Song OS thon #2/2 Epilogues by Divanru on pg 144 on 19/5

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nafnaf

@nafnaf

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Posted: 9 years ago

#451

TUJHE CHAHOON BETHASAH - an awesome update!!!!

So sweet Ishra working in the same company very close to each other!!!!

Their friendship is beautiful!!!

They share their happiness and their sorrows with each other!!!!

And they buy a car together - that is so cute!!!!

Going for a long drive

Sharing a bhutta together standing under a tree!!!

Enjoying a beautiful dance to a most beautiful song!!!

And that kiss - wow!!!!!

And finally he proposes to her and she says it's about time she thought she would get old before he ever did it!!!!!😆

She wants to enjoy these moments and not have to worry about what their parents will say!!!!

A wonderful OS I loved - it would be nice to have a epilogue pleeeaaase!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????????🤗

Thank you so much for the pm!!!!!!!!!!

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Rkchinju

@Rkchinju

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Posted: 9 years ago

#452

Wow...wow...Raksha dear ..
Such a cute OS ...
song was superb
perfectly written..
totally loved it..
keep writing

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aasiyajain

@aasiyajain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#453

reaaly love all the os di plz cont boond boond 👏

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rufana

@rufana10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#454

@cutieruhi

lovely OS di
ishita was a receptionist in raman's office...
ishra didn't talk much but secretly they loved
each other...
raman liked her down casted eyes and smile...
he was possessive for her...
liked ishita's innocent questions when raman
scolded her in d car...
ishra car scene was nice...
both were lost in each other...
she wore blue dress as it was his fav color...
raman started to pick and drop ishita from her house..
appa agreed for ishra marriage...
and finally they confessed their love...
sweet and simple OS ❤️
loved it...

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Malvika

@mayraa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#455

@cuteruhi

Awesome story

Lovely song one of my favorite

Loved their silent love

Ishra love each other but both didn't voice out their feelings

They love each other silently

Thank you appa for looking alliance for ishu

Because of you ishra confess their feelings to each other

Wow appa agree for ishra's marriage

Ishra scene on her bedroom was so romantic😳

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florine_20

@florine_20

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#456

@raksha- very cute story. loved it

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florine_20

@florine_20

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Posted: 9 years ago

#457

@ divanru- Zehanaseeb was awesome.

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Roohachu

@Roohachu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#458

@Cutieruhi
Aap naaraz ho mujhse?
Pls don't be angry na...
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Main update ke baare mein kya bataun Di
It was more than awesome
I just loved it loads.
Waise Raman jeeju ne ek aadmi ke baare mein kaha na who said the sister that I Love U sister
Ab sister ne kya jawaab Diya hoga?
I Love U too Brother🤣
Arrey itni achi joke sunaayi mainae zara muskura to loh madam.
Chalo ek aur baath kehti hoon
Dekhte hai aap kitni der mujhse naaraz rahegi
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Padloon jo baath chupa hai
teri jhuki nazron mein
Kehdoon jo baath adka hai
meri iss zubaan pe

Pyaar karte hai hum
teri har ek ada se
Aur fida hai hum
tujhpe meri jaan bepanah

Teri har ek jhalak humse
yeh keh toh rahi hai
Tum bhi karte hai humse
bepanaah mohabbath

Zara ek baar ikraar
karke toh dekho
Hum ho jaayenge paagal
Khushi se
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Ab bhi naaraz ho?
Chalo main bhi seriously baath karti hoon
Sabse pehle aap keliye ek tight huggy 🤗
This is one of my most favorite songs
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N about the update
I really loved it Di
My most fav parts are
1.Raman close his file and said looking at her-i so want to tuck ur hair behind ur ears ishita.u know u look beautiful when ur eyes r down casted,like u r blushing making my heart skip a beat.u know I believe that u love me the way I love u.but tum kuch kehti hi nahi.hamesha chup chup.par main janta hoon,u love me like I do.tum chahe khamosh raho par tumhari jhuki hui nazare ,tumhare dil ka haal bayaan kar deti hai.

Raman talking to Ishita by looking at her image in his CCTV. That was just beautiful. I so loved that scene
2.Ishita- I love u sir.

Raman- dhat Teri ki.yeh toh sahi baat hui,ek aadmi ne ek nurse se kaha,I love u sister. I have a nice name, Raman.say I love u Raman.then I will tell u a good news.

This moment was just hilarious.

N I love Appa sooo much

Jhat se maan liya shaadi keliye. Kaise nahin maanegi meri jeeju hai hi itni sweet n handsome.
Mr & Mrs. Bhalla they're sweetest. Bete ne apni love story bataya hi nahin. Woh log ladki dekhne keliye aagayi.
How sweet parents?
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The bus stop scene that followed by scolding n crying was also superb Di
N then followed by the romance chotusa hai phir bhi that was beautiful
N the way he asked her about Y r u wearing blue dress?
Hayee main marjaawa
I know that was also a chotu moment
But that was just beautiful
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Agle din konsi kaam keliye aaya tha sir ji wahan pe
Mujhe pata hai unki kaam
N then again he satrted to pick her up n dropping her near her house
Nice jesture
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Aur when Ishu approached Raman crying that her Appa is going to fix her marriage
He consoling her was sooo cute
N a cry baby Ishu is too cute Di
N finally Ilove U Rakshu Diii🤗