It's too late -OS - 11/7/2016

suhi.mahi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Amazing os ...loved adi and ishima bond ...continue plsss...want to see pihu accepting ishu ...beautifully written

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ishra_JD_club

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

hii maya,

frst of all congrats for new os

thnx for pm also!!!!!

brilliant piece of work

it ws awesom...i loved the way adi stnds for ishita...also show mirror to rman and pihu👏👏

pihu get to knw the truth

beautifully penned down

aur likhte raho😆😉

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Sarthi Sharda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Nice os

Thanks for pm

Edited by sharda_123 - 8 years ago

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Tuc_Mob

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Awesome OS nice writing, keep it up!!!

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zindagi4pyaar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Dis is awsum yaar. . . . Adi n ishimaa des 2 amazing . . .

Plz plz plz do post a nxt part. . . . Coz i also want dat raman shuld get a taste of his own behavior . . .

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Thaslima

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Maya 😳 This is just wonderful...
Raman should know what he has lost in his life by being a puppet in hands of his ex and the brat of a daughter..
Shagun is disgusting as always .. This women should be punished and thrown at the same garbage from which ishita has brought her...none should help her financially... And Raman let him live with pihu alone or he can take shagun from that garbage..
I know this is an os.. But if possible do continue the story with ishruadi and Raman, pihu repenting for their words and behavior towards ishita 😊 😡

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Swarna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Very nice OS...

In serial/soap we never get chance to know what everyone feels about the incident, as always story will be focused on main characters in that incident... we never get chance to know their inner turmoil even... except for two or four dialogues...

We can get to know all these through only written content..

Once Adi comes to Ishima, he never left her always supported her even when everyone against her[ bhooth track as well]... I loved that moment, and loved when Adi stopped Ishu after Ruhi custody... yes Adi is the one who didn't get enough of her love... and your OS shows how Adi struggles and longed for her love through out these years ...

Also the glimpses of Raman feeling guilty and ashamed of his behavior... is also nice... How lucky we are if we get the same in serial as well, rather than you r burimaa i m bura father crap..

Loved it...

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Balasri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

Nice one Adi loves his mom soo much and vusko kuch hojane ki darr aur anger mein he went maniac tough I dnt agree with d tone he talked to Pihu things he said shld be known to Pihu loved d way he tackled Shagun

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snehaseshan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Fantastic OS maya just loved d way adi showed Raman his mistakes. Raman deserved it.. Aur likhte raho coz u always bring ishita's perspective,emotions very well which is totally ignored in d show..

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