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abha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Res...

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Ohhh my god gayu...yeh ek dum hatke h re baba...tu kahan se lasyi yeh concept...

i had a stupid grin on my face all time...

They two are unique...i mean they did it and didnt know about each other...and Raman out of her beauty and attraction started liking her ...and thus accepted baby to destroy baby...🤣

poor mihika got a slap for valid reason...i mean i think raman really liked her...and so cute otherwise like ishu said i am pregnant it was so heartless i mean on first night...

Awww child is Ramsn's ...Hope nothing happens to their baby.

But i think next what will follow will be super fun and comedy...

Awesome yar...

This is so funny...

Continue soon...No late updates...like u started with kid one and raman memory loss one...but kya fayda...u will not update soon i know...

chal get well soon...

see i gave longish comment...

Now want long reply...😆

Edited by --abha-- - 9 years ago

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Ishrasoul

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

res 😉😆😆

unres

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OMG...

gaya... its exceptional...👏⭐️

so raman wants to spend time with shagun...

ashok spike ishita drink...😡

and what happened...

ishra get their moment...😳

but they did not remember each other... right...😉😆

shagun is just.. sadist🤢

raman wants to kill the baby???😲

what will he do when he knw that its his baby...

then he will be guilt kumaar...

i hope he will know soon...

lovely ff...

update soon dear

love you...🤗

Edited by ishrasoul - 9 years ago

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Updated the first part
Enjoy reading...
Please do leave your feedbacks 😳

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Roohachu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

first. of all sry for not commenting on prologue.
I was really confused after reading it n I was too lazy to cmnt.

prologue n this update both r really shocking.

concept is mindblowing

well when Raman gets to know the truth what will be his reaction?

n shagun she is disgusting. money minded woman

ab bechara ashok ko Raman kya karnewaali hai?

I've this gut feeling that Raman will kill ashok if he ever see him again.

poor ashok,

n gayadii pls bache ko bachalo

Edited by AshmiShahul - 9 years ago

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mamtasingla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

awesome update

ishita wants to keep baby

raman accept the baby😲

thnks fr pm

Edited by mamtasingla - 9 years ago

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abha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Unres pg 12😳

i know i am super fast...

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Mdwst

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Gayu ...
Shagun Raman well they were physical but she was not preggy at all.. But ramen thinks she is
Raman is now married to Ishu but she is pregnant Ashok's child, that's what she thinks
Ashok did spike her drink.. But had to leave to London... So it was Raman and ishu
But both slept to together not knowing their respective partners.. She was drugged and he was drunk ... Ishu is preg with Ramans child..
There are lot of lines I liked... Gutter ofcourse...
Loved it

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Gaya3sb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Mdwst
Gayu ... Clear my confusion
Shagun Raman well they were physical but she was not preggy at all.. But ramen thinks he is
Remember us now married yo Ishu but she is pregnant Ashok's child.
I thought I read.. That he did spike her drink.. But had to leave to London... So was it Raman and Ishu?
But to Ishu it's Ashok

Viji..
Raman and Shagun were living together. But she wasn't preggy.
Coming to your confusion, it was Raman and Ishita who were in the suit but both thinks the other as Shagun (4Raman) and Ashok (4 Ishu)
Finally...Ishu is preggy with Raman's baby 😆