Fanaa : Destroyed in Love Ishra FF Last part-pg107

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Posted: 8 years ago
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pt1,2-pg1

pt3-pg10

pt4,5-pg18
pt6,7-pg27

pt8,9-pg33

pt10-pg39
pt11-pg42
pt12-pg48
pt13,14-pg54
pt15-pg59
pt16,17-pg65
pt18-pg71
pt19,20-pg77
pt21-pg82
pt22-pg87
pt23,24-pg93
pt25-pg98
pt26-pg103
pt27-pg107

This is my 1st full fledged Ishra FF.plz support me.


Fanaa : Destroyed in Love Part1,2

Part 1 Raman is returning home after a business tour.His friend Mihir is in his car.
RAMAN:2day is a special day in my life.Our wedding anniversary
MIHIR:so sweet.how did u meet Ishita bhabhi?
RAMAN:3 yrs back

Flashback
Ishita:Raman is drving the car.Ishita came from the wrong direction.Luckly Raman managed 2 take brake.Raman becomes angry & cums out of the car:cant u c anything?
Ishita is embarrassed.
Ishi:Why are you getting angry?
Raman:How can I not get angry?Because of your carelessness an accident could have taken place.

People come. Ishita lies:this fellow began 2 hit me.luckily I escaped.
RAMAN:wht?she's lying
Ishita whispers:every1 wil stand with a girl.its better 2 giv compensation.otherwise u'l b insulted b4 others
Raman is stunned.He gives her Rs 500 2.Ishita has a naughty smile on her face.Raman is irritated.

Mihir laughs:very nice starting.but how did the luv prosper?









Raman tells.

Flash back..
Once Raman gets a money order.That time itself he gets a call.
"do u remember the naughty girl u met on the road?"
RAMAN:ya.u r ...?
"yes.i'm that girl.i'm the person who sent u the money order.i felt sorry 4 u.You were innocent.Still you had to give me money as compensation.I don't deserve it.So I decided to return you the money.so I struggled hard 2 find ur address& I returned ur money& I'm sorry"

Raman smiles:it's alright
she:thx.u r Raman.right?
RAMAN:yes.u r?
ISHITA:I'm Ishita

Raman 2 MIHIR:we met each other again.den we fell in luv.we married.she broke her tie with her family 4 me.my parents who r at US dunno that I'm married.dey hav found a girl called Shagun 4 me.sumtimes I keep her photo with me 2 make Ishita jealous.she bcums so angry tht she fights with me.she's possessive.but I luv it.i did'nt tell her the 2day I'm reaching there.she wont expect me there.but I'l go there with surprise gifts.she'l surprised.she said she'l also giv a surprise.but it won't beat my surprise
Mihir smiles:all the wishes from my side.
Raman drops him 2 his house. He drives the car.1 lorry was about 2 hit his car.but he escaped.He reaches his house.he goes near the door gladly.He hears a laughter.he luks inside.he was shocked.Bcoz there Ishita was hugging another man & laughing.
Raman's gifts fall down.Its raining.Ishita goes out of the gate with that man.he gets inside the car:bye sweety
ISHITA:bye.
Raman watches everything with a shock.

part 2

Raman's eyes r full of tears.he enters their bedroom.Ishita is inside the bathroom.she's humming & singing.he luks at the bed.bed sheet was messy.Raman feels irritated:u cud'nt bear Shagun's photo kept in our bedroom.u said this bedroom is only 4 us.then how cud u b on this bed with some other man?u tore my heart completely.u wounded my heart.i'l never 4giv u
Ishita cums out of the bathroom.her lips were shivering 2 utter his name.she had a slight smile on her face.
Raman's eyes r red:how cud u do this 2 me?
Ishita wanted 2 tell sumthing.but before that Raman tuk the bedsheet & threw it on her face.He held it tightly.She was trying 2 escape.but she can't breath inside the cloth & she falls down dead.Raman was shocked.he cries & sits near her:Ishita!oh my god,what did I do?i killed my Ishita.how cud I do this?
Raman weeps like crazy& goes near the door weeping.somebody calls him:Raman?
Raman turns back.he's shocked.

She:wen did u cum?what a pleasant surprise!
She hugs him.Raman can't believe his eyes.bcoz that lady was Ishita.Raman is scared.He moves away from her


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting update..
I'm little bit confused regarding ishita being alive or dead..
Continue soon .. Waiting for the next
Edited by Priiiyaa - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations for your first full-fledged Ishra FF. I guess you are writing this FF based on Fanaa movie. Loved Ishra and Mihir bonding. Raman's way of making Ishita jealous with Shagun's photo was cute.
Edited by katrinasalman - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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diid u read the update till the end?It's completely different from the movie Fanaa.There is a twist at the end.This is not based on the movie Fanaa.Just the title is same.

Originally posted by: katrinasalman

Congratulations for your first full-fledged Ishra FF. I guess you are writing this FF based on Fanaa movie. Loved Ishra and Mihir bonding. Raman's way of making Ishita jealous with Shagun's photo was cute.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice start
Raman going home early to surprise ishita
On way telling mihir how he met ishita
Who was the guy ishita was hugging family member friend
Raman thought he killed her
Was it all a dream from when he arrived home or what
I'm thinking her surprise is she's pregnant
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting start
Raman came early to surprise ishu...but he was shocked to see her with some other man
He thought that he killed ishu...but ishu was coming from behind😕
Continue soon
Thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations on new Story dear!!
Nyc starting
Loved it!!
Raman was telling Mihir abt the way he first met ishita and how they fell in love with each other
Raman wanted to surprise ishu on their anniversary
Raman saw ishu with other men and felt betrayed
He thought he killed ishu and she came from behind
Loved the way Raman used to make ishu feel jealous of shagun
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for the pm
Will be waiting for the next update😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was So Nice to see you with Ishra Story.😊
Ishra First meeting was so Interesting.😊
Ishra Phone Conversation was so Nice.😊
Raman saw Ishita with someone,it was so sad.😭
With angry,He Killed Ishita.😭
Who is came behind like ishita?😲
The Story is getting so Interesting.😊
Please Continue soon.😊
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(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nuce start
Read both the n parts
Loved the way they met and fell in love
Interesting
Pls continue soon

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