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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

I was already in love with this song.. now u used it with these 2.. I'll go crazy

waiting for next!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: nahtani88
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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: ladyprincess
I was already in love with this song.. now u used it with these 2.. I'll go crazy
waiting for next!

same here I m loving this song
thanks for liking it .

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: rnarayan
Good start

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Lovely part dear😃

Raman got to know about Ishitha's drama😲

And he doesn't give a chance for ishitha to explain😭

After all he's the arrogant RKB nuh😕

Please continue soon can't wait to read the next part 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

congrats on your first story dear

its awesome...

liked that raman was angry on her...

title... the song you used: agar tum saath ho

update soon

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Originally posted by: 9900
Lovely part dear😃
Raman got to know about Ishitha's drama😲
And he doesn't give a chance for ishitha to explain😭
After all he's the arrogant RKB nuh😕
Please continue soon can't wait to read the next part😃

thanks dear
I will update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: ishrasoul
congrats on your first story dear
its awesome...

liked that raman was angry on her...

title... the song you used: agar tum saath ho
update soon
thanks for pm

thank you so much
I was thinking the same thanks for suggestion
and Welcome back

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Thank You So much For your Appreciation .It means alot

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Here is the 2nd part .Do read it and give your comments .

Ishita puttar Tu kyun ro rahi hai .
Mrs.Bhalla asked in worry .Puttar tu Maat ro sab theek hojye ga .Meinu pata hai puttar Tu bhot takleef mein hai per tu preshaan na ho .Hum sab tere saath hein .
Thank you Mamiji.Ishita hugged Mrs.Bhalla and cried.
Puttar Raman kethey Aye .
Mamiji wo Kisi kaam se gaye hein .
Accha chal fir Hum ghar chaltey hein Raman Aapey Ajaye ga.

They went home .
Neelu Acchi se chaey Bana sab k liye .Mrs Bhalla ordered her .
Aye Raman Kethey reh gia .Mr.Bhalla asked from Mrs.Bhalla.
papaji Raman bhai tu kabke aa gaye hein wo apne kamrey mein hein.
Neelu Said this after hearing their convo.
Everyone was surprised .
After hearing this ishita went to her room .
Raman was standing there .Ishita try to speak with him but after he saw ishita he went into washroom.
Ishita knocked the door
Raman pls meri baat suney .Raman pls Listen to me .I know app muhjse bhot naraz hein but raman pls Give me a chance for explanation .
Raman did not responded .He was Crying inside the wash and Ishita was Crying Outside .

At That moment ishita Decided to Tell the truth to whole family.
She thought Isse pehley K saab ghar walon ko kisi aur se sachai pata ! Muhje khud hi un ko bata deni chaye .

She went into Hall
Everyone was Present there except raman and Children.
Mamiji , papaji muhje app sab ko kuch batana hai .
Ki gaal hai puttar ?Sab theek hai na Mrs.Bhalla asked in tension.
Mamiji muhje ap sabko Batana hai k ...
Kya batana hai puttar Mr.bhalla Asked
Muhje batana hai k... Muhje mein Shagun ki aatma nhi thi .
Aye ki keh rahi hai tu ishita Mrs.bhalla asked .
Everyone was Shocked
In a meanwhile Raman came and said
Mama Ishita ka kehne ka Matlab hai k ab iss mein shagun ki atma nhi rahi .
Baba ji ne bola hai k ab shagun ki atma ka asar kamzoor horaha hai ishita par .
Sachi puttar aye te bhot channgi Gaal aye .MataRaani da shukar hai saab theek hogia .
Everyone was Happy except Ishra .

Ishra went into their Room.
Raman apne Mamiji ko aise kyun bola mein unhe sach batana chati thi .
Tum yeh maat samjh lena k meine aise iss liye Bola kyunke Mein nhi chata tha k Sab tumse naraz hoon bilke meine aisa iss liye kaha kyunke Wo sab tumhari waja se pehle hi Bhot kuch bardasht kar chukey hein meine nhi chata k ek dum se dobara unhe ek aur Shock miley .
App Jitna bhi Chapa lo I know raman app nhi chatey k ghar waley Muhjse naraz hoon .Ishita Speak to herself in her heart.

Raman pick His Pillow and blanket and shifted to Coach .
Raman App Wahan na so Apki peet mein dard hoga .Mein wahan so jati hoon.
Raman did not listen her and kept his pillow there .He start to Act like he was sleeping but In real he was crying.
Ishita was on bed and Raman on coach/sofa. Both were Restless .
They were trying to sleep but Could not do so.Both eyes were filled with tears.

Din pareshan hai..
Raat bhari hai
Din pareshan hai..
Raat bhari hai
Zindagi hai khel..
Phir bhi pyari hai
Kya thamasha hai..
Kab se jaari hai

Iss kahani ko..
Kaun rokhe ga
Umr yeh saari..
Kaun soche ga

Beqarari si beqarari hai
Beqarari si.. beqarari hai
Zindagi hai khel..
Phir bhi pyari hai
Din pareshan hai..
Raat bhari hai
So here is the 2nd part .Next Part would be probably last part .
Do read it and pls ignore the typos mistakes .And pls give your precious comments

Edited by Divan-holic - 9 years ago

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