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Posted: 9 years ago
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My new story

Raman:bada business man hai bahuth rude hai angry man hai vo istarh bane ka karan shagun shagun vo pyar kiya vo raman ko doka dekar ashok se shadi ki because ashok bahut ameer insan hai tab se raman ko pyar par vishwas nahi hai raman din rath mehnath karke bahuth bada business man bangaya raman ki ek dadi hai use bahuth pyar jarth hai raman ki maa baap accident me margaya tab raman ki dekh bal dadi ne ki uski bath kabi nahi daltha nd raman ek our insan ke bina nahi jiskatha vo ishita ye pyar nahi par ishita ke bina nahi reh saktha ye bath ishita ko bhi nahi patha

Ishita:simple girl hai raman ki pa hai ishita bhi akeli hai unki maa baap pachpan se margaya hai tab se unki dekh bal us chachi dekh rahi hai uski chachi bahut lalchi hai ishita ko har samay pise keliye pareshan karthi hai ek din paise ki lalag me ek budde se ishita ki sahadi karne kelie tayaae hogaye tab ishita unki chachise har riste todke ghar se bahr agye

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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 1

Ishita ghar se bahar ane ke baad friend mihir ke saath rehti hai vo uss behan manta hai mihir bhi raman ki office me kaam karth hai mihir recomndestion kiya hai office me kaam karne keliye

Mihir:didi kal office me interview hai tum tayyar rehna

Ishita: ha mihir

In office

Raman bahut gusse me office agaya nd with in second apni kabin me chala gaya

Mihir:didi aaj sir bhuth gusse me hai tum kal ana ok

Ishita:kye vo gusse me to ho me kya karsakti me interview dene bina nahi jasakti

Mihir:tik wait me bath karke atha hu

Raman pune ko bol ke tee magne ko kaha pune raman ke gusse ko dekh kar darkar tee jaldi jaldi laya raman pee ke trow tee cup tee tadi hai dosara le avo phir se tee legaya phir raman throw cup ithani jaram me nahi pivunga bahr javo yase get out ye sab ishita dekhliye usko bhi bahuth gussa aya with minit raman ki room chali gaye

Ishita :kya samj ho apne apko ha salary dediya hoto tum jo kehtha ho vo karna hai kya ek jis insan ko dekho vo tumahri umar se badi hai toda ijazzth dedo manti hu vo tumra undar kaam kartha hai iss ka ye matlab nahi ki us is tarh pareshan karte ho

Raman:wait a minit tum hoti koun ho ha mujse istarh bath karne vali get out from heare

Ishita:ungli dikha ke chup ek dam chup tum ko bauth ammer admi hai bahuth showk hai na paise hoti to sabh kuch milsaktha hai jindagi me pise importtent nahi hai mr akdu logom ki ijzzath karna siko vo sabse badi doulath

Raman:smils at her pheli bar ek ladki mere samne ungli utake bath ki uski ankon jara sa bhi dar nahi hai iss ke bad kya halth hogi iski not bad manpadega miss what ever mujhe chup karne wali pheli ladki ho tum me tumhe ithni asani se yase jane nahi donga

In mean time mihir cabin aya ishita raman ki saf safaya karthi ye dekh ke ishita ko rokh ne jaraha hai

M:didi tum kye kar rahe ho vo compeny ki boss hai

Ishita:ha to company boss he hai na me pati todi hai

Raman:shock nd smils

M:didi chup ho ja

Ishita:me kye chup karu vo mr ravan ko bol do vo galat karli me usko samjha hu

M:sorry sir meri didi tarf se me mafi magti hu vo mere kehne par aye hai me hamri company me job keliye once agin sorry sir

Ishita:tum kye sorry bolti ho iss akdu ko vo galath kali hai vo sorry bolna chaye na iss ancle se

ishita gose to raman stand beside him tho chalo chup chap good boy ki tarah ancle se sorry bole varna mujh ko gussa athi hai

raman see ishita continusly nd smils at her

m:didi tum chalo yaha se

raman:sorry mujhe maf kar do mr sharma

mihir :shock hogaya phelibar raman sorry bola

ishita :raman ko tighly hug kiya that like good boy tum achhe bache ho

m:tu yaha chal

raman:wait mihir

m:kya sir

raman:tum ko iss keliya job chaheye na to tum kya us ko kye leke gate ho

m:sir vo

ishita:ek mint mihir me bath karti hu so mr ravan me yaha kam karne keliya aya par mere samne kisi bhi galti karte hu dekha me bardash nahi karunga vo insan bhagvan bhi ho me nahi bardash karunga so tum mere samne us ancle ko tum pareshan kar raha tha me bardash nahi karpaya so tum ko left nd right dediya tab me samj gaya ki mera yaha koi kaam nahi hogi mujhe koi farkh nahi padta tum tumari galthi manli mujhe bahuth bada kushi hogi aaj se pise se nahi toda insaniyat siko nd hug him nd raman ko bhi pata nahi nd he also hug har back good bye mr ravan

mihir me chalthi hi sham ko ghar jaldi ana hum movie pe chalte hai

raman:ek minit ruko tum kise ne pata me tum ko job nahi dedha me tum ko job diya meri PA ki post salary 25000

mihir tum bhar jake joinig letter lekar avo

m:ji sir

raman:tumko kab se office join karte ho

i:tum ko athraj na hoto abhi jon kartha hu

raman:tum ko pa ka matlab samj hai kaya

i:ho halo me lkg nahi padi me mba pura kiya mere ko gold medal bhi diya me har class me first tum ko pata hai

r:smils at har childish behevir nahi pata

i:ho sorry mera certificate tum ko nahi dikhaya lo dekho meri cf

r:good me manliya to so aaj se tum mera pa ho me jaha jatha hu tum vaha ana ahi me

ishita:ho halo mujh ko pata hai me kya karna hai nd ye bath nahi tumhari akdu behevir ko bhi me chenga kartha hu samji

raman:tum meri behevior badalodi in your drema miss

i:ishita

i:ishita aur thumhar naam ravan

r:raman

mihir join letter ishita ko dediya ishita us par sign kar karli nd sir me abhi aap ki pa hu

r:shock sir abhi tak tum ravan akdu bola abhi kya hoga

i:vo kya hai na tab me tumhri company me join nahi huva na issliye me vhi bola me ab join karli to ye sab achha nahi hoga to isliye sir tho sir muje kya karna hai

raman:tum muje sir se jyada raman bolti ho achha hotha hai

ishita:sach me tum ko athraj nahi me name se bola tho

raman:smils at her nahi

ishita:hugs him tigtly thank u ravan

raman:hey ravan nahi nd said hug har

ishita:sorry raman hugs him tightly


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi dear
Very nice story 👏👏👏
Ishut is so cute and little childish
She treat raman as a school boy like scolding,saying good boy and hugging ...sooo cheweet 😉
Raman keep smiling at her and gave her job as a PA😃
When raman says sorry to sharma mihir is shocked like he saw a ghost 😆😆😆
Continue soon
Thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome
update soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 2

Mihir:sir meri didi ki tarf se mafi magti tu vo dil ki achhi hai sir

Raman :kye kya huva uske sath

M:uski maa baap us chotisi umar me margaye sir tab se ye akela pan buljane ke liye ye istah badal gaya sir par vo nahi sir us chachi paise kelie ek budde se shadi karne jarah tha tab ishita unlog se rista todke mere paas wapas agaya vo dil ki achhi hai sir

Raman:shock nd sad for her halath tum fhikar math kar mihir mujh ko bhi pata vo achhi hai isliye me usko mera PA post diya vo bhi mujh ko sambal sakthi

M:shock raman ko ithni silent bath karte huye kabhi nahi dekha

In mean time ishita andar agaye raman meri jagha kaha hai mera kaam batovona mujh se bor ho raha hai

Raman:mihir ishita ki teble meri cabin me rakh dena vo mera sath kaam karegi

M:ji sir

Raman ishita ko company ki bare me usko kya karna hai nd uski dushman us company sari details sab kuch bata diya hai ishita listen carefully

Raman:tum samj gaye na

Ishita :ha raman

Raman :ok kaam shuru karte hai mera new progect vo hamko kisibhi tarh milna chaheye

Nd vo dono kaam pe lag gaya ishita raman ko simple metods diya hai jis se raman impress hogaya vobhi nahi project ki cotetion bhi asanise poori karli vo bhi kam bujet me raman ko puri yakin hogi iss project mere company ko milegi

Raman finish work karrah hai is samye me ishita kane ko leke raman ko bhi lekar aye

Ishita :ravan come kana kate hai mere ko jorse bhukh lagi hai

Raman:mujhe nahi kana tum kavo me nahi kavunga

Ishita:kye kya huva book nahi lagi

Raman:me time pe nahi katha hu mere jab man karth hai tab me katha hu

Ishita:ho tho ab se tum time pe kavogi me aya hu na me tumko roj time kana kilatha hu

Raman:raman similes at her

Ishita:ishita kane ko plate pakad ke raman ke pass chali gaye tum tumhari kaam karo me tujhe kilati hu muh kolo

Raman:silent

Ishita:muh kolo raman open his mouth ishita raman ko khana kilaya raman kaam se jaya important sehath hai tum health nahi hoto tum kam kise karpavo gi kam ke sath health par toda dhan rako ok

Raman:nods raman ki ankom me ansu ana shuhogaya mujhe kya hogaya ishita ko milne 4 jante nahi hu me uspe pori tarh dipend hogaya hu us harbath mantha hu mujhe kya hogaya mere ko kuch samajh nahi arah hai

Next ishita uski lunch poori karli

Ishita nd ramam sab project pori karli nd ab ghar jane ki bari

Ishita :so ravan me jatha hu time hojaya

Raman:ithani jaldi

Ishita:ho helo rath 9 bajh gaye hai ithani jaldi hai tum ko ha ok ye sab chodo mujhe ladneki bilkul mood nahi hai mujhe neend athi hai so me chalti hu kal subh milte hai bye hugs raman nd said good night

Raman hugs her back nd said gud night

Ishita:mihir chalona please

M:ek minit didi atha hu

Mihir ishita ghar chale gaye raman apna ghar

Raman reach home sit dining table subh ki ishita ki yaad kar ke hasna shurukiya ithna haas raha hai ki dadi bhi nend se oot gaya

Dadi:raman ko dekh ke bahuth kushi hogi raman ithani salio ke baad haste huye dekh ke vo abhi purani raman jaisa dikh raha hai

Dadi:puttar kya hogaya tum kya hans rahe ho

Raman:ishita dadi ishita ki yaad karte mujhe hansana rukh nahi araha hai

Dadi:ishita vo koun hai puttar

Raman sab kuch bata diya dadi ko vo mujhe ravan bulati dadi

Dadi:hahahahahahahah ravan sahi naam rakh hai tum ko manna padeka pheli bar meri putta ko takkar ki ladki mili

Raman:ha dadi vo mujhe bilkul nahi darti balki mujse ungli utake ankome ankh dalke bath karhi hai dadi vo bilkul jansi rani dadi meri jansi ki rani

Dadi: raman kiankome ishita keliye spark dekh ke dadi man me ek idea agaya me ek baath puchu ishita ki shaddi hogaye kya

Raman:nahi dadi vo bhi meri tarh anaad hai unko koi bhi nahi hai mere ko aap jaise ho unki mihir hai bas

Dadi : raman me usse milna hai please us ko hamra ghar lekar avona please

Raman:me kalhi unko lekar atha hu gud night dadi

Dadi:he matha rani phelibar mere pote ko istani kushi se dekh raha hu please unse us kushi ko nahi chen na ishita ko raman ki patni banna chahti hu mujh ko madad karna me ishita ko iss ghar ki bahu ban ke rahuga vo hi raman ko iss ghar ko sambal sakthi hai mujhe iss kaam me safal hone de maa

Raman:raman ko neend nahi arah hai raman ishita yaad araha hai raman tujh ko kya hogaya tum iss tarh kabhi nahi beheve kartha par aaj hi tu achanak pagal hogaye ho kya ishita se baath karke bina need nahi ayegi tumko ek kaam kartha hu ishita ko phone kartha hu time 12am iss time me ishita sogaye hogi nani koi bath nahi mujh se baath karthi hai vo

Ishita phone rigna

Ishita:halo ravan bol kya chaheye

Raman:tum soye nahi ab tak

Ishita:ye bath puchne keliye tum phone kiya hai

R:nahi tumse bath karne keliye

I:kaho ek minit ruko me diwar chad jane ki badh tum se baath karthi hu

R:diwar diwar kya chadna hai

I:ho ho ravan mujhe ice cream kan hai mihir ko pucha use kal lekar aye ga mere ko abhi kana hi to me subbu ko lekar ice cream lene keliye jaraha hu

Raman:subbu vo koun hai ishita ki muh se subbu ki naam leke jelouse feel horaha hai

Raman:ishita ek minit vaha raho me abhi atha hu tum ko ice cream me diltha hu

Ishita:sachhi

Raman:muchhi

Raman ishita ghar chala gaya bas ye conform karne ki subbu koun hai

Raman:ishita avo ham chalte hai

Ishita:ek minit ruko me subbu ko lekar atha hu

Raman:subbu ki naam sun ke raman ko bahuth gussa agaya ishita me agaya hu na tum subbu ko ghar bejho me huna

Iahita:nahi raman vo mujh se tumhari ane takh mere ko protact kiya me nahi bejh saktha unko nd goes tree brings dog

Ishita:ye raha subbu meri pet meri payri subbu kaisa laga

Raman:kutta ko dekh ke relif hogaya tum subbu kaha vo ye hai kutta

Ishita:ha tum kyn samjhta admi

Raman :nahi nd hugs her tightly chal ice cream kane

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice and sweet
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb
Update Soon
Thanks 4 The PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update
Raman is liking ishitas company
Ishita makes raman eat raman with her hand
Ishita is really jkr
Raman was laughing thinking about ishita
Dadi wants ishita to get married with raman
Raman got jealous of subbu but it turns out dog
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice story lovely ...cntn sooonnn ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb update..i just loved it...too good...
it is different but i liked raman char a lot in this story..

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