Ishra OS:Aftermath of the kiss - Page 3

U r back again with the sequel

Finally the sequel. 😳

Os was amazing - you captured it beautifully !!!
Their thought during the drive home!!!
Both feeling nervous!!!
both waiting to take the next step!!!
It finally happens - yayyy!!!!
I like knowing how they are feeling but I love having dialogue in the story and what you had here was brilliant!!!

Thank you so much and now you need to continue this with the morning after where the romance continues in their bedroom but when they go down where the whole family is I would like BOTH of them to continue their romance "chupke chupke"!!☺️
I would like Raman and Ishta both to find ways to communicate romanticaly with each other!!!
Please don't let Ishita to keep saying "chodo koi dekhlega"!!!!!
In fact it would be really nice to have her initiate the moves as well as Raman - that would really be amazing to see and Raman enjoying every minute of it together with Ishita - let her feel the excitement as well please!!!
I hope I am not asking too much make it my belated birthday present pleeeaaassseee!!!🤗

Thank you so much for the pm!!

Nice part .

Bold ishu!!!! good to read.loved it.

*BLUSH*

U know what I even tried to comment on previous OS which u wrote on tanu bday twice but each time it got deleted. *cry baby face*

Originally posted by: swa6

Finally you are back with sequel :) Congrats for that...

The first half of the OS is very nice and the way you describe their feelings, hesitation, fears...yet the excitement in waiting is too good. 👍🏼

But, I feel that the second half you quickly completed... I didn't mean that you need to describe the action part more😉. Actually here you concentrated on dialogues n action...and ignored explaining their inner feelings a little bit...which made me think you completed it in hurry...

Usually the benefit of reading is we can get to know 'what the characters are thinking & feeling at the moment' which keep us connected to the chars.. While watching its bit difficult , because we have to assume on our own based on their expressions/monologues which is always not possible.

I really mean no offence by my comment above, and I wish you will take it as constructive critism. I m waiting for the sequel again... may be this time how IshRa are eagerly waiting n trying for continuing their romantic-journey, where Ruhi - Adi busy becoming haddis everywhere😉 n asking them innocent questions, where they can't answer directly n need to find some bahana😆 to escape from embarrassing situation...

thnxx dear
will try to keep all this in mind in d future
n yeah there will b another OS in this series soon

Originally posted by: Love_pearl

Amazing update Di😃
And sorry the same problem again
I'm not able to type 😭
So just copy and paste

thnxx aruna

Originally posted by: divz9769

nice os

it was hot😳

thnxx dear