Wadi-e-Ishq se aea hai mera shahzada...Chapter#1(pg#4)

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Hey guys here is the teaser of my new FF.


TEASER

In Benaras:
Ishita:Amma mn mandir ja rhi hun.
Amma:Acha beti dyan se jana.

Ishita leaves for mandir.On the way she was stopped by some boys.

One boy:Are yar yeh pure Benaras ki sab se sundar(beautiful) larki hai lekin is ne humein kabhi lift hi nai krai.
Second boy:Arey sundar hai isi lie to itne nahre krti hai.

Ishita is very nervous and shivering as she was very afraid.

Ishita:Mujhe Jana hai baghwan ke liye hmein jane do.
One boy(seems like their leader):Acha abhi to jane dete hn lekin kisi din tumhara aisa hal krein ge ke tum kisi ko moon(face) dikhane ke kabil nhi rho gi.

Ishita leaves but she is very afraid from them as they always disturb her.Ishita comes to mandir and start praying.

Ishita:Baghwan ji hum ap se chahte hn ke ap hmara is param se peecha churwa dein.Wo hamesha hmein tang krta hai.Aur ap hmare amma appa ko lambhi zindagi di jie aur unhein hmesha khush rkhein.Amma appa ko hmari shadi ki bht chinta hai to hmari yeh pratna hai ke jo bhi hmara jeevan sathi ho wo hmein jald mil jae.
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On the other hand,In DELHI:

Raman:Mama mn ja rha hun mihir mera intezaar kr rha ho ga.
Mama:Acha puttar pr yeh ek tasveer hai is ko dekh lo.
Raman:Kis ki pic hai?
Mama:Beta wo tere lie ek larki (before she completes)
Raman:Mama mn tang aa gaea hun in tasveerun se waise bhi mujhe abhi shadi nhi krni.

Saying this,he leaves.Mrs.Bhalla worries.He went to Mihir.Mihir is waiting for him in the car.He sits in car.Mihir start driving.

Mihir:Kia hua Raman itne upset kyun ho?
Raman:Yar Mihir mama ne phir ek larki ki tasveer dikhai. šŸ˜•
Mihir(taunting): To hua phir,,,,Love at first sight,,,tasveer se?
Raman(upset):No yar yeh love at first sight wagaira kuch nhi hota.Waise bhi koi bhi aurat mujh jaisa itna unromantic pati nhi chahe gi.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting
But Banaras is not a village
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congrats for new one interested
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Originally posted by: cutieruhi

Interesting

But Banaras is not a village


First of all Thanks...and I saw benaras in a serial and they were saying it is a village that's why I thought may be it is a village.Actually I am not from India so I don't know anyways thanks for telling.
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Nice start .
Cont soon .
Bytge way Varanasi is not village but a city soon going to be metropol.
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Nice starting
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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very interesting continue soon and pm me when u update nxt parts.
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nice one
cont soon
thanks for pm
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Hi everyone...My papers are going to start pray for me...Anyways I decided to update Chapter #1before them...


CHAPTER#1



Raman:Mama you know what aj bht mza aea?
Mrs.Bhalla:Kyun puttar aisa kya hua?
Raman:Mama aj mujhe ek naea contract mil gaea aur phir mn aur Mihir us ke ghar gae whan Mihika ne bht maze ka khana banaea tha...Phir whan mn kafi der ruka...Bht mza aea.
Mrs.Bhalla:Acha...Mujhe lga shahid koi larki...
Raman(angrily):Mama you always think about that...
Mrs.Bhalla:Raman Mihir tujh se sirf 2 saal bra hai aur ab tu wo baap bhi bnane wala hai aur tu...tu ne abhi tak koi larki hi pasand nhi ki...
Raman:Whatever...

Raman leaves.Mrs.Bhalla worries.

On the other hand,Ishita is cleaning her room.suddenly she hears

Amma:Ishita khana bna lo.
Ishita:Ji amma.

Ishita went to kitchen.She start preparing ingredients for meal.Amma enters in kitchen.

Amma:Ishu Vandita aur Bala a rhe hn.Vandita pait se hai (she is pregnant) to khane mn mirchi kam rkhna.
Ishita:Akka aa rhi hn?Bht mza ae ga.

Amma leaves.Ishita was also washing dishes and plates.She seems happy as she loves her sister very much.

On the other hand,Raman is sitting alone in his room.

Raman(self-thought):Mn mama ko kaise samjhaun ke mujhe shadi nhi krni abhi.Yeh larkian ek jaisi hoti hn.Jaise wo thi.

Suddenly Neelu enters.

Neelu:Bhai ji wo ap ko Santosh ji khane bula rhi hn.
Raman:Mama se kho mn ata hun.
Neelu:Ji Bhai.

Neelu leaves.Raman after taking bath also leaves for dinner.When he reach the dinner.Everyone was waiting for him.After sometime they start eating.After having some talk everyone went to their rooms.Raman wear his sleeping suit and start reading a book.It was for the people who were Heart broken.While reading a book the tears were rolling down from his eyes.He read the book and clean his tears.

Raman:No need Raman...To cry for a person who does not know the value of your tears.

On the other hand,Vandita comes to Iyer house.Ishita hug her.Amma and Appa also meet Bala and Vandita.

Ishita:Akka bacha hilta hua mehsoos hota hai?
Vandita:Han ishu kick bhi karta hai.

Ishita smiles 😃 .Vandita and Bala have meal.They had talk.Ishita went to kitchen to make coffee.Vandita also comes.

Ishita:Akka ap aisi halt mn yhan kyun ae?Chalo ap bhr ja kr bhaitho.
Vandita:Acha ishu.Mn jati hun pr mujhe yeh pochna tha...aaa
Ishita:Akka...Kia hua?...Akka...Ammma(shouting)

Amma comes.

Amma:Kia hua Ishu?
Ishita;Dekhie na amma Akka ko kia ho rha hai?
Ammma:Aye o ishu hmein ise hospital le ke jana chahie.
Ishita:Ji amma.

They leave for hospital.

Mrs.Bhalla come to Raman's room.Raman was sleeping.She sits on bed.She touches Raman.

Mrs.Bhalla:Arey ise to itna sahat buhar hai.Raman...Raman...

Raman did not wake up.She calls Mr.Bhalla.

Mr.Bhalla:Arey challie toshi Raman ko hospital le ke jana cahaie.

They also leave for hospital.

Ishita,Amma,Vandita,Bala and Appa reach hospital.Doctors take Vandita to Operation Theatre. Everyone worries.

Amma:Aye o murghan meri vandu ki raksha krna.
Appa:Fikr mat kro Madu hamari Vandu ko kuch nhi ho ga.

Mrs.Bhalla,Mr.Bhalla and Raman reach hospital.Ward boy ask them to brought a medicine.

Mrs.Bhalla went to chemist.Bala was also there with Ishita.Mrs.Bhalla gave the prescription to chemist.Bala also ask for medicine.

Mrs.Bhalla:Kya hua puttar?
Bala:Ji wo meri biwi pregnant hai aur us ka operation hai.
Mrs.Bhalla:Chalo mata rani kare teri biwi aur bacha khair khairiat se hun.
Ishita:Chalein jiju.

Mrs.Bhalla see Ishita and really likes her.Bala and Ishita leaves.Mrs.Bhalla also leaves.

Precap:
Mrs.Bhalla start investigating about Ishita. 😊


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Edited by ishra.asha - 9 years ago
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intersting ...mrs .bhalla strtd jasoosi ...

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