ff - BABY BROTHER _ (updated last and final part on page 146)

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this is my first ff pleas reply if u liked it or not. & sorry for my bad english lol.
it was night. all the family were going to sleep. Raman entered his bedroom after dinner. He was hell tired after office work and meetings. Plus he was upset that he lost a business deal today. but he forgot all his worries when he saw ishita and adi sitting on bed. ishita was busy consoling adi.
"what happened?" asked raman. adi looked scared. he didnt answer his papas question. raman came near adi and turned his face towards him. raman was shocked to see adis face full of bruises and a black eye.
" he fought again in school?" raman questioned ishita?
" how many times have i told u not to fight " raman shouted and raised his hand on adi.
"no raman no..." said ishita wrapping her hands around adi... " dont beat my son"
". u r the one spoiling him" said raman
". i am sorry ishima adi said sobbing on ishitas chest. those boys were bullying her. i tried to save her. "
"I know i know" ishita hugged her darling son closer kissing his head.
" raman, he saved a girl from bullies. dont scold him."
raman was still angry. "Is this the way to save anybody? by fighting?"
adi started crying. ishita gave a serious look to raman. raman knew the meaning of that look from his beloved wife. "Ok ok he said as he sat down near the bed near adi and ishita and lifted adis face from his mothers chest. ". adi listen i know u may hav done the right thing because ur ishima is supporting u ... " he said looking lovingly at his wife and son and continued ..." but adi u shouldnt give ishima any tension at this time when she is pregnant. u r a big boy now u should be taking care of her." adi nodded his head "sorry ishima i will never repeat it "". adi helped shita get up with much strain from the bed and he told her to sleep and said he cant wait for next week as ishimas due date is next week and said goodnight to his unborn baby brother and ishima . ...
ishita watched raman remove his shoes and coat and throw it away. what is wrong with u raman? y r u so angry? i have talked to adis school principal everything is fine. raman was about to blast at ishita when he saw her huge tummy and her strugling to arrange the pillows to sleep on her side. raman became calm. if there is anything in the world that could calm down ravan kumar was his and ishitas baby. raman rushed to help ishita with the pillows. he made surr she is comfortable. i will change and come he said going to the washroom. when raman came back ishu was starting to sleep. she woke up hearing the sound when he got into bed with her. lying down next to her from behind he snuggled upto her and put his arms around her chest and tummy. he moved up her kurti and felt her naked baby belly. he felt his baby move inside his wife and felt blissful. this pregnancy is precious and this child is a miracle child. he again felt the baby move hard. he is kicking u so much today he whispered to his sleeping wife. ishita was fast asleep and he planted a kiss on her rosy glowing cheeks. to be continued..
Part 2 on page 2
Part 3 on page 4
Part 4 on page 5
Part 5 on page 6
Part 6 on page 8
Part 7 on page 8
Part 8 on page 10
Part 9 on page 12
Part 10 on page 12
Part 11 on page 14
Part 12 on page 16
Part 13 on page 18
Part 14 on page 19
Part 15 on page 22
Part 16 on page 24
Part 17 on page 25
Part 18 on page 27
Part 19 on page 29
Part 20 on page 31
Part 21 on page 36
Part 22 on page 38
Part 23 on page 40
Part 24 on page 42
Part 25 on page 44

part 26 on page 46
Part 27 on page 49
Part 28 on page 51
Part 29 on page 54
Part 30 on page 55
Part 31 on page 57
Part 32 on page 59
Part 33 on page 61
Part 34 on page 64
Part 35 on page 67
Part 36 on page 69
Part 37 on page 71
Part 38 on page 72
Part 39 on page 75
Part 40 on page 79
Part 41 on page 83
Part 42 on page 87
Part 43 on page 92
Part 44 on page 96
Part 45 on page 101
Part 46 on page 106
Part 47 on page 108
Part 48 on page 113
Part 49 on page 116
Part 50 on page 118
Part 51 on page 122
Part 52 on page 125
Part 53 on page 128
Part 54 on page 130
Part 55 on page 132
Part 56 on page 136
Part 57 on page 139

Part 58 on page 143
Part 59 on page 146
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats dr for ur new and first story. it's nice.continue soon.
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Congrats for your first story
It's interesting

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Congrats for ur first story
And it's nice and interesting
But it will be better if u write each person dialogue in different line
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Its so sweet story plz continue soon...
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Thankyou all who replied and liked. Means a lot. Thanks for suggestions.
Here is the 2nd part.
Hope u like it. Sorry for any mistakes with my english lol.
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Raman slept hugging ishita . When he heard a knock on the door. It was around midnight... "bhabhi bhabhi" he heard neelu calling..
Why is this dumb neelu trying to wake up ishita at this time? Is she mad? Raman thought to himself. He slowly removed ishitas hand from his. He started to climb down from bed when he heard ishita ask "what happened?" " nothing i will see u sleep " said raman. He got up and opened the door and ruhi ran past him inside calling "ishima" . "Ruhi saw a bad dream and she wanted ishita bhabhi" said neelu.
. Ishita pulled herself up and sat up "come here my bachcha" she told ruhi extending her arms.
Raman saw ruhi climbing onto the bed and falling on her ishitas lap. Just as ishita crinched in pain "ouch" she let out a cry hugging ruhi with one hand and holding her tummy with the other hand. Ruhi acccidently hit her fully pregnant tummy.
"Ishita" ramam rushed to her side and pulled ruhi away from ishitas lap. "R u ok?" " yes yes i am" ishita said trying to control her pain and looking at a frightened ruhi's face.
Raman put his hand on ishitas. "U seems to be in pain" "let me get the family doctor" . " no raman i said i am fine" she saw a tiny tear form in ramans eyes " i am fine" she put his hand on ramans face "dont worry".
Raman turned to ruhi "how many times have i told u to be careful and not to sit on ishimas lap."
Ruhi became sad " i want to sit in ishimas lap".
"No ruhi u come with me" he said pulling ruhi out of the room.
Ishita didnt like the way angry raman taking ruhi away "leave her raman" she said trying to stop him but her tummy was still aching so she couldnt get up.
"Ishima" ruhi screamed.
"I will take u to ur room and put u to sleep" said raman lifting up ruhi in his arms.
But ruhi started shouting. "I want to sleep with ishima"
Ishita was witnessing like a papa daughter war.
Ruhi was ravan kumars daughter.
She is as stubborn as raman.
Ishita knew it.
"Leave her raman. Let her sleep here." She said giving stern look to raman.
Raman couldnt say no. He could be arrogant and refuse anything except keeping ruhi and her ishima away.
If it was not for ruhi and her ishima he wouldnt be a happy man today.
" allright go to ur ishima" he told ruhi putting her down.
Once ruhi fell asleep in ishitas arms, he carried ruhi to the other side of bed so that she wouldnt disturb ishita.
The 3 of them slept peacefully raman in the middle and his 2 angels on either side.
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Early morning ishita got up and took her bath and came out of the bathroom in her bathrobe.
The pain was gone.
She looked over to see ruhi sleeping with her feet on top of raman.
"So cute" she thought...
...
To be continued...
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Awesome Update
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Hi
Nice update

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