆

Oh god y ramans papa is come now😕

Thanku 4 PM😊

Waitnig update soon😊

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cutekhusboo

@cutekhusboo

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Posted: 8 years ago

#202

emotional and beautiful update
loved it

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divani

@divan19

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#203

Superb update di...
Raman and his grandparents talk was emotional di..
Ishita is raman's choti si votti...
Ishita is so possessive
Little jallu ishita is so cute...
Loved the way raman consoled ishita
Continue soon
Tanx for the pm

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raksha

@cutieruhi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#204

Teaser

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Everyone was sitting and having food while Mr bhalla was struggling with his two daughters as they were being fussy in eating the Indian food. They wanted pizza to eat. He was trying hard to feed them but they were no were listening. Mr bhalla called his wife but she was busy in her phone.

Seeing Mr bhalla struggling, toshiji said-aao bachchon main khila deti hoon.

Mr bhalla smiled and was giving his daughters to toshiji when Raman hold her hand and said-why u will feed them .jinhone paida kiya, woh unn logon ko take care karenge, meri maa nahi. Aap sirf mujhe aur gudiya ko khila sakti hai aur kisi ko nahi maa.

Toshiji -raman, I was just helping, she was saying when Raman's grandfather said-he is right, toshi. Tum sirf apne bete ka khayal rakho. Om u tell ur wife to feed it daughters.

Mr bhalla nodded and went to call his wife. She came with a dirty face and said-whats this Om,why will I feed them. U always feed them. Oh god, here everything is so boring. Please finish everything and go from here, it's so suffocating here.

Raman -itna suffocating hai toh aayi hi kyun, waise bhi it's not the atmosphere which is suffocating. It's ur presence which is making the atmosphere suffocating .

Mr bhalla's wife -what the hell, have u heard, what he is saying. I must say he is just a ill mannered boy.

Mr bhalla -can u please shut for sometime, and Raman u too.

Raman -main kyun chup rahun. I am telling the truth. He was saying when ishita held his hand and said meekly-raman please chup ho jaiye.

Raman temper get down hearing her voice ,he looked at her and nodded. Then he start eating again ignoring mr bhalla and his family while his grandparent smiled seeing ishra bonding.

That's all, will updt soon.

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Mirrah Abish

@Mirrah_Abish

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Posted: 8 years ago

#205

Oops ye tau khatarnak teaser hai

Ab jldi update do

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Kavya

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#206

Interesting tzr Di

What he said is right

Update soon Di

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Kavya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-
Interesting tzr Di
What he said is right
Update soon Di

Thanks for pm Di

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lalibhaskar

@lalibhaskar

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#208

Nice teaser

Liked raman stopping his mother and answering to bhalla wife

He controlled his anger listening to ishita

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shavetamehta32

@shavetamehta32

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Posted: 8 years ago

#209

amazing wonderful awesome mind blowing fantastic fabulous incredible super se bhi uper brilliantly written beautiful teaser waiting for the next update. update soon next