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gargpoo

@gargpoo

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Its really awesome...
He wants her in his life..
Ishita is also confused abt her feelings for him..
Both r getting attached to each other..
Bench scene ws superb...that ws so emotional wen he said don't leave me...he is so vunerable..
Omg she kissed him on cheek n he saw it..
Can't wait for next
Update soon.

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Sunita

@avni_19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

woowww!! Beautiful and heart warming story. Im sorry for the delay in liking n commenting. I was having exams. Just got free yesterday.

Im loving this story. I wonder how n when will Ruhi come!

Cont soon!

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nafnaf

@nafnaf

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

My dear Gaya you are doing an absolutely wonderful job with this story!!!!!!!

I love it so much!!!!

You are capturing both their emotions and thoughts so accurately!!!

Oh wow it is sooo amazing!!!!

Loved the morning scene Raman yearning to see Ishita and vise versa!!!

He does not even realise that he has spilled his tea all over himself and burnt himself!!!!!!

When he looks at their picture frame and regrets that he did not look at her then!!!!

He is desperately hoping she will come out to the bench at night again!!!

She comes and sees him crying and talking to the picture - she puts her hand on his shoulder and he hugs her hand to his heart and pleads for her never to leave him!!!! Aaaww so sweet and sad at the same time!!!!!

When he leaves he forgets the frame on the bench and she says: he was talking to me!!!!!!!!!!

Next morning she has an excuse to go and see him!!!! After leaving the frame on the couch she cannot help but go close to him and caress his face and then kiss him on the cheek!!!!!😳He catches her - oh no!!!!!!!!!!!

Please update soon - eagerly awaiting the outcome!!!!!!!!

Thank you so much for the pm!!!🤗