ff : DIL KA RISHTA #2: UPDT PART 16 Pg 80 Add 14 June - Page 44

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Posted: 9 years ago
shagun alive??
its a shock..
nd its going to complicate now..

loved Ishra conversation😉
update soon..
bt next emotional hai..😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello my sweeties i know im late for this updt but i did not wanted to do any updt i was feeling disheartened due of lack responds i was about to stop all my works but my sincere readers did not aloud me to do it so im cont .

Please do give me enough responds like my two latest Os which i got more than 100 likes will want to see it here too n thx for that likes due of it im giving you updt as my promise to you all 😃 .


Im giving you a little sypnosis of this Ff

Dil Ka Rishita is a relation from heart which ishra shared since childhood as the best friend ... both parents are good friends n was neighbours ... ishra never needed other friend both was enough for each ever ... raman was more close with iyers n ishita with bhallas ... raman realize his love for ishita when he was away from her ... ishita introduce mani to him as her lover same day which he was about to confess his love ... raman broke down n decide to shift to delhi with his parents ... his love fir ishita never dies but for him ishita happiness come first ... he got married to shagun only for his parents sake n shagun ... he never love he but one day in his drunk he slept with her where she got pregnant ... ishra met again same day he found shagun is pregnant n also about her illness ... he got to know ishita depression state due of this iyers shift to delhi ... ishita too realize her love for raman but did not let him know ... after leaving dargha train explosed mani die due ishita loss her memory ... she think raman is her hubby both get married .


I hope i have been enough clear their relation .

Here we go ignore mistake .


Part 16




It begins in bhalla house after shagun enter in bhallas house as wife of raman friend ... raman ask his parent to show shagun her room ... which toshi did n Om did an excuse to go along with them .


Once they enter in the room ... she hug both n cries ... both cries along with her ... they ask het to forgive them to marry raman ... she told them she dont have any anger but is happy to see raman happiness ... she narrate every thing to them what happen after accident ... toshi told her she will take care of her now ... they ask her to rest n both leave .



In ishra room shravu was playing his toys with raman ... ishita unpack his clothes n found a beautiful red n black silky saree with a backless blouse with only lace n see black trousers with red silky shirt which looks hot which could see his bare chest ... she ask on which occasion for this outfits ... he said their first valentine after their rewedding .


Ishita " Hmm so you have been prepared for valentine too wow im impress ... i was thinking on it n you brought this ... its so pretty i love it thank you " ... with smile on her face .


Raman pull her to him ... he make her sit on his lap n whistle in a romantic way " I dont want this type of thx from you ... you will have to say it in different way ... after all im your hubby right ? at least a kiss is needed come on " ... with his killing smile .





" Raman have some shame shravu is here n you are thinking about romance ... at night you ail get every thing n remember what you said " she blush while she talk to him .


" That the problem with you when ever i talk romance you always have some excuse it ok at night i wont leave you " he did a kiss on he cheek n she leave from there .


Ishita join toshi in the kitchen to prepare food ... toshi pull her leg on teasing her ... after she say sorry to join her in kitchen .. she feel shy the way toshi was teasing her ... when they all sat to have food ... shagun was about to sit next to raman as she used to do before ... shravu look at her with angry look n said mama ... raman got it n said to shagun its ishita place ... she say sorry n move to other chair in sad way ... after ishita sat both feed sharvu then they feed each ever the first bite ... shagun was unable to bear n see ishra closeness n love ... shravu clap his hand after ishra feed each ever ... toshi could feel shagun pain as raman was never been like this with her ... she was sad on shagun place ... ishita notice shagun was not eating she ask her what happen .. she just say nothing n eat .


At night shravu sleep with toshi after raman make him sleep .


Ishita wear a red sexy nighty like raman wanted ... he was shirtless only with his boxer waiting for her on bed ... on seeing her

he could not want n jump to her n start dropping kisses ... all over her bodies ... where both make love with moans pleasure



after making love both talk ... about how it was after two weeks making love ... shagun who was passing there n heard their convo ... she felt awkward on their talk n get teary eyes .. she go in her room ... she cry for never been able be with raman like she feel they were ... she get jealous of ishita ... some one knock at her door ... she wipe her tears n think it could be raman ... she run n open the door ... she was happy to see its raman ... she hug him pull him inside ... start to kiss him all over his face caress him with so much passion n love ... raman did not stop her but kiss her back n hug her on saying ... " I know you must be waiting for me to come to you ... i know you love me ... i know how you must be feeling right now on seeing me with ishita ... but now i will not give you any pain ... i will give you so much love which you too deserve it yes shagun " ... both fall on bed n start doing kiss n make love ... shagun moans on saying " I know you will not leave me alone raman ... i love you more now ... you are my world ... please never leave me i will wait for you every night to make love like this raman please do more give me more pleasure raman " ... she was talking n her door knock ... which broke her imagination n dream of raman she get sad ... but she think now she is sure it him n open the door with smile on face 😃 .


" Ishita you here at this time is every thing ok ? 😔 " with a sad face she ask her .


" Yes every thing is ok raman send here to ask you if you needed some thing let us know " .


She look at her neck n saw love bite there ... she reply no nothing n ask her to go sleep she close the door ... ishita leave .


Next day shagun ask raman if she will take her to doctor ... raman told her ishita will bring her he has lots of work he may join them there ... shagun saw how ishra was doing sign while eating ... this was irritated her n leave the table on saying she is done ...once she enter her room .. she let tears fall with broken heart she was unable to bear more ishra happiness it was giving her lots of pain ... suddenly she hear a voice calling her ... she lift her head n saw her soul .


Sh " Who are you what you want ? " ... she ask her soul .


S " You know well who im i shagun , why you are crying now it all due of your sacrifice if ishra are together right ? ... you were aware of raman being in love with her ... he never love you nor will now ... then why this tears ... it hurt i know but now you dont have any other option than to be happy with his happiness ... you will soon die live happy now " .


Sh " I know it all due of me i was not feeling bad before but now after seeing their closeness im not ready to accept it ... she is in my place ... why raman dont see how pain im right now on seeing him like this with ishita ... im human after all i was his wife before but he never ever been like this to me ... i thought it wont effect me but i was wrong it effect me a lot ... my heart cry a lot ... raman dont even have time for me to sit with me to talk why he is avoiding me " ... she was in tears .


S" What you think raman dont know about your pain or he is avoiding ... he dont want you do get any hope between you n him ... he do care for you but he will never cross his limit as now you are not his wife ... try to control your emotion shagun ... other wise you will ruin every thing around you " .


Sh " Stop giving me lecture n leave me in my condition ... raman you are my love you should give me time too now i will make sure to get your attention ... i want to feel your body you will have to give me love like you give to ishita " ... she was in a glare look .


Same time some one knock at the door .. she said enter n was happy to see raman who came there with food of tray for her ... she was happy to see his concern for her ... she hold his arm n both sit ... raman make her eat on saying ..." Shagun please dont stop eating you need to have strength ... i know you must be feeling weird to see me n ishita so close but try to understand now she is my life my wife which you know well enough right ... i will take care of you but dont think another thing to happen between us i beg of you take care of your self ok " ... he kiss her on her forehead n leave .


Shagun feel bad on thinking wrong on him ... later ishgun went to doctor then raman join them as per plan ... just as the trio will enter in ishita get call n ask shaman to carry on ... doctor examine shagun n check the report ... he ask for her hubby ... she said his dead raman is her friend ... doctor told her she need to take care n stay happy ... raman hold her hand to assure her every thing is fine ... ishita enter n saw him hold her hand n both smile ... doctor told him he should take her care ... just as raman was about to ans ishita ans from back .. on saying " Dont worry doctor i will take care of her ... im raman wife " ... raman leave shagun hand which ishita seen ... they leave raman drop them home ... he ask ishita to stay he need to talk to her .

" Ishita i know you may thinking why i hold shagun hand ... it was just to assure her she was not alone ... nothing else please dont get angry hmm " ... he kiss his hand with love .


" Raman did i ask you any explanation han ... i know you are not doing any thing wrong ... i do trust you dont worry im ok i know my love will never betray me ... hmm thx for this kiss but i think if you " ... he kiss her on her mouth without let her talk more ... shagun saw them kiss she crush flower which was there n leave with tears .


At night after dinner raman take ishita sharvu n shagun they went for ice cream ... raman feed shravu ishita feed raman both share one ice cream ...forgetting shagun was there both talk in their romance style ... shagun feel how out sider she was raman dont even ask how ice cream was ... she could not bear more she act as having pain in her stomah ... raman take care of her on asking what happen n they return home on holding her ... shravu did not like to see his papa holding other woman than his mum ... he hit raman on saying bad papa ... ishita knew shravu habit n smile too ... raman ask toshi to handle shagun n he went to check on shravu as he was crying ... raman talk like baby to sharvu he hold his ears n say sorry papa leave sharvu n hold shagun aunty ... but papa love mama n shravu a lots ... shravu hug him n kiss him ... ishita smile on seeing the bond between both ... she too join the hug n say .. " Ravan kumar see i have my soldier to fight with you if you will do wrong with me right shravu " ... he show him punch n hit lightly to raman ... raman act as he fall n get hurt ... sharvu hold his ears n tears fall from eyes ... which make raman melt on seeing shravu how he could not bear to see him in pain he hug him tightly n kiss him ... n said papa is fine see .


Next day pass well ishita take shagun care ... shagun want to see raman n to be with him alone which raman was not giving her any chance to touch her or be alone with her ... toshi n om realize shagun may create problem in ishra life they call iyers n ask them to take shagun at there place .. which they accept ... next day madhu n vishwa came other there n while talking they told raman to let shagun stay with them ... raman accept as he too feel his married life will may be in trouble as shagun starting want him close to her ... ishita start to feel every thing strange n want to know more about shagun past life ... shagun was not happy to be far from raman her love become possessive now she want to get him at any cost .


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THAT ALL FOR PART 16 PLEASE DO LET ME KNOW HOW IT WAS N WANT TO GET MORE THAN 100 LIKES 😃.

THEN I WLL DECIDE IF I SHOULD UPDT DOOSRA JANAAM OR NOT .


NEXT : ISHITA FOUND SHAMAN WED PIC


THX
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HANSA 😃

Edited by --HANSA-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Unresed...
Awesome update...
Shravu z soo cute...
He dont like when his papa give attention to shagun aunty...
& raman & shravu bond z soo loving...
I thought shagun to b positive...
But wat to do she z turning negetive...
Precap z really scary..
Waiting to see ishita's reaction...
Update soon..
Edited by fSharm - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sk-Sharmin

shagun alive??
its a shock..
nd its going to complicate now..

loved Ishra conversation😉
update soon..
bt next emotional hai..😲


THANK YOU FOR COMMENT
ishrasoul thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shagun will bring Strom in ishra happy life..
Precap is scary
Living shravu cute antics..
Update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ishrasoul

Shagun will bring Strom in ishra happy life..

Precap is scary
Living shravu cute antics..
Update asap


thank you for comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
Well just now only I have started reading ur works..
They r really good👍🏼
This story I should read from the first to know it's plot
Hope u don't mind me commenting late regarding this work😊
Thank u for d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb
Update Soon
Thanks 4 The PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
So Shagun is turning possessive about Raman. IshRa are so romantic. Sharavu OMG that baby doesn't like Shagun taking their places, 1st chair and next when they were eating ice cream and Shagun drew Raman's attention and he was supporting her.
Sr. Bhallas felt that Shagun might be a problem.

Waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update di
Sharvu's antics are too good
Precap is...scary
Continue soon

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