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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
wow! awesome OS
very well written 👏
loved it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi
just saw Harshada's pm...u r her sister...
welcome to forum dear 😊
keep writing more...


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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
So beautiful story loved it!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
It's so lovely and u wrote it beautifully 👏
Ishu is shattered. ..she witnessed her mother dying
Raman brought her back now they married 😉
Ishu made her mother's dream come true👏
Keep writing 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Its so beautiful... amezing...👏👏ishu is so shattered she witnesssd her mother daying... she call off their friendship... finally raman find her and soothe her pain ...they became soulmate... and he encourege her to fullfill her mother dream... suprb 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
A beautiful OS - I love the way you express both their emotions!!!
Best friends separated due to circumstances: misunderstanding with his mother and then she had to look after her mother!!

After her mother died she desperately needed him but she stopped herself every time she dialed his number!!!
The emotions she expressed in her diary totally broke him!!
The way you then conveyed to us the readers of this emotional story was totally amazing!!!

Loved the way he brought his mother in to try and persuade her to go home to Mumbai with them so that he can look after her and make her live her life as she is meant to!!!

He helps her to fulfill her mother's dream and she is so thankful to him and he thanks her for holding on and not giving up and making him proud of her!!!

Absolutely beautiful - looking forward to more OSs
Thank you so much for the pm!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Beautiful piece of work
Awesum OS
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Awesome OS dear...
She was completely shattered after her mother's death...
She badly wanted him to be by her side but she could not break the promise she had made to herself...
But still he came, even though she didn't call him...
and finding her lying there on the floor unconscious made him more worried...
Then after regaining consciousness he brought her with him...
Her life had become robotic until that day when she got rid of all the frustrations...
Then she fulfilled her mother's dream and he supported her fully...
Loved the OS!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you everyone for liking this story and leaving your wonderful feedback...Trust me they do mean alot to me🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fabulous os dear👏 .
Loved it.

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