New TS-YOU BELONG TO ME....Last part on pg 53 nd note on pg 54..on 8/5

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Lakshmi.divan

@Lakshmi.divan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Tanu...really its soo interesting story...raman n shagun are lovers and as always shagun is cheating raman...hope raman'll find the true colors of shagun n throw her out 4m his life and starts loving ishita...n thanx 4 d pm...

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nahtani88

@nahtani88

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Really Interesting

Update Soon

Thanks 4 The PM

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lakshmi

@maduragymhasium

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

superb update dear

interestingly going on dear

shagun is too much dear for me she is just omitted part

raman is too good

ishu is in love with raman nice dear

just love ishra scenes dear both are so comfortable

their laugh together

just love raman initiate some steps to talk first dear

little teasing

ishu blushes

ishra hug too good dear

continue soon dear

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anisha960

@anisha960

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

lovely story tanu
ishu a nerd
n raman too popular
but he is good at heart
so both doing a project together
he hugged her aw we
continue soonish

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--HANISA--

@--HANISA--

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

congrats for new ss love the skech character too

name Ek duje ke liye

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lonelyyyy

@lonelyyyy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

nice start
loving this story so much
do cont soon

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nafnaf

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Hi Tanu I am so sorry but I read this at work in my lunch and did not have enough time to comment as I had to go back to work"!!!!

I was just going to be when I remembered that I had not commented on this so here I am!!!!!!

It was a great concept - I loved it!!!!

Ishita a nerd, Raman a jock and of course Shagun what else but a "play girl"!!!!!😡

I love that you are giving all three POVs

Poor Ishu being bullied by Raman and by Shagun!!!!

It was funny and sad when Raman picked Ishita's name out of the hat fro project partner and asked who is "Ishita"????? and Sir asked Ishita to put her hand up and he saw that it was the Nerd!!!!!!!

Just then the bell goes and she runs away!!!!!!!!!!

Raman calls her "hey Nerd Girl" and gives her his address so that she can come over for the project!!!!

At lunch time he feels sorry for her when Shagun pours her milk all over her head!!! and when Shagun calls her nerd girl he corrects her and says her name is Ishita!!!!!

Ishita gets excited going to Raman's big mansion to work on the project together!!!

His mum invites her in and she likes her!!!

Ishra work on the project - she suggest an idea for it and he agrees yayyy!!!!

After they finish he invites her to stay and chat with him and have snacks together!!!

They chat and become friends - so cute!!!!

when she is leaving he hugs her and she is on top of the world!!!!

This story is going in just the right direction please continue soon and thank you so much for the pm!!!!!!

Oh gosh it's almost 2 o'clock I have to go to sleep now or else will have problems waking up for work tomorrow!!!!!!!🥱😆

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attitudequeen17

@attitudequeen17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Divanru
Res .yipee me first
Unres .Nice CS .
But this shagunia again .ok no worries .
I know she will disappear after one or two updates .
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Rang Jo laagyo
Ek duje ke vaaste

Thnaks pooja di

will surely think about this names...

yup!! soon she will disappear

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attitudequeen17

@attitudequeen17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Sri1091
Intresting character sketch Raman bullying ishu and Raman and Shagun are lovers and Shagun as usual cheating Raman loved it

Thanks Sri

glad u liked it😊